The Divine Book Era

The author portrays the protagonist as himself, expressing hatred for societal injustice and the darkness of the world—all sentimental musings—while maintaining an inflated sense of self-importance, believing everyone else is foolish and he is the only wise one. He's only just entered the early stages of cultivation and is already worried about the extinction of humanity. It's incredibly self-pitying.

The Demon Emperor, a figure who had lived through several eras, was easily defeated by Liu Xiu, a mere fish-dragon transformed into an insignificant figure. That's a bit of an exaggeration; even fighting a boss beyond one's level is impossible.

🥺Liu Xiu had the biggest flaw of a scholar: being all talk and no action. He lacked real ability and loved to show off his wisdom. Wasn't he just asking for death? If he weren't the protagonist, he probably would have died hundreds of times over. Maintaining a childlike heart is the hardest thing in a person's life.

Um, chapters 10, 11, and 12 have inconsistent character traits. I suspected it was ghostwritten, but later on it doesn't seem like it. Could someone please explain?

That's too high-minded. Your father is suffering from hidden injuries, your family is poor, you have cement, and you actually choose to help the world, relieve the whole village of their labor, and ask for nothing else. Shouldn't improving your family's situation be your top priority?

The writing is too unrealistic. So what if the protagonist merges his three bodies and wipes out all the immortals? Does he really think the Dark Jungle Law is just a joke? The protagonist is probably based on the author's own writing. Although he has a compassionate heart, is it okay to let all living beings suffer endlessly in the cycle of reincarnation?

I genuinely hate writing about gunpowder in ancient times. If you were to write about gunpowder in ancient times, you'd be unbeatable; it's pointless.

Now I finally know why my grades are so bad.

I don't want to read the book; I just want to know how 1.5 Million words were written down to over 700 chapters.

I couldn't continue reading after the third chapter. The protagonist is utterly trash. He's a reborn person, but his IQ is basically at the level of a child. I'm totally addicted.