My Rebellious Disciples Keep Trying to Bully and Insult Their Master

First, looking at this system, it seems to have a lot of "rebellious disciple values." I just need to raise Yan Yu's rebellious disciple value to a level where I can sleep with her, then wait for my second (or third) wife. Each time, I only raise their lowest values, so I can enjoy family bliss first. Then, I do tasks to lower my first wife's rebellious disciple value and raise my second wife's, then I can seduce the second one and live a shameless, blissful life again, without worrying about kidney deficiency. 😍 Then, as always, I change wives every few decades. They're all wives anyway, so I enjoy it immensely... (Purely wishful thinking)

The ending felt a bit rushed, like it ended just for the sake of ending. There was no mention of Yun Ge or the system's fragments of the Other Shore; suddenly, a large army invaded the Other Shore. The rescue of Xiao Xiao also felt perfunctory. I suggest an epilogue. I hope you won't be ungrateful and I won't have to beg you.

The male lead is a typical overpowered protagonist; if he doesn't show off a bit more, it's not satisfying. Women all want to be close to him, but he neither makes advances nor pushes them away, so it's frustrating not to connect with them. I personally dislike system novels, but since I'm already in this one, I'll just leave it at that. And the cultivation is just dragging on and on, all that mental maneuvering every day—do you think I'm reading this? I bet this book has a rushed ending, lacking a clear main plot or objective. The objective in this book is simply to avoid being despised by the jockey. All the female leads' favorability is basically maxed out; those who aren't are given away in a single chapter. The male lead getting all the female leads is basically a matter of a single thought, meaning there's very little room for maneuver...

The writing is indeed quite good, but there are still some points that need attention. I feel the "enjoyment" elements are a bit too monotonous. The two apprentices are so similar except for their different methods of accepting disciples; it makes the whole story feel off. There must be a problem somewhere, and the author needs to pay attention. Also, if the author is the type who won't listen to any constructive criticism (I was heavily criticized in the reader group for expressing some of my opinions), please skip this comment.

The novel's title no longer matches the content. The male protagonist's personality becomes increasingly twisted as the story progresses. There's too little description and interaction between him and Tang Yan in the early stages, leading to his sudden rise to power and excessive displays of affection later on, resulting in a very poor reading experience. It's tantamount to NTR (I don't dislike Tang Shishu, but I particularly dislike the male protagonist's later behavior). The novel should revolve around the male protagonist making amends and educating his disciple after his transmigration. His lack of understanding of Tang Shishu in his previous life might have allowed him to rise to power in this life. The male protagonist seems to have completely forgotten the sacrifices his master made for him in the early stages, all for Tang Yan's sake. If Tang Yan hadn't brought him back to reality, I think he would have forgotten everything. Therefore, once Tang Yan and his master's relationship is established, the rest of the story becomes basically...

Some people think the system's options are just padding for word count, but I don't think so. After all, there are so many harem system novels, a little silly element is quite nice. Watching the protagonist outwit the system is one of the sources of enjoyment for me when reading books, especially when things get a little suggestive (just kidding). Anyway, I'm giving you all my votes, so please give me more when it's available (subtle hint). Also, I found this book very enjoyable to read, and I hope the author continues to do well.

Is this book free of any bad stuff?

Ah Feng, forever a goddess!

I can't wait any longer, cy revived and kicked me.

It's fine for the female lead to have large breasts, but author, what kind of concept is it to set Luo Yuyan's breasts to be at most O-cup? Imagine from a distance, her head and chest form a triangle, obscuring her shoulders and neck, and her arms seem to grow out of her chest—what would that look like? I feel you have a talent for writing horror movies. Also, the male lead's feelings for the female lead felt very superficial. He seemed to hope they would remarry, and his feelings for his master were practically nonexistent; once his cultivation was invincible, his master became useless. It feels like the author successfully portrayed the male lead as a heartless and ruthless person, rather than a ruthless one.