In the Apocalypse, I Became One of the Zombies

Initially, the subject matter was appealing, but the beginning was enough to turn me off. Recently, I saw it was available as an audiobook, thinking maybe the later parts would be better? After reading for a few days, I found so many flaws I don't even know where to begin. I really should have read the comments section first. It's not just that the book is poorly written, it's disgusting. Zero logic, terrible writing style, and even Teddy isn't as capable as you. Various descriptions sound like a child's babbling. (I can't list them all.) The characters are ridiculously absurd. The plot is fragmented. And does this mean there are no men besides the protagonist in harem novels? He sleeps with every woman he meets, and it's love at first sight. He starts groping her the moment they meet? Even worse, there's the constant cuckolding. Other women's children are older than him, why should he...

This is the first time I've ever seen a story so bad that the very first chapter is enough to make me give up. Some people say the protagonist is a saint, which I don't really care about; maintaining a kind heart in chaotic times is commendable. But the writing style is absolutely terrible!! Even my seventh-grade nephew could write better!! It has a pretty good premise, but the writing is that of a sixth-grade student. I won't say more, since I haven't read many chapters. The fact that it has so many favorites is astounding. These days, the average age of readers is too young. If they want to have a long-term future, they need to be more eclectic and can't just stick to harem stories.

Volume 1: First 40 Chapters: Hmm, not bad. The male lead is a special kind of zombie. His father's actions are a bit outrageous, but the appearances of the zombie medical guide Mu Xiaoxuan and the zombie maid Ishihara Ayano are somewhat abrupt, and it's strange that their bodies are so well-preserved (not torn apart by zombies). However, it's all acceptable; just watch the male lead show off… Chapters 82-93: Dr. Green… speechless. He directly merges himself with plants and shows off photosynthesis. The male lead is a bit stupid though. The anti-electricity plot, absorbing and storing electrical energy—well, what can you expect when the male lead is a special mutant? The setting is acceptable. It's just that the tentacle monster's death is a bit…

Despite being a zombie apocalypse story, the male and female protagonists' actions completely contradict the expected caution and self-preservation. They don't communicate any intelligence with those around them, and despite wanting to stay, they oppose their leader. The battle descriptions are also poor, with fights turning into idle chatter halfway through, and torture scenes being replaced with servants—that would make more sense. The soldiers are also poorly portrayed. The protagonist's survival is solely due to the author's desire to continue the story. Ironically, the most fitting characters in the setting are the criminals, thugs, and doctor uncle in the department store at the beginning; their behavior feels more like that of normal people.

It was fine when I first subscribed, but the further I went, the more it felt like a rambling, disjointed essay. I wanted the funny moments and exciting scenes at the beginning, not some mindless, mindless single-player game where you just collect women. And even if you could accept the women, every ten or twenty chapters and a woman would reappear, making me wonder who she was. Every new chapter describes a woman as incredibly beautiful, and I know immediately there will be some ambiguous scenes to come. Men die easily, but as soon as a woman appears, it's all about flirtation. It's ridiculous. I can tell what kind of stuff is in the remaining dozens of chapters just by looking at the chapter titles. Forget it, this is a waste of my time.

This novel is uninteresting. The author should read more post-apocalyptic novels and reflect on their work. It seems to be largely plagiarized with some additions. The male protagonist is too naive. He lacks self-awareness and ability, yet he steals other people's lovers and builds a harem. This novel is even more mediocre than a typical work, lacking any realistic elements. My advice to the author: 1. Don't include every attractive woman in the male protagonist's harem. 2. The novel is unrealistic; it fails to incorporate elements of scheming, manipulation, love, cruelty, evil, and horror found in real-world settings.

This is the longest zombie novel I've ever read. However, I felt some of the middle chapters were filler, and the harem was excessively large. It seemed like the protagonist added a new member every ten days or so. I've even forgotten how many harem members the main character has. So, I couldn't help it. After reading around chapter 150, I didn't really want to continue. But when I got to volume five, I started reading again, but it was the same. Volume five not only had filler but also continued with the harem-building.

The protagonist is obsessed with Qi Ya, it's increasingly frustrating to read. She's an ungrateful wretch. You need a bit of a masochistic streak to read this book; otherwise, you might not be able to finish it. He just loves playing the saint, choosing to forgive everything. I can accept everything else, but Qi Ya's situation is incredibly frustrating. The protagonist does so much for her, yet Qi Ya still can't let go of her father. The bizarre thing is, the protagonist chooses to forgive everything. In short, he can forgive any woman, no matter how big her mistake. This protagonist is truly absurd.

The protagonist is a saintly figure, stalking any woman he sees, while the entire cast seems to have lost their common sense, and the plot is repetitive and dragging. Take the department store prisoner scene, for example. The male lead is so kind-hearted, letting the prisoners go multiple times and providing food and drink to the female lead and passersby, yet the female lead almost starves to death! And while the initial fear of the male lead turning into a zombie was understandable, after dozens of chapters and over ten days, the female lead is still acting like a complete idiot, saying, "Oh dear, I'm afraid you'll eat me!" What's the point of repeating this trope? The male lead claims to love the female lead, yet he stalks every woman he sees, regardless of her past actions, as long as she's attractive, he can forgive everything that happened before...

I watched it in junior high school, and now I've graduated from university and it's still not finished.