Super Card System

One of the best and most successful novels among One Piece fan novels. No refutation will be accepted!

After finishing the poison test and basically reading it, let me know what you think. The early stages of this book are pretty good, and the systematic introduction is pretty good. In the middle period, Blackbeard was a little bit poisonous as a shit stirrer (anime bias??). In the later period, it is the author's original creation and no comments will be made. The financial framework of the book is confusing. Buying a newspaper in the early stage costs dozens of beli, but the protagonist, the teacher, saves 20,000 yuan after saving for several years? ? (I feel sorry for Soda, I guess he will have no money in his pocket when he goes to sea) In addition, I haven't followed the One Piece anime for more than a year, but I think no matter how good your protagonist is, you can't just make tens or hundreds of billions of money. The direct result of this is that the system will directly collapse, and the author will give the protagonist whatever he wants. The rest was okay, he got stabbed in the back a few times by Oda but it was harmless. Some plot advancements are rather blunt. But considering that One Piece fan fiction is inherently difficult to write, these small problems can be ignored. It can be said to be a good pirate fanfic😁

I came to read this book because many people say that this book is the pinnacle of One Piece fan fiction. I am also a fan of One Piece, but I really couldn't finish this novel. How can I put it, writing a Pirates fan fiction is indeed difficult, but there is really no need for the author to lose himself because the original work is a shounen manga. I understand what pirates should have, for example, in Nami's episode, no one left any money or money, and there was nothing except taking up Luffy's role. Also, the pirates drawn by Oda had no specific emotional scenes, and the author did not write emotional scenes but married three female protagonists. I really couldn't afford to finish it. Of course, some people may say that if you are so arrogant, why don't you write it? I am just a spectator. This book has been finished for a long time, and I just express my pity for the Pirates fan works.

This book has been completed. It is excellent. Readers who have not read it yet and are waiting to read the book reviews, please feel free to eat it. It is non-toxic and non-polluting, but the chapter reviews are a bit gay 😃

The best One Piece fan fiction I've ever read, top it

According to my personal feeling, this is a rare good book among anime fans (of course it may be that I haven't read it enough). Lao Yao is really a foreshadowing maniac (quietly beeping). The content of the book is quite good, and the description and portrayal of big scenes are good, but the emotional description is not very good. I hope Lao Yao can learn from some descriptions by other authors (I've washed the hell out of the news for you 🤓) to tell newcomers that although Lao Yao is in need of daily updates and never wears women's clothing,... But what the hell! I won't say any more, I hope new readers can fulfill the old demon's one million wishes as soon as possible Finally, the ending is full of flowers🌸✊ Also: Momonosuke is dead, Momonosuke is dead, Momonosuke is dead, say important things three times!

It's really childish and I can't stand it.

I just watched a few. A little bit toxic, but not a big problem. For example, the protagonist forcibly leaks something when facing a plot character. Then I watched a dozen more pictures and was immediately fed a wave of shit. I couldn't understand it, so the author even posted a single chapter himself, saying that he couldn't write short stories now. I'm really speechless. Didn't I know how to count everything I wrote? You said this book is not a novice? Maybe it's just a little bit better than pure novice writing. Hehe

Ouranos, the king of heaven, was blinded several times 😅 and he lost one of his eyes when he came out. After that, Ace blew up one of them, and later it was said that the protagonist destroyed one. Kaido destroyed one 🤔, so how many eyes does it have? ? ?

Momonosuke is dead! Momonosuke is dead! Momonosuke is dead! Say important things three times! ! !

Did I read a fake book? Why are they all trolls now? . . Back then, everyone was very happy chasing after me. I don't know where there are so many trainees talking about me all day long. Back then, One Piece was slow to update, and the author's reasoning for the ending surprised me, a Pirates fan, to be honest. It really felt reasonable! It can be said that the author must have spent a lot of time studying comics, which makes me agree with him from the bottom of my heart! Although Oda didn't draw it like this, I think it's better to draw it like the author 😁

I have been reading this book for fifteen years, and this one is considered a masterpiece among fan fictions. Don't be too picky, there is nothing poisonous about it. Worth reading for new book lovers.

The old demon has been reading novels, and he hasn't opened a new book yet.

It's really outrageous, Bucky really became the Four Emperors, this book is simply a prophecy 😓😏

It's strange. This book is perfect in my memory. Has it been too long? I have no impression of the many poisonous points mentioned in the comment section. Is it really because too much time has passed and my memory has blurred to beautify it?

I've read about two hundred chapters and can't stand it anymore. The system text is okay in the early stage, and the system appearance rate is still high, but then it slowly disappears, and the plot is too weak to be powerful! In the card-drawing system, when I first went to sea, I caught pirates to collect bounties, and then I found that my strength increased a bit quickly, so I created various enemies. The protagonist provoked enemies for no reason, and then the protagonist was hunted down in various ways, and then I couldn't make money to improve my strength! You can also level up by killing pirates, and then let go after being injured, and you will lose more than half of your experience! In the early stage, my IQ was normal, I would catch pirates and develop them, and then my IQ suddenly dropped!

So many people praise this book, but when I really read it, the first twenty chapters almost poisoned me to death. The plot was so forced that it really made me want to vomit.

I reached around chapter 350... I can't stand it any longer... The way it creates difficulties without any difficulty makes me really speechless... The protagonist can defeat Kizaru around chapter 200, and then he can beat Kroc even after 3 chapters... The power system makes you write a mess by yourself... I can't read it.

It's pretty good. It's a bit of a novice. It's originally a great article. There are a lot of comments in the comment section. I'm speechless. I read this novel a long time ago. At that time, One Piece had not yet arrived in Wano. The author filled in a lot of holes with his own imagination. Anyway, it is quite interesting.

First of all, if this book is not well written, it is not good. The protagonists, various virgins, are morally kidnapped, and the benefits they get are thrown away, and the ducks in their mouths fly away. People who read it feel disgusted and aggrieved Next, I will tell you about the pitfalls. First of all, some small pitfalls are that this kind of author always likes to put The protagonist of the time-travel is described as a cloud, just like the person in the original book. He is in the mountain and doesn't know what the mountain is like. You are a person outside the mountain and you know the whole mountain. If you pretend not to know or say that you don't know, that is outrageous, but this is not the most poisonous thing. The most vicious thing is that the protagonist fights pirates in the town. The navy does not dare to join the protagonist to fight against the pirates because of the disparity in numbers. At most, he has a helper, Ace. This is originally a good plot. Because the protagonist is an ordinary person and has never killed anyone before, so when dealing with pirates, he does not use assassins and only wounds at most. This is a bit like Batman's no-kill principle, but the author cleverly uses two more loyal people as his This turning point aroused the anger of the protagonist and led him to start killing. This was originally well written, but the navy's support came and made the protagonist lose money. From here, it is difficult for me to understand what kind of thinking the author used to write this plot. It seems that a good person should be pointed at a gun. Then the protagonist chose to be an instructor for a month for other reasons, and it was okay here, and then this month's instructor was fast. It's over. The protagonist wants to make use of the navy, so he takes a group of naval soldiers to destroy the pirates. This part starts to disgust people again. After the pirates are eliminated, the pirates' stolen money begins to diverge. Normally, the protagonist relies on the protagonist to deal with the pirates. The money should be taken by the protagonist, and anyone who has read this book knows that the protagonist wants to improve his abilities and money. There is an inseparable relationship, that is to say, as long as the protagonist is given enough With enough money, the protagonist can become invincible, and then the protagonist gives away tens of millions. This is when he is one of the poorest. Even if you say that you will give away part, 1/3, or even half, I will not say anything. If you make such a big effort, at least get some money for yourself, but in the end, you will get the reward money, and then you will not take any of the stolen money from the pirates. Yes, yes, you are the Great Sage. You disgust me so much, why don't I just look at it? At this time, someone said, this is a book from 2016. To be honest, I can tell what year this book is from, so it is normal to say that it does not look good in the back. People who say this are also quite disgusting. Why, there were no good books before 2016, and books written before 16 years ago do not look good now? It is good-looking in itself, and others are good-looking, and if it is not good-looking, it is not good-looking. If you look at the four major classics, you can read them with gusto even now. If you look at the books in various circles, the books from a few years ago are still very popular. I will give you two examples. One is called The Super God Mechanic. This book is more famous. I think many people have heard of it. Go and read the books from a few years ago, and then look at what you read now. Is it better than other books in the same genre? Another example is called Thriller Paradise. Look at what year the book was written, and see how beautiful and exciting the books written by the authors of that era were? Is a book only good or bad because of its age? Is it because that period of time makes a book unreadable? Maybe, but this book definitely isn't

This book can be ranked in the top ten among pirate fan fiction. It is a rare good book. Those who are always nitpicking should stop it.

Are the requirements for books written in 2016 so high? How many years have passed since now? The times are constantly improving. A modern young man is holding a touch-screen mobile phone and pointing at the flip phone of the 1989s. The shortcomings are clearly stated. The shortcomings you mentioned are certainly correct and reasonable, but for people of that era, this was the best. Are you pointing at it? I only see arrogance.

This book is one of my favorite pirate fanfics. Although new readers often say that this book is poisonous and has a low IQ. But after reading the original work, I know that the style of this book really has the flavor of the original work. If you can accept this style, then this book will be one of the best fanfics. Some people like realistic style fans, but they can't use this to disparage original style fans, right? For example, at the beginning, someone complained about why the protagonist said to wait a moment, but Bucky really waited, and he was not a pirate at all. But, isn't this Bucky's style? This is not a pirate, but I hate the Pirate King. However, it can be seen from the post at the beginning when Zoro first enters the dojo that there are really many One Piece fan readers who have not read the original One Piece 😰

This kind of harem novel is so disrespectful to women and does not consider the perceptions of female readers at all.

Can anyone recommend some good-looking, decisive One Piece fan fiction? Thank you.

Please read the date of this book before you read it without thinking. A book written in 16 years will lead to law enforcement across time and space 8 years later, right?

It's a short article. I haven't seen the overall story without discussing it, but just by looking at the beginning, you can clearly feel that the writing style is very ordinary, and the description is also very straightforward. Basically, all explanations rely on the author's direct description instead of using literary techniques to let the readers experience it for themselves, so it is particularly long-winded. You can read it if you save it in your brain. If you can't save it, don't waste your time, and don't demand too much from the author. After all, improving writing skills is not an easy thing.

There are so many time and space trolls at Qidian now. It's really cool to troll a book that's only 16 years old with your current opinions.

I don't know what a group of people are complaining about, but it is right to express their opinions. But is spraying necessary? Seems even more clueless.

This book was the first one I read after reading online articles. Now I come back to reflect on it and find out why there are so many trolls😅 The 16-year-old book is almost 10 years old now. The style and routine must be somewhat outdated. What is there to complain about? Oda himself has so many holes to fill in. It is great that the author could write like this nine years ago, okay?