Swallowed Star: I Am One of the Divine Kingdom Humans

Poisonous Point 1: The protagonist uses the computer to search for things, haha. The protagonist also used the computer to search for information about Chaos, Giant Ax, and the Lord of the Human Universe and the Lord of the Universe, hahahaha. Poison Point 2: Xu Xin entered the apocalyptic secret realm of the Virtual Universe Company through connections. Unable to complain. Poison Point 3: Human souls in the Kingdom of God are incomplete. Human beings in the Kingdom of God are just born with deficiencies and have incomplete souls. Poison Point 4: The protagonist goes to the battlefield outside the territory as soon as he breaks through the realm. The mortality rate on the battlefield outside the territory is over 95%, bastard, who gave you the confidence to survive when you just broke through the realm master? Poison Point 5: In the first chapter, the Lord of the Kingdom of God is called the "Star Army Lord", and in the second chapter, it is said that she is an immortal novice. Military lord and feudal lord are not the same concept, dear. Poison Point 6: The virtual universe is useless to the Realm Lord. Destroy it

If you like fan fiction with an original heroine, and the protagonist is the substitute (meal replacement) of the original heroine Bai Yueguang, you can read it.

You are an old man too, and it's time to make some progress. You need to listen to different opinions, write well, and strive to have 700 collections of 100,000 words.

Sure enough, you can't have high expectations for reading books on QQ

The author did not surprise me. He had his own interpretation in some places, but at the same time he was stubborn and in line with my stereotypes. Let me talk about the poisonous spots I saw 1. Mumbling to myself 2. You can search for the giant axe, the realm of chaos. The original work Hu Yanbo only knows the realm of the universe king, and the basic information also needs to be hierarchical. Trump can be searched because he wants votes. He is a mortal body and is equal in a biological sense. Ordinary people are useful to them 3. The role of the virtual universe in the world master is reduced. Isn't it just that there is no excitement in life-and-death fighting? Didn't the person in charge of Luo Feng's mission to the earth also say that you can gain experience in arcane combat? This has always been a problem. Once you reach the realm lord level, it will be reduced. Are you saying that the original simulated realm lord will not work? 4. Xu Xin is related to the virtual universe company. You are purely relying on your own imagination. The original work states it clearly. Although what you said is a possibility, but it is stated clearly, the readers are treated as fools 5. The human race captures the protagonist. A god's kingdom leader with average talent is counter-killed. This depends on personal interpretation. I think it is right. The liquidation of traitor forces is at least immortal 6. Goldfinger does not come with it, but kills people to seize treasures 7. I was shocked at how the Zerg vassals destroyed the protagonist's human identity. Is this the first time I have seen the explosive theory that the people at the bottom are not human? This point needs to be added. Later, it was said that Zerg is not a good thing and it was barely patched 8. The character dialogue is very empty, and the writing can only write fan fiction

I can only say that each generation of versions is more godlike, and each generation of bad guys is more insane. Chen Dong thought of the worst person, that is, the Forbidden City Supreme who covers the sky, the person who can devour the entire universe for profit, and can be used as pasture. Master Gu thought of the worst person, that is, Fang Yuan, who would do whatever it takes for the sake of profit and longevity. But now I say that the versions of these two people are outdated. Some people see a stray cat or dog on the road, step forward and trample it to death. There is no conflict of interest. There is no need for immortality, I just want to trample him to death. Moreover, these people will make many excuses for trampling this stray cat to death, and some people will accuse them of being too soft-hearted and inconsistent with the original work for not even daring to trample a cat to death.

If the content of the fantasy world were given a lot of words and deleted directly, let me ask you, is it necessary to write the content of the fantasy world? Even if it's just a dozen or so lines, it's still crazy to write a chapter or two after it's on the shelves, right?

Chaos City Lord, Giant Axe, the top human race master of the universe, his identity, name, affiliation, and public record are all public information of the race and can be easily found in the virtual universe. Just like searching for Trump, everyone knows who he is, what positions he has held, and major public events. But the number of clones, personal treasures, trump card abilities, and hidden training shortcomings are the core privacy of the strong. This cannot be found in the virtual universe. Put it into the logic of the novel Public information = basic encyclopedia, not very confidential, everyone can check it; True cards, secret treasures, clone arrangements = personal top secrets, not disclosed to the public, ordinary monks cannot find it in the virtual universe. When many people read novels, they subconsciously feel that they cannot search at all and cannot receive any public information.

The author observes and describes the star-devouring world from a very novel perspective. This novel is also a reflection of the author's cognition of the real world. It is a very novel and realistic view of the world. The writing so far is very good, you can read it!

The content and plot are not bad, but you are too weak. You have become invincible in law perception. Is it necessary for you to go to the outer battlefield with your strength? You have also written 3 or 4 chapters, whether it is to adventure in the secret realm of the universe, and the protagonist's strength is too much. He can't break through in tens of billions of years, so that's it. You can just break through immortality. You have another genetic breakthrough, and the original core has become stronger again. I am really speechless. Why are you forcing the protagonist to be a world master?