Harry Potter: the Strongest Senior

The plot has twists and turns and makes people look forward to it. It is a good book. Although the protagonist is strong, the enemy is even stronger. It's just a pity that it's a bit unfinished😭😭😭

Srds, now that you are selling to the free novel section, can't you release all your books? Selling books sells for half, right?

The OOC of the spells is not very good, especially Herbo's curse and the Disillusionment Curse. The author confused the Disillusionment Curse with the Muggle Shielding Curse, and the armor protection can only resist some minor spells. The magic power is also wrong. Voldemort's flying spell is not such a waste of magic power. When Voldemort was resurrected, everyone flew when he summoned people. In terms of timeline, Voldemort also Nagini has already appeared before he was resurrected, and Merlin was not from the Slytherin era. He assisted King Arthur, and King Arthur was 600 years old. The author should check it out. Many of them were said by others on the Internet, and the author believed them and added them in. Especially the time turner is not available in the second grade. There are not so many courses in the second grade that you can apply for. It even changed the concept of the time turner. He went back to the past and directly changed history, adding things that did not happen to him. According to the setting, his parallel world should disappear, or the parallel world should break, just like in Spider-Man, changing what has happened, his world will disappear, causing the world he changed to also disappear. This has already It is no longer OOC. He just changed the concept and the framework. If it is rounded out, it would be fine, but he has too many personal settings that make many of the locations inappropriate. However, the story is still very well set, very novel and good, but the concept is not clear and I have not understood it, so just read it as a new story. It is still very novel without overthinking.

Even if you don't read the original work when writing fan fiction, you still have to watch the movie?

The writing is very bad. To put it bluntly, it's like being Harry Potter's nanny and Dumbledore's dog. It's disgusting.

Scribbling, the original party passed by, and it was completely changed. It seems like they just borrowed the fan names and world view from the original work.

The protagonist is too cowardly and incompetent. He doesn't even have any self-esteem. He won't refute when someone criticizes him. He will only be submissive. Even if he is justified, he is still very servile. He does not have the protagonist's view of freedom.

I have read more than 30 chapters, and there are a lot of bugs. The author has not read any of the original works. The timeline and characters are a bit too confusing. What makes me speechless the most is that Merlin actually went to school at Hogwarts. What era did he belong to? Even if you don't read the original works and just read Western Fantasy, you should know that Merlin is from the time of King Arthur, which is hundreds of years earlier.

Will the author write again in the future?

The original plot is very boring... It has more than 100 chapters. Even in third grade, I am still afraid of trolls and worried that I will not be able to defeat them... The humor is the strongest...