The Cannon Fodder Raised His Sidekick into a Phoenix-Arrogant Protagonist

Give him the Hundred Lotus Sect, and he can raise a junior sister. If you give him another chance to enter the Profound Star Sect, he'll show you what a real mother-daughter feat is. He only needs to make a slight move to push Yun Tianchong to his limit. That's right, he is Ye Anping, the young sect master of the Hundred Lotus Sect. The sect master of the Profound Star Sect, the Void Returning Realm cultivator Si Xuanji, commented: "Daughter, your man is really useful." Feng Yudie, who possesses the bloodline of the Holy Emperor, commented: "Hehehe... Hehe..." The great wronged Liang Zhu, the elder brother, also commented: "Ye Anping, I'm fucking awesome." French President Charles de Gaulle once wrote in his memoirs: You will never...

Now that it's finished, I'll just say a few words. As the first book I subscribed to in its entirety on this platform, I really liked it. However, I always felt there was so much more to write, but it wasn't presented in the end to advance the main plot (to be honest, while reading, many times I thought there would be more to be written, but then it immediately moved on to the main plot, or the events ended too quickly. I was initially thinking about all sorts of twists and turns, but in the end, I felt like that was it). There was so much more to write about in the daily life or side stories, and frankly, the main plot felt rushed from the mid-to-late stages. Many characters were basically only briefly introduced and then forgotten. I only got to see Brother Liang today...

I previously commented on this issue, but it wasn't very clear. Today, after reading the replies, I'll elaborate on it, hoping to offer my perspective to the author and readers who might be confused about this point. Let me start with a question: How long has it been since you last saw your first love? I think this question is enough to answer my point. Let me rephrase the question: If you're married and have a good relationship with your wife, you might occasionally think of your first love, chat with her, and reminisce about the past. However, even if you had your first love's phone number, WeChat, QQ, and knew her address, would you go out of your way to see her and contact her...?

1. How to define excellent character design? I think it's about making people remember the character, and the author has achieved that. First, the male protagonist is a calm and collected strategist, composed and reserved, planning carefully before acting. He always seems to have a complete cheat code from the start to the finish line, yet he also shows a human softness when determining his starting point (for example, helping the Sword Sect, calculating from beginning to end, but why would the protagonist go to such great lengths to do such a thing?). Initially, he insists on a pure love route with various beautiful girls, but later he becomes "Ye Tianchong," accepting all comers without hesitation, and quite skilled in bed...

This is my third read. There haven't been any good male protagonist novels in the last six months. [Sfem:9:467][sfem:9:467]

Throughout the entire novel, excluding Ye Anping, the author's progress is very obvious. Although I strongly disliked the character Gu Mingxin in my previous long review, the other characters were quite good. First, there's the main heroine, the junior sister Pei Lianxue. She was good in the early stages and was arguably the best character the author wrote when their writing skills were weaker. However, due to the poor early writing, the development of her feelings for Ye Anping was somewhat lacking. But this was compensated for by the abundance of sweet moments and later additions, such as their Yitong body-training. Unfortunately, as the author's writing improved later on, the junior sister's character was already fully developed, leaving little room for further development, so she could only be slightly portrayed as a yandere. Then there's Emperor Xiao...

Sigh, couldn't they have changed the first few chapters? Even changing it to something like refining Pei Lianxue into a human pill would have been better. But it has to be a furnace/cauldron. Although the definition of a furnace/cauldron was broad in early cultivation novels, now it almost always refers to anger/anger...

The ending scene with the crane delivering a child was really touching... I think Yu Die is the best-developed character; her gradual shift in her lesbian mindset was very detailed and reasonable, and her naivety later on was just so endearing.

It's the only completed book that's still on the bestseller list after being finished for over half a year, which speaks volumes about its quality.

The title itself is my opinion. I've been a reader who's followed half of this book, and I'm still a bit dissatisfied with the later parts. If there were a rating system, I'd give the early part a 10, and the later part a barely passable 7.4—Above average, but not quite good. I started following the book from the later stages of Xuanxing Sect, and Lilong Mansion and Sword Sect made me wait anxiously for updates every day. Every day, the update time was refreshed at yesterday's update time, but the author updated a little later each day, and then after about a month, there was one less day of updates. Despite the criticism, it's truly captivating—the comedic daily life of the three little ones from their first encounter. The second brother is obsessed with his junior sister, the junior sister only wants to be close to her senior brother, and the senior brother's feelings for his junior sister evolve from sisterly affection to...