Konoha Ink Traces

All the previous books have been ordered, and the rest are fine. If this one still clears Obito's ground, then he has really given up. The girl he hadn't caught up with yet died, so he said it was the whole world's fault? ! What bullshit logic. Forgot in the blink of an eye

The author's setting of Mo Dun is water attribute + yang attribute, which is very inappropriate. It is strongly recommended to change it to water + yin. Yang escape is related to vitality, and Yin escape is related to spiritual power. The core of void creation is Yin escape, and Uchiha's Susanoo is the embodiment of Yin escape. Ninjas who are good at yang escape all have strong and healthy bodies and a lot of chakra. The original Sai doesn't look like he has yang escape. Therefore, it is strongly recommended that the author modify the set attribute combination of Mo Dun as soon as possible.

I discovered a problem. I read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and it seems like Sai has never appeared! ! ! I'm confused

I'm bored, so I'll post a post. The best thing is to make more updates, just keep doing it. The protagonist, Mo Feng, leaves traces of ink; The almighty ninja, enters the world with ink; The ink knife and ink arrows cut off the flow of ink; The Great Wall of Moxia, can be used for defense; Wukong Zhurong, super god fake painting; The blood ink clone, focusing on blood inheritance.

Download a Naruto mobile game yourself, and then click on the name of your character, and randomly name the one next to it. They are all Naruto-style names, just use them.

It is recommended that the author not deliberately rely on the "original plot"! It feels like from the beginning of the Nine-Tails Rebellion, the story has become very deliberate, everything is to rely on the story of Naruto. Although the protagonist is also jumping up and down to gain a sense of presence, it is useless in the end. Everything will return to the storyline "story plot". So your protagonist is such a powerful person and is registered in all major ninja villages, so it will not affect anything? It is recommended that the author put down the story of Naruto anime and try to write your own story. For example, the long paragraph "Before the plot begins" is very good. There is really no need to go back!

It's a pity. I originally thought that the angle of "super beast fake painting" is quite novel and there should be a lot of room for development, but the author's writing style is not good and the plot is not reasonable. The first time I went on a mission, when I was still at a disadvantage, for the so-called "Water Comprehension", I beat my opponent's water escape move, and then I really understood it... Let's not talk about whether I can comprehend it, even if your setting is "Physical Sharingan", but would a normal person try it in this situation? Obviously a few minutes ago, I was so frightened by Water Release that I couldn't move, leading to a crisis... Isn't it allowed to say bad things in book reviews now? Why is it that even the slightest criticism is not allowed to pass the review?

Three years older than Obito, Cousin Saai A very nice Naruto fanfic, probably because the author has too high demands on himself, and it was good when he relaxed in the middle of writing. The plot is smooth and the description is profound! The only shortcoming is that the language in the early stage is a bit ignorant, which makes people feel that they are not in the state. This book gets better and better as I read it. The improvement is obvious after a hundred chapters. Is it because of the free chapters? Or has the author made progress? 😜 As expected in the comments, it looks good but not too popular. Maybe the introduction is weak at the beginning.

I feel like the author has some issues with the timeline in the first few chapters. Namikaze Minato saved Kushina during World War II. World War II was the longest and most critical war. It is wrong to say that the three wars were imminent in Chapter 6. The specific timeline is during the war between the two countries of Fire and Wind, the end of the war in the Land of Rain, Jiraiya's return, and then the encounter between Namikaze Minato and Kushina. The author's timeline is a big problem. Although it does not affect the reading, it is really hard to object to me, a fan of the original Barbell novel. I know it's not easy to write a book, but I still want to say it. I hope everyone will comment lightly.

I haven't seen the published chapter yet, I just read it a while ago. They were all very good. I didn't watch it later because Orochimaru seemed to have said something about the film-level potential. I remember correctly. Seeing this, I was so embarrassed that the Hokage made it clear that the classification was divided into three levels: upper, middle and lower, and then selected the best one to be the Kage. Isn't our so-called shadow level just based on how many points we have? There is no such thing in the Naruto world