The Main God’s Competitor

The protagonist has a show, he must be awesome

Just a small comment. . . . Author, when you write about fighting, there are too many "comings", such as coming to attack, charging, and running. . . . . If there are too many N, those who read may be fine, but those who listen are particularly strange. A fighting scene, one sentence after another, feels all kinds of strange and ruins the sense of the picture. . .

The author has little knowledge of history. He only sees the weakness of the Song Dynasty literati in power, but never understands the cruel current situation of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. As the founder of a dynasty, Zhao Kuangyin is not as mentally retarded as you might imagine. Releasing military power over a glass of wine is not just as simple as removing the grindstone and killing the donkey. Improving literati and suppressing military generals is not just as simple as fearing that latecomers will imitate the yellow robe and add themselves. You have to look at the entire environment. During the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms period, warlords were fighting and feudal lords were separatist. Even the nominal imperial courts of the Later Han, Later Tang, and Chaizhou were only relatively powerful and had the same control over local provinces as Jiang did in the Republic of China. They were unable to enforce orders and prohibitions at all. At that time, most of the local leaders were warriors, and they believed that the one with the gun was the king, the emperor, and the man with strong soldiers and horses followed this. The life of ordinary people was fiery, and precariousness was only secondary. If they encountered a violent parent or official, their lives would be in danger at any time. The purpose of releasing military power over a cup of wine is to take back the civil rights from the hands of warriors. But after the rights are taken back, someone needs to enforce them, so only the literati are left. Compared with warriors, literati will still cherish their reputation. Even if they are corrupt, they can manage the country a hundred times better than warriors.

Seeing so many scolds, I felt relieved. After writing for so many years, my grades were so poor. If I didn't think about my own reasons, I would just throw myself into the street.

The author has too many personal things in the book, most of which are fallacies. In short, I just feel good about myself.

This brotherhood is so beautiful that he is willing to die for the eldest brother who has no feelings. Poisonous enough to explode

In the world of reincarnation, all kinds of pretense, emperors and heavenly emperors have done it, but when they return to reality, they have all kinds of s and b. Didn't the author have any ideas in mind? The Emperor of Heaven is a six-star strong man, right? Even though he has lost his cultivation level after returning to reality, his cultivation experience and martial arts realm should still be there. But in the end, he is just feeding the dog, and he still asks the elder brother who only has one star for martial arts advice? Then when I went out to hang out, I was almost beaten to death because I was curious and peeked at other people's luck. I said it was an unreasonable disaster. Haha, I laughed to death again. The author is no longer a novice, so why hasn't he grown up and written such a vicious plot?

I saw the strategies that the protagonist gave to the former Qin emperor. It would take at least several generations of emperors to implement these strategies, and what the hell is the telegram in the middle? You can also take a look at the copy and paste. When I saw the newspaper, I felt like vomiting. I studied modern history and said that newspapers must popularize the vernacular and popularize knowledge to be useful. I think what you are doing by opening a newspaper will strengthen the voice of the local gentry. The author's thinking is too simple. Things that took so long to become useful in modern times are now available to you. Why don't you develop nuclear energy to activate thermal weapons?

Are the authors of Emperor Qin and Emperor Taizong of Tang adding subjective comments here? Is it appropriate? Is it qualified? Only the chairman is qualified to say that he cherishes the emperors of Qin and Han Dynasty, but he is slightly less talented in literature!

If you want to make money, write your novel well. What private stuff should you add? Enjoy yourself, don't complain if you don't make any money!