The Corrupted Girls and My Shattered Daily Life

The quality of Fan Hua's books has always been consistently high. This book and that diary were the first two novels by Pineapple Bun that I read, and this is my second book review (the first was in the diary). Regarding the painful point about Lan Yushan and Ren Xueqing's goodness at the end in the review: First, Ling Fan was an ice mage before his rebirth, and his strength is evident in his character setting. Moreover, the system mission's overdraft of potions also gave a hint. Second, since it is a novel, there is no need to be too particular about the difference between reality and fantasy.

The novel was quite good in its early stages, a classic example of a yandere (obsessive and possessive) story. However, after the characters surnamed Lan and Ren were arrested, and Lan nearly got raped for her devotion to the male lead, the story began to falter. Leaving aside the sudden appearance of Lan, which many readers didn't recognize, this also reflects the problem of too many female leads and complicated relationships. The male lead's eunuch-like behavior is somewhat believable, given he's only a middle school student. This transition is truly abrupt, shifting from reality to fantasy. I've been struggling with the realistic aspects; realistically, the police couldn't be that incompetent, and the kidnapping scenario is somewhat absurd. From a fantasy perspective, it's...

It's still unfinished after all these years. Well, at least you finished one book. For readers, your prolonged hiatus from updating is undoubtedly extremely unacceptable. But for you as the author, finishing a book is a way of giving an account of your work. I was in high school when I first read this book, and that's when I discovered pineapple buns. I thought they were a hidden gem. Now even a pineapple bun has become a thesis defense, and I've graduated from university. Life is always like this.

* True indifference is not even bothering to offer criticism; only readers who care will argue about the ending. If I truly didn't care, I could simply abandon the book silently; why waste time arguing? It's precisely because I like the story and the characters that I'm disappointed by the possible ending. * Yes, the ending can't satisfy everyone, but at least it should fit the preceding plot, right? * I want to see Yun Bingmeng, Yun Shuangchen, An Ruoshi, and Ren Xueqing, Tang Yirou, and Lan Yushan's "chance encounter" at the comic convention, and Ling Fan's mediation during it. * I want to see the arrogant young lady Shangguan Ningyue take Ling Fan to meet her fierce grandfather later. * I want to see...

That book had character issues and was about to be abandoned; this one was abandoned outright, plus various disputes with the vast majority of its supportive readers. It was so popular in 2019, but now with all this fuss, no matter how well-written it is, it's useless. Why not just shut down the book or end it? Do they think everyone's stupid? They're just keeping their supportive readers hanging. They could have just ended it anywhere, but they're keeping them hanging. The writing is a bit off, no problem; the characters and plot aren't stable, no problem; even some disgusting plot points are tolerable. But to stop updating and abandon the book at the slightest dissatisfaction (one book had disputes with readers, the other had a drop in subscriptions). Only a sycophant would blindly follow this kind of behavior. I dare say this author...

The author had high ambitions for this book from the beginning, with extras, an "what if" ending, and extensive development for each character. Readers were all waiting for the explosive plot twists. But when those twists finally arrived, the author lacked the ability to write them properly, resulting in a terrible ending where all the girls shook hands and made peace. I just couldn't take it anymore. I started reading this book in high school, and now I've been out of college for two years, and I'm so incredibly disappointed.

I've read it again and again, and found that there are so many unresolved plot holes, countless in number. Here they are: the guild meetup, the second empress's request, the first empress Chen Qian's fake boyfriend (at Xu Yanran's class reunion), the gathering of the Su, Xu, Chu, and Lin families (mission nine [Living Towards Death]), Qiu Mengling's summer vacation promise, Lin Wanqing's spicy hot pot, Zhao Kexin's summer vacation promise, Lan Tang and Ren San's cosplay, truck driver Zhang San finding a student ID, and Xinas's time travel story is currently on hiatus. It seems the completion date is a long way off! We, the readers who have subscribed to the entire series, are extremely angry!

Those with low tolerance for sexual activity should avoid this section. There's a scene where Ren Xueqing is stripped naked, even though she's only left in her underwear. Those with low tolerance for sexual activity probably won't be able to handle it. This part of the plot relies entirely on this disgusting trope, and it gave me a stomachache. Also, the male lead is incredibly stupid for telling a woman he has a past conflict about the system and his transmigration. He's so blindly trusting after being saved by someone—it's just too… terribly stupid. The rest of the plot is quite good, and the yandere elements are well-written. Ignoring these two major flaws, it's still acceptable for now, but the updates are too slow.

It's worse than just giving an outline; it disgusts me. I subscribed to the entire series and the audiobook, and I've been following it since high school. At least let me know the structure of your story, instead of ending it so abruptly. I've waited so many years, and it's like I'm being made a clown.

Since I've decided to live, I'll just keep writing to my heart's content. After all these years, I don't really care about my writing style; the only thing I care about is whether I can give the story a complete ending.