[This novel will be completed on the 10th. If you've already read it, please don't buy it again.]
[My new novel next door, When the Wicked Female Side Character Devotes Herself to Cultivation, is now underway. Let's bring a storm of change to the cultivation world!]
Blurb:
Ye Xiao always thought she had transmigrated into an ordinary cultivation world, and that the old Taoist who saved her was a lousy cultivator.
She didn't realize how unusual this cultivation world was until the day she went down the mountain to buy wine and groceries for her master. She saw a little beggar who was almost starving to death, and the floating comments above his head.
[The heroine is about to arrive! Like a goddess descending from the heavens into his world!]
[Ugh, poor Xiao Bai! Why was his sword bone taken from him when he was little, and why does he have to give everything for the heroine later? Why do they have to take it from him?!]
[It's all for the heroine's future cultivation, of course!]
[But why does he have to be the one to sacrifice himself?! They won't even leave him the slightest chance to live!]
[Ugh, I'm crying so hard as his big sister fan. I wish I could transmigrate into the story and save you!]
Ye Xiao: ???
If the big sister fan can't come in and save him, then I will!
From then on, the old Taoist at the Feather Immortal Temple on Flying Snow Mountain gained another... No, wait.
One, two, three... a whole bunch of disciples.
Ye Xiao keeps picking up more people.
Ling Yuhua, the eldest daughter of a noble family, has her credit for saving the hero stolen. In the end, she is made to prove that the hero and heroine are truly in love, only to die at the hands of the very hero she once saved.
Zhu Yuan, a devoted male side character, is sent to the demonic sect to marry in the heroine's place, suffers countless humiliations, and dies.
Le Qingyan, the original unattainable beloved, has everyone else's affection stolen by the heroine's replacement, then is forced to die in her place...
Ye Xiao is dumbfounded.
How can the original hero and heroine in this world cause so much trouble and make life miserable for so many poor side characters?
The old Taoist, who drinks every day, sobers up.
He spends every day teaching his disciples, and ends up raising one, two, three... a whole host of peerless geniuses.
Later, when people keep showing up at her door, Ye Xiao finally learns this is a special world formed by the fusion of multiple novels.
She has picked up the biggest resource pack for the heroes and heroines, before they get their cheat powers.
When people who always want to use force to snatch away her fellow disciples, whom she worked so hard to bring home and raise, come to drain them for their own benefit, Ye Xiao gives them a kindly smile.
"Touch my disciples? Dream on!"
Theme: Learn to love yourself first.
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A Self-Help Guide for the Harem of the Dragon King
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I kept reading it and it felt strange and uncomfortable. After thinking about it carefully, I found out the reasons: 1. In the same clip, the three perspectives of Ye Xiao, Gu Xiaobai, and the old Taoist priest were switched without warning. The first sentence was about Ye Xiao's feelings, and the next sentence directly jumped into Gu Xiaobai's heart, and then jumped into the old Taoist priest's thoughts. It was very uncomfortable to read, and I was very dizzy. 2. God's perspective is mixed in, and the character is directly written as "what he feels and understands in his heart" without being anchored to the main perspective character of the current paragraph, and there is no sensory transition. Actions can be added in the middle as a transition between perspective switching, or actions can be used directly to replace mental activities. 3. There are no segments or prompts in the perspective jump. The characters' psychological activities are interspersed and mixed, and there is no boundary of "one segment and one main perspective".
It's just that I feel bad every time I see such words in this kind of article! They are already princesses, and you are still "begging" for them. Regardless of whether Wang Tong agrees or not, the princess cannot be treated as an item and used as a reward [angry] Unless her family doesn't love her at all, haha [angry] If you can do this, if you don't say whether you really like her, you are a scumbag [angry] It pisses me off to death. Every time I see something like this in a story about a male protagonist, I get really angry [angry] and it's packaged as a kind of deep love that cannot be achieved [angry] [angry]. It pisses me off to death [angry]
All I have to say is, the stupid Gu family should be wiped out.
Although I like this subject matter, the author, after you finish writing, take the time to look back. Some of the expressions are too complicated and I have to explain them over and over again, but I still can't understand them.
"It can only be the remnants of the past in the moon..." This is a big bug for the author~ Toxin 😂
"If she hadn't been responsible for the delay..." It would be a big mistake for the author~ old Taoist priest
"The tacit understanding in this ball is exactly..." This is a big bug for the author~ Demonic energy
""Clean it, it's ready inside..." This is a big bug for the author~ please
"Behind the owner of the village, Ning Xingyue was stunned..." This is a big bug for the author~ Luo Yongyang
"He is just attracted by the magic sword now..." This is a big bug for the author~ Not much