Dear Disciple, Please Spare Your Master

He wrote a joke in 3 million words, everyone laughed at Qidian, but in the end it was even worse than Qidian.

The logic in this book is simply mindless.

Either skip the fancy stuff, or don't falter at the crucial moment. The first 15% is relatively comfortable, but it gets increasingly uncomfortable as you read on. Going to a brothel for fun, but too afraid to go? Married to your wife, but too afraid to have sex? Do online novels nowadays prohibit sexual relations between spouses? What's with the male protagonist's restraint? His mind is full of ideas most of the time, but at the crucial moment he suddenly realizes it's wrong, almost like he's about to pull out a copy of "So-and-So's Quotations." I suddenly regret buying all the chapters at once; it feels like a complete waste of money. Next time, remember to read reviews before ordering. This book has strong educational value; reading it once can teach you a lesson...

So, is there a female lead? The female apprentice became just a background character later on.

I read the original work after reading the manga, and the harem story with the "inch-stopping" technique is truly baffling. One or two mishaps are enough; constantly building suspense is enough. The plot itself is rather mediocre, even a bit idiotic; what kept me going was the harem aspect. Then the protagonist is incompetent, and after about a hundred chapters I didn't want to read anymore. The pacing started to get messed up, and I really cut my losses. Yongning's side was truly disgusting. Can't he just have sex with his wife? She didn't object, and then he inch-stops me? Huh? Are you kidding me? I endured it all, but I finally couldn't take it anymore. Goodbye.

Judging from the style, the author seems to have intended to write a relatively lighthearted and enjoyable story. However, there are several issues that severely impact the reader's experience. Let's start from the beginning. First, the villains are overly formulaic. This problem is particularly noticeable in the first half, where the villains frequently display hostility towards the protagonist that goes far beyond what is necessary, and the plots are almost identical each time. Even the dialogue is practically copied. After witnessing the initial display of power, readers could easily imitate the same plot points and write their own, with results that wouldn't be worse than the original. While villains can be problematic for the sake of the plot, they should at least be given some intelligence. Second, the work contains extremely...

I just want to ask the author, the protagonist's cultivation level is clearly incredibly high, but he's just pretending to be weak to deceive others. He has to be looked down upon, otherwise how can he show off in the end? How can he appear as a king of cool in front of his disciples? I'm a masochist, if you don't disgust me a bit, I don't know how to show off. Is that what you mean? It's clearly a wish-fulfillment story, but you have to suffer before you can unleash your power to slap them in the face. What, is the protagonist just building up his anger? "I have the world in my heart, I won't fight back or talk back when others provoke me, I'll just endure it, and when you've shown enough of your pretense, I'll kill you all with a fart, and slap your faces until they're swollen..."

The story went off-topic later on, focusing more on action and excitement than harem elements. While I enjoyed it initially, towards the end I felt Qingluo was the true heroine; it seemed like they were trying to create an NTR (Netorare) scenario.

I really hope the author will release a side story to talk about the future development of Dongdi, Su Tao'er, and the others.

At the beginning, I thought Tao'er would be true love, but after checking the details and seeing the harem tag, I realized there must be several more. Then, after reading further, I understood—Tao'er was just a tool for being cuckolded.