The Gate to the Afterlife

Isn't the introduction about time travel Naruto? There is no sense of being a time traveler at all. Absolutely indigenous. . The sense of immersion is instantly reduced. So the results are not as good as the previous work

Don't write about the spiritual power of middle-term chuunin. There are various kinds of diaphragms.

After reading Chapter 11, apart from the many useless pig feet, has anything else changed?

At the end of this book, I was really depressed. Can Kakashi be resurrected?

After reading it, I just want to say thank you. I am very happy to read this book. Although it may not be the best, or even unfinished, it is indeed the most special one among the dozens of fan fictions I have read. It left a deep impression on me. Finally, I would like to say a big cheers to the author.

Isn't this cover Tsurumaru Kunaga from Touken Ranbu? ? ? ?

There is absolutely no comparison between this and the previous one!

After reading the chapter names, Naruto becomes popular🔥. Don't put other things in it. This is the last thing you want to read.

The opening chapter was okay, but why did he suddenly go to another world? It looked so boring (~_~;), so I ran away

From the beginning to the end, it took several months. Watching it grow from a sapling to a big tree, the early stage was good, but towards the end, the wife may have become confused, and the more she wrote, the weaker she became, until it was unfinished. I also write novels, and I clearly understand the frustration of suddenly discovering that the writing is crooked. This also shows that my wife's writing skills cannot control the plot well. Take a break, and then bring us better works and a better version of you, whether it's fan fiction or original work, just live up to your original intention!