Creating the Empress Wa

The subject matter is quite good. I haven't read a prehistoric novel for a long time. I thought this book was quite good because the setting was quite interesting, but I felt that Pig's Knuckle was a big failure. . . . . First of all, I didn't know my identity clearly from the beginning. It's like I stayed in the tribe for 16 years and didn't know anything about myself. Then I originally left the tribe, but ended up in seclusion outside for 3 years and then ran back. . . . When you don't take yourself seriously, you take yourself too seriously. You are not prepared at all when you go to other worlds to experience. You clearly think that you are a hero who mainly adds blood, but you end up treating yourself as a berserker, traveling to the West to see, and to see the ancient world. . . . . The author actually doesn't have an outline. . . In short, I just feel that the plot is very confusing, and the protagonist has always been just an ordinary person. He is afraid of this and that, and cares about that. . . . Even if you haven't watched The Ancient Times for a long time, you know that the state of mind of cultivating Taoism is very important. First of all, Bai Mei will write you 250. Knowing that the person destined by the Supreme Being has been intercepted, he still rushes to kill and ridicule him. I have never seen Shushan in Huanzhu Louzhu. . . How many years have you been practicing Taoism? . . Are there so 2? And the part about destroying the sky. . . Even more speechless, there is inconsistency and forced cause and effect. I just wrote wherever I thought. This is it. . . . . In fact, the protagonist is the Madonna Xiaobai version of Long Aotian, right? . . . . . . Okay, I admit that what I said here is a bit rushed, but when I first saw the subject matter, I really felt that it was very good, and the setting of the world was not bad, but after watching it, I just felt all kinds of weird. . . I hope the author can write better and better, but I can only keep this book on my bookshelf. . . .

After reading the book review section, I want to say that when reading the book, please do not bring over the settings of other books. What kind of mood should the protagonist have, what kind of strength should the protagonist's pet have, and what kind of routine should the protagonist's growth have? These are what the author should consider. The cultivation of gods and immortals are different. Whatever the author sets, it is fine. If the author's settings are incomplete, you can completely do it yourself. I'm just brainstorming, of course, based on the author's setting, and maybe it can help the author improve the setting. For other things, I personally feel that adding some routines will not violate the book, and other things will destroy the setting of the book. I came to the novel because it is an easy novel. Anyway, I don't feel that it will bother me when I read it. I hope the author will not add a certain paragraph that suppresses first and then increases.

Pig's Foot has such a disgusting personality, she's so holy. She's been beaten to the door of her house many times and ridden on her head so much that she pooped and peed. She's still so weak that she can't treat her well. If she doesn't have the strength, it's okay to say so, but to do this to an ant that can be easily crushed to death means she's mentally incompetent. Born to be a slave.

There is a huge disadvantage in reading this book. I actually thought that the power system of other books was too low, and I was always making small fuss. . . It's really difficult to find water in a vast ocean.

I have a comment: The imagination and main plot design of this book are very good. The key problem is that the author's writing style is not very good. The writing is like a stick figure, the characters are dry, and the supporting characters are basically talking puppets. I can only say that the author still has a lot of room for improvement!

There is a setting in this book that really stood out to me. Emperor Wa created the world, and all his descendants are maintaining it. The hundreds of innate tribes that opened up the wilderness, and the same creation god Hou Yi, had a miserable life, and were even robbed of the orthodox position by the sons of heaven. This aspect of this book is the most comforting to people.

The layers of the world are quite pleasant. Isn't the purpose to highlight how grand and grand the eternal true world is? But looking at the author's power system settings, it's hard to tell what's so great about it. Can it open up a world?

The author is a woman, I guess. I feel so gay in the main world.

I want to say what I'm writing about, and I'll write about it here and there. There is no purpose at all. It feels boring to watch, without any passion. Everything else seems fine, and the settings are okay. There is just no main line, no purpose, it feels quite boring, and I don't want to watch it anymore.

Why do I feel that the pet the author wrote about is a bit... Annoying or disgusting to me or some people? To be honest, I really don't like it! Although this is written because I like pets (friends?), Can you not write it too much like this? To me, it doesn't look naughty at all, it's just more... How should I put it? Well, I probably just can't write the feeling of being naughty, and it's even more unpalatable to read than Naughty Evolution.