My Naruto Journey

Seriously nonsensical nonsense? Minato already had Sakura when he was just starting school? My god, even if the author's timeline is messed up, at least have some sense of what's going on!

I just saw a lot of guys who came back from Konoha in the book review section. They talked about it so much that they completely convinced me, someone who has never been to Konoha. But you don't know this, do you? I just came back from Laugh Tale. Would any of you like to hear about my experience?

It's one thing for ancient Chinese Qi cultivation techniques to become martial arts techniques, but tell me, where did the techniques go? Why is it still the Eight Gates Formation? Even if basic martial arts techniques are for physical training or developing internal energy, the basic techniques for Qi cultivators should be for developing true Qi, right? Okay, so permanently opening all eight gates? You're really something else.

I just want to say this: the Uchiha clan, a powerful and wealthy family, has its own gathering place. How could it possibly have any connection with the protagonist's cheap rented apartment? Also, how could a few songs attract a young girl? Your protagonist's intelligence aura is just too powerful.

As for the protagonist creating the Rasengan ahead of time, well, since he transmigrated, that's one thing. But for everyone else to learn it so quickly? Hah, if they were that studious, there wouldn't only be a few people who could learn it in the original story. The ugliest part is Danzo's part.

Even within the realm of fanfiction, this book is renowned for its addictive quality.

How did the protagonist offend Kurisu? Just because he had a meal with Mikoto? I'm totally confused after reading chapter seventeen. Dai is a ninja, after all, why is he kneeling and begging for 500 ryo? I could tolerate that, but how old is the protagonist this year? What right does he have to offend Kurisu? She probably wouldn't even give him a second glance.

I think the author shouldn't write scenes where the protagonist always arrives just when his comrades are about to be killed. This kind of trope is fun occasionally, but if it happens too often, it becomes tiresome and feels pointless.

The protagonist is plagiarizing the Rasengan again. However, given Sasuke's talent, even a C-rank Fireball Jutsu would take him ages to learn. Where does the protagonist get the confidence to plagiarize an A-rank Rasengan?

That's way too exaggerated. A 6-year-old... Can summon a giant summoning beast?! At least make it logical! Wait until they're 12-16 years old. A 6-year-old's body isn't fully developed yet.