Naruto: the Lost Clan

The author just gave Naruto's mouth to the protagonist, took away the work that Naruto had to do, talked about a bunch of self-righteous truths, and pretended to be cool. In the end, the plot remained unchanged. You deserve to live, and you deserve to die. What's the point? Chapter 366 also imposes sanctions on Naruto's so-called justice? I want to say, who is the protagonist? Author, you made the protagonist a bitch! It's acceptable to have a child, but why do we need to erect an archway? If you write fan fiction, please try not to criticize the original characters!

It's very poisonous in the early stage, but it's very poisonous in the later stage. . . . I don't know, because I was poisoned in the early stage. I hope someone can tell me how it went in the later stage.

Author, what you write is okay. It's my favorite type. But the plot is draggy and the progress is too slow.

Lao Na's magical ability to resist poison. Already read the entire book. Come and worship me 😁😁😁😁😁😁But I really want to say something, this book is the most damn annoying one I have ever read. Not one.

Is it pointless to write about the Uzumaki clan? Which Uzumaki clan do you think took the initiative to go to Konoha? Nagato's parents were killed by Konoha! Xiang Ling's mother was slowly bitten to death without leaving Konoha! There was also a person studying super psychic beasts who didn't go either! The last zero-tailed person didn't even go to the pillar! It is conceivable that the Uzumaki clan definitely played a disgraceful role in annihilating Konoha!

It's very poisonous. I know why the surviving Uzumaki clan members would rather go to other countries than come to the Country of Fire. It's because Konoha stood idly by when Uzushio Village was invaded by other countries. Thinking about the establishment of Konoha, the Uzumaki clan has put in a lot of effort. The most direct one is the seal of the tailed beast. There is no sealing technique of the Uzumaki clan to capture a ghost-tailed beast. So I personally despise the behavior of the protagonist. It would be better if this person was not the protagonist, because he is the protagonist and I cannot accept that the protagonist is so spineless.

Read dozens of chapters! I really can't stand it anymore! Before the protagonist started training, Danzo was eyeing him and wanted his bloodline! Then, Danzo began to press him in various ways, and the protagonist resisted in various ways, which was very depressing! I don't understand. The protagonist is not the only one in the Uzumaki clan. As long as you search carefully, you can still find several of them. For example, Xiang Ling appears later. Is it necessary for Danzo to keep an eye on the protagonist?

If you are so vicious that you forcefully confront Danzo, I don't understand what you, a Uzumaki Danzo, see in you? Are you kidding me when you insist on fusion? Uzumaki and Sharingan and Hashirama cell ratio? You're probably watching a fake Hokage!

After reading Chapter 59, I really couldn't hold it any longer. I originally expected the protagonist to become darker, but I always felt that the author had to make the protagonist become a young man. If the author has time, he can revise the previous ones (the most unbearable thing is that you didn't even graduate from ninja school, you are such a rebel! The third generation is like a blind man, I won't say anything more.)

It was written that a thief violated peace and was targeted by Danzo when he entered Konoha. I tolerated this, but when I went to the Hokage building to find the third generation, the ANBU didn't know about such a big movement? And the author would like you to distinguish the ANBU from the ROOT, one is the ROOT and the other is the ANBU. Okay, I agree with this, but the damn people have done their damnedest and are still staying in Konoha. Besides, in the Hokage, what kind of shameful things are not caused by the Third Generation, Danzo and a few old guys? As for these old things, I thought they should be damned, so forget it and stop watching them. Goodbye you old.

The Third Hokage is really terrible, the Senju is gone, the Uchiha is gone, and the Kingdom of Whirlpool is gone. Haha, let the world feel the pain!

The Third Generation and Danzo managed the Leaf Village to appear peaceful.

I started following this book before the author took the college entrance examination (it was the college entrance examination, I don't remember). I always thought it was very well written. The author has his own opinions whether it is from various aspects of logic or other things. This book is very comfortable to read. There are many plots that I have experienced before. For example, Tomoki slapped Naruto and said that he chased Sasuke at all costs because of Sakura's words. It makes people feel the same way. I really feel that Naruto in the original book is really stupid. Actually, after saying so much, I just want to tell the author, don't give up and keep writing. We readers who like the books you write will always accompany you! 😁

If you look at this introduction, you will know that the author is a Hokage novice. Remember, the strongest Hokage clan is Otsutsuki, and the rest are just scum.

The reason why the protagonist goes to the wood industry is different. You wrote that it would be better to save the Uzumaki ninja village when it was destroyed. When the Uzumaki clan's ninja village was destroyed, the Konoha ninjas went there. It is a bit unrealistic for this stranger to enter Konoha just because he is from the Uzumaki clan! At first glance, you will think it is a spy!

No wonder his pen name is King Yelang. Yelang is arrogant and is also the king among them.

I just started reading it and have only read a few chapters. It is quite toxic. My advice to the author is that you can cheat, but this cheat cannot turn everyone in the world into fools and imbeciles!

After reading one chapter, I deleted all the books on my bookshelf. This book insulted my bookshelf and stained my eyes.

Why! Another author who only knows the plot! Until now, I am still wandering around Konoha Village. I haven't seen you looking for your own clan members. If your clan members don't look for you, forget about it. But dear mother, you don't ask. In the past, you could forget about Konoye Village. But now that the protagonist has come out, you don't even want to look for him! The story written in the early stage about how kind your mother is to you actually highlights the coldness of the protagonist! Do we have to have four battles?

Wouldn't it be great if the amount of chakra is forcibly weakened and it's not a whirlpool? There are so many things like Kaguya genocide and so on.

After drinking two bottles of paraquat and dichlorvos, compared with this book, I just drank a bottle of boiled water.

Chapter 143 is available in the monthly pass. Chapter 2 is more than 700 chapters. More than one million words. You should understand something after seeing these.

All blood succession limited families should be branches of the Otsutsuki clan. The first one to have chakra on the Hokage continent is Kaguya. The source of chakra is the fruit of the sacred tree. The sacred tree was planted by the Tao family. Therefore, the strongest clan in Okage is the Otsutsuki clan. However, I feel that there are too few Otsutsuki clan in Naruto. If there are really only four or five, it should not be called the strongest clan. The power of a family is not personal, but collective. Let's see what happens later in Bo Xiaozhuan. If there are as many decimals as some big families in Naruto Continent, then the first family will be worthy of its name.

Everyone says it's poisonous, but I want to see it😎😎

It took me a while to finish reading this book. To be honest, this book is definitely top-notch among Naruto fans. However, considering the level of readers of Naruto fan fiction, perhaps small-text novels are more popular. If you want to write something meaningful and in-depth, and still be liked by these readers, you must reach a high level of "appreciation for both refined and popular tastes". The author's level is obviously not enough, the writing style is not mature enough, the description method is single, and the literary quality is less. Even so, the author's historical background, understanding of the world, and understanding of people still make this book so unique among the numerous fan fictions everywhere. After referring to the current general level of Naruto fandom, I still recommend reading this article. As for the so-called "poison" in the comment area, it is just an exaggeration. A few flaws are normal. This book is one of the few that can justify itself and write a complete ending after major changes to the content after Shippuden. It is the only book I have read that truly discusses in depth the core theme of Naruto: how to bring peace to the ninja world. The protagonist finally gives the answer to this theme, and also impresses the ninja world with a real revolution and brings real change. Of course, the author's point of view is still relatively naive. It is impossible for a class to defeat itself unless it knows that it will perish soon. History cannot move forward by leaps and bounds. One generation can only do one thing. The rush of the final ending also shows the author's lack of writing power. Even if the outline is excellent, the point of view is clear, and the intention is high enough, it is divorced from the original plot line and has to completely construct the plot and world by oneself. This is the biggest challenge for online writers. If you build it slowly with millions of words, the final ending will be easy. However, the biggest difficulty in fan works is here. You are using someone else's world, and you suddenly jump out. There are a lot of details that you need to describe. This is too difficult. Only then do you realize that you are not strong enough. Frankly speaking, the author's knowledge and writing skills are indeed outstanding among high school students, but for this bloody sea of ​​​​internet writers, it is far from enough. I hope you can take this as a hobby! Finally, four monthly passes are presented

Your Uzumaki clan lacks chakra?

I can guess how poisonous this novel is by reading the introduction.

You might as well write about hanging out with Orochimaru. There are Orochimaru in Konoha and Orochimaru that Konoha doesn't have. Orochimaru still has them. The timeline should be written when Orochimaru just escaped.

Konoha has destroyed itself and yet it is still here

The system flows out of the system. . . When the protagonist was crippled, I thought there was a system to save the world, but it turned out not to be? ? ? I couldn't read anymore at the moment.