My Female Disciples Are All Future Powerhouses of the Myriad Heavens (Every Disciple Is a Powerhouse)

The early parts of the story were indeed refreshing. Having grown accustomed to protagonists being toyed with by various ridiculous systems, this time the male lead's overwhelming power over the system promised some unexpected and amazing developments. However, after reading further, my thoughts are as follows: the system was brought to life, but the protagonist was written as "dead." The system, who also serves as the witty commentator, suffers immense oppression (physically), living a life worse than death, yet persists in his comedic antics, maintaining his comedic persona and bringing joy to the reader. He is arguably the most outstanding character in the book and the biggest motivation to keep reading. In contrast, the male protagonist is more powerful, more responsible, and even more aloof than the system...

I came from the manga, and I thought it was alright, but then I read the novel, and it was... Indescribable. There are so many flaws. First, the book constantly emphasizes Chen Ye's strength and the fear he inspires through direct and indirect descriptions, which is really unnecessary. A little more is fine, but they insist on writing a ton of it, constantly emphasizing it, depicting the tense atmosphere before, during, and after every battle. It seems the author is trying to compensate for the protagonist's inferiority complex and satisfy their own desire for power. I understand, people are often frustrated in reality, so what's wrong with indulging in some fantasy in a novel? But the writing is poor, tedious, and noisy, like something a primary school student would write. And then there's the appearance of the female characters...

I might get criticized for writing this, but the subject matter was novel, and I was quite happy when I first read it. The higher the expectations, the greater the disappointment. I was truly disappointed. At first, the Human Emperor chapter was quite interesting, but things started to feel off from the ending. By the time I reached the Demon Emperor chapter, I couldn't bear to read any further. The plot was crammed into formulaic storylines. The male lead's character was less human than a system; wouldn't it have been better to make the apprentice the main character instead of writing a heartless machine? The pacing was absurd; taking on disciples was like harvesting leeks—rescuing a disciple—forcibly becoming an apprentice—cultivation realm—trials—trials over—next disciple. Each major chapter felt anticlimactic...

Slice-of-life and character development stories get a bit boring after a while. They're okay as invincible protagonist stories, but the content is too monotonous. I've read six volumes, and it's basically just about taking on apprentices, acquiring pets, training the apprentices, sending them to fight, and then rescuing them when they're losing. He's undeniably invincible, but it's not satisfying. I haven't read the later volumes yet, but the titles give me a pretty good idea of ​​what they're about. I've figured out why it's not satisfying: the author has completely fixed the protagonist's personality. Six volumes in, and he's still like a stone. If you want to read it as a slice-of-life or character development story, the author has to write about how the apprentices try to woo the protagonist, but the protagonist's personality is so fixed...

When I first saw the title of this book, I was pleasantly surprised, because I personally enjoy reading novels about taking on apprentices, so the title immediately drew me in. At the beginning, I was a little apprehensive, because I've read many poorly written apprentice-taking novels. I clicked on the first chapter with a try-it-and-see attitude, and after carefully reading it, I knew this book was my type. Mainly, in my mind, many system novels are illogical because they can't explain where the system comes from. But this novel is different...

I really can't stand the extra chapters, they're absolutely amazing! If you're reading from the manga, I suggest you don't read the novel.

The comic is really good [sfem:4:319]. It's one of the few comics I've followed that I didn't read pirated versions of but instead paid for.

A harem novel that portrays Chonghua as liking the male lead but not accepting him, and even erasing his memories in the name of giving the best ending—why write that? That's the biggest flaw. Reading the novel after reading the manga feels like it's not even a fraction as good as the manga.

The early part was great, getting off to a good start, up until the fight against the Lord of Reincarnation, it had everything a typical wish-fulfillment story should have. The plot dipped slightly from Mingyu You onwards, but it was negligible. The most frustrating part started with the Spirit of Time and Space; from then on, it became increasingly boring, tedious, and tedious. (It's all just the system and the Spirit of Time and Space talking nonsense.) It no longer resembled a wish-fulfillment story. Later on, the action scenes were truly uninteresting; the constant killing didn't bring any thrills but rather mental exhaustion. The dialogue was also incredibly awkward, and the plot became increasingly ambiguous. There was only a partial explanation of the system's creation of the master, and then it suddenly jumped into a romance (why did it take so many chapters to kill a mere Immortal Realm weakling?...).

I've been writing for a long time, and the realms are still not clearly defined. Perhaps I haven't figured out how to write about the later realms. It's quite troublesome to figure this out myself. It can only be said that the author has established a very large world-building, so the number of realms had to be numerous. So what's the situation now? Aside from the top-tier Dao-attaining Realm, the first realm below Dao-attaining is simply described as "second only to Dao-attaining." And the highest known combat power is the Origin Realm. The realms between the Origin Realm and the Saint Realm are unnamed. This greatly affects the reading experience, especially since the disciple's training is only briefly mentioned...