My Female Disciples, Who Have Designs on Me, Start Fighting Among Themselves

It's quite gratifying to have read this book before it was even published; it gives me a feeling of "Ah, I've watched this child grow up." Anyway, enough rambling. Judging from the text, the author clearly knows what kind of novel they're writing: lighthearted, humorous, sweet, and with a few angst (after all, sweetness isn't good without angst). The harem theme means the plot will likely revolve around the relationships between the main characters, while the immortal realm will only serve as a backdrop, playing a role in fostering their romance at certain times (why are you even reading serious cultivation novels here?!). So, for those of you considering reading this book...

Yes, yes, I want to read novels! I really want them!! Please give me your saved chapters... I want them so badly, I want new chapters, ❤ Waaaaah, I can't take it anymore, ugh... I've become a fool who can't live without new chapters, ughhh—I love long new chapters so much, I can't think of anything else but reading novels❤ Please, please satisfy me, satisfy me with long and thick new chapters❤ Please, I'll do anything…!

This book is of high quality compared to other similar books by Pineapple Bun. So far, I haven't found any major flaws, and the writing style is quite comfortable to read, without any awkward transitions or illogical parts. Currently, we know there are six female characters: the master, the childhood sweetheart, and four disciples. The third disciple hasn't appeared yet. The childhood sweetheart is arrogant, and the fox-girl master, while lazy, is very kind to the male lead (the broken sword sent him back to the past, and there are many hints that the celestial fox girl was the former master, but due to the "curse," Yun Su doesn't remember her). (The plot seems to be gradually revealing this through dreams...)

In the garden of my heart, the author's book is like a budding flower, blossoming into the most beautiful scenery of my life. Her smile is like the lingering glow of sunset, gentle and warm, rippling with tranquility in my heart. In the quiet night, her name adorns the sky of my thoughts like stars, each syllable a twinkling star, shining with the softness deep within my heart. When I miss her, the strings of my heart are gently plucked, playing a melodious song of longing, drifting through the years. In this endless flow of time, love surges like a tide, yet in the depths of dreams, it transforms into helpless tears. Hidden deep within my heart...

The writing is indeed quite good. While some plot points and details in the novel are well-developed, others are drawn out, requiring multiple page turns to understand what's meant to be understood at a glance. The latest plot has noticeably accelerated. Previously, progressing through the plot and unlocking the map was about advancing the characters, but this current storyline feels like it's racing towards the end. While the female lead's identity was revealed in chapter 24 of volume 3, I still don't understand volume 4, even past chapter 80; it just feels like the main storyline is being pushed forward at breakneck speed.

Introductory Summary: A sweet fantasy harem novel you won't regret reading, or you'll regret not reading it! I usually review books in sections, starting with the plot. The plot is the most important factor in a good book, and this one is incredibly sweet, with no flaws whatsoever, far surpassing its competitors; there are no frustratingly drawn-out plot twists, and when it's time to act, it's decisive and straightforward. The only drawback (which isn't really a drawback, as everyone's opinion differs, but I've seen many reviews mention it, so I'll just summarize briefly) is that the first two volumes don't focus on the disciples, which might make those who like them a little impatient. But don't worry, the author has said that he won't skimp on anything, and the story will only get better as it progresses; it won't be a formulaic collection of stories where one chapter is followed by another...

After resting for more than half a year, it still stopped updating. The main problem is obvious: the third volume is terrible. Both the pacing and content are quite unappealing, and it's both tedious and long. The first volume, with its 60-odd chapters, had a perfect pace, the second volume, also with its 60-odd chapters, was quite good, and the 2.5-odd chapters were also good. But the third volume is twice as long as the first two volumes combined, essentially cramming the content of four volumes into one chapter. This is a major taboo for novels that aren't particularly popular.

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I know that nitpicking in novels is annoying, but the Pope's part is truly unbearable. A monarch, one who repeatedly instigated wars and won most of them, still couldn't establish a centralized government or build prestige. When the war reached a stalemate, public resentment rose, revealing his poor governance. Then, a powerful family rebelled and publicly murdered the emperor, demonstrating a complete lack of both civil and military prowess. And then there are the so-called weak traitors. Frankly, a traitor who dared to publicly murder the emperor doesn't seem weak at all; on the contrary, he's incredibly courageous. And then there's the blank stele, left unmarked and unappreciated. A traitor who dared to murder the emperor in the street wouldn't have dared to carve a scathing inscription.

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