After Being Reborn, My Yandere Girlfriend Came Looking for Me

Once you finish writing it, I'll summarize the main chapters and optional chapters for those who are starting this book. You should only need about 8%-10% of the chapters to finish reading it.

Selfish and hypocritical. The male lead's past life character was very realistic; because his sister was his only family, he worried about her and broke up with the female lead. It has to be said that if this weren't a harem but a pure love story, it would be truly wonderful. But the harem element completely ruined all that beauty! The author initially intended to write a three-part male lead story, but Gu Yufei's appearance and subsequent death were the beginning of the failure. Gu became a mere tool, appearing only occasionally with little presence. To strengthen Lin Ci, the author made the male lead blatantly hypocritical. The male lead understands the reason for his tragedy in his past life in chapter 831, only to forget it in the next chapter. The female lead demands fair treatment—one person per day—while the male lead and Lin Ci openly... In the second life, besides...

I couldn't hold back anymore, it was truly disgusting to read. Could you please stop writing it like this? The man should just die.

Brother, I really can't hold back anymore! Before 200 pages, I considered this book my absolute favorite, but the further I read, the more I felt the male lead was too indecisive and ambiguous. He's so flirtatious, even after the misunderstanding was cleared up, he still wouldn't give Qin a proper title, and he's still having this weird flirting with Su Jin! I'm just speechless! Please speed things up! I've already subscribed to the whole thing!

6. Those who are favored are always fearless. The male protagonist's reincarnation as a dog makes him hopelessly obsessive. People can change, and what seems like a satisfying point is actually the biggest problem. The male protagonist struck me as a complete Down syndrome patient. The only successfully developed female character was the aunt.

The book starts off well, but the pacing is too slow. Almost every main character appears as both their parents and themselves, resulting in too much emphasis on secondary characters. It's hard to imagine any character competing with the two female leads in the middle of the story, and even the male lead's future sister, who seems to be an ally, ends up being a supporting character. And the female mentor who guides the male lead's writing—if you're going to teach, why write a romantic subplot with him? She's not a female lead, and even if she is, she's unaware of the flirtation, serving no purpose whatsoever in advancing the plot. Are the female characters just there to pad the word count? The male lead's charm is simply irresistible; it feels like every female character of his generation in the novel would develop feelings for him. The male lead neither rejects nor accepts her advances...

In her past life, her girlfriend of ten years became the other woman, her heart gradually changing because of a few words from her sister, allowing the other woman to take her place. Sigh, the more this happens, the more it seems the female lead was completely blameless in her past life. That's just the kind of person she is; she won't refuse unless forced, and she's completely unaware of it. If she chooses a pure love path in this life, she'll be a loser, with no chance of becoming the main wife in the harem. It's truly a bitter pill to swallow.

Goodbye. As a long-time reader, I advise the author to be kind. Why not finish this one and start another? For the first million words, you wrote endless back-and-forth, and I thought you were going to switch to a pure romance with two female leads. But then you started writing a harem again. Sorry, I really don't want to read this anymore. You've written a million words that's neither harem nor pure romance; I can only say goodbye. [Sfem:4:331]

As a reader who can appreciate both harem and pure romance, I can only say that subscribing to the entire book is the one thing I regret most, bar none. It was such a waste of the excellent setup in the beginning. The constant angst and mindless deus ex machina in the later chapters meant I neither experienced the joy of winning in a romantic relationship nor the satisfaction of a harem-like story. My only thought was that the book would have ended after the male lead died in the first chapter.

I feel the male lead is such a jerk.