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To be honest, the earlier parts about her were quite off-putting. The author only mentioned that the male lead made eye contact with her at the banquet and seemed somewhat familiar, and then for dozens of chapters, there was no further mention of any prior relationship between them. So, the dragon-woman princess was practically throwing herself at him, even though it was the first time she'd met the male lead, and vice versa. There was no explanation for why the male lead attracted her; it was like she was a human aphrodisiac. I forced myself to continue reading, but the author never explained or hinted at any connection between them.

I've basically finished reading it. The emotions are delicate, there are sweet moments and plot twists, but there's one rather annoying point →_→ which is also a point many readers have criticized. First, the early chapters of this story have an urban setting with some special abilities (the unique beast girl setting). The sudden shift from this urban setting to a cultivation novel (with a fox-spirited female protagonist as a prelude) and the change of main character names creates a disjointed reading experience (comparable to an urban cultivation novel suddenly turning into a battle against the Avengers in the next chapter). Normally, the basic tone of the story only changes with the plot (e. G., From urban to urban cultivation to cultivation), but in the current...

The fact that this book made the list proves the author has good writing skills. Secondly, the everyday scenes of close interaction are well-written, and the descriptions of other characters are quite detailed. Overall, it's very good. The author also mentioned in a group chat that the pacing of the story will be relatively slow, so I believe the female characters will be even more nuanced in later chapters (because I've read the author's previous work and thought it was quite good). Also, recently someone has been angrily criticizing the book in the comments. Ignore this person; they're just a clown. Just look at their posts. They criticize other people's work for no reason, and if they don't understand the article, they just spout off. It's an old habit of theirs...

I initially started reading your book based on the synopsis, but I kept reading on and off, and the more I read, the more something seemed off. Why did you only focus on the two female leads at the beginning? Then, okay, the other two finally appeared, but then they disappeared after a few chapters. I thought maybe they'd sort out their past lives and have children before moving on to the main plot. And then you tell me it's finished? Honestly, the ending is alright, at least it's not bad! What the hell?! Did you put that "her dad" in the ending?! I bought so many chapters, and now I have to give a review, and I have to give you a bunch of monthly votes to even write one. Don't you even look at what you've written? It's so sloppy...

Thank you all for your support over the past year! The novel "The Young Lady" officially concludes today. There may be additional bonus chapters later, and a new book is also in the works! Looking forward to seeing everyone again next time!

It's a shame the Empress and Xiaobai couldn't have had a happy ending? It's even more of a shame the modern-day protagonist ruined the book; too many of his actions negatively impacted the reading experience (for example, I'm reminded of a certain original hero). I hope the author can be more meticulous in character development or depict the protagonist's significant growth. Even in the end, the two women didn't achieve peaceful coexistence through his efforts.

I personally like to compare books to food. This book felt like a refreshing cold dish after a heavy meal. While it's slightly simpler than some exceptionally good online novels, the author's writing style is commendable for a book like Pineapple Bun. I hope the author stays true to their principles and continues to strive forward. As for those so-called righteous individuals, my assessment is that they should be mindful of their own position. If Pineapple Bun can't accommodate your arrogant attitudes, then please leave. Novels are created collaboratively by authors and readers, not for you to act arbitrarily.

You should really reflect on why you're only seeing borderline content.

The emotional descriptions are delicate, creating a strong sense of plot progression, with sweet moments, twists, and anticipation. However, the added side stories and foreshadowing could be better integrated into the main text. There are areas for improvement, but also commendable aspects. Among recently released books, it stands out and is the most enjoyable one I've read so far. It's full of yandere elements, and with the older sister character, I hope the later plot doesn't collapse drastically and instead releases a massive update barrage. I believe that with one chapter every two hours for 24 hours a day, there will be even greater progress.

I sensed that Xiao Xuanzi was getting impatient towards the end, as if he wanted to finish the story as soon as possible.