The Prince of Spells from Slytherin

The writing is really speechless. One invention is passed down to another, and a family can't even keep a secret. It's like a sieve, and it's all passed down for free. Holy Mother, don't your family want to pass it on?? Don't want to develop?? , The equal share is paid for, right?

The single female protagonist Luna, the protagonist's sisters Acintha and Hermione are CPs, there are few emotional scenes, the protagonist belongs to the invincible genre, the plot is good, the protagonist participates in the main plot based on the principles of Buddhism, and the ending is also good

The protagonist is just like the hypocritical Dumbledore who stands on the moral high ground and stands on the altar. There is no characteristic at all. It is extremely boring and boring. You will find that you just invented the invention and then disappeared. The subsequent trip to Japan is even worse. If the author can't write, then don't write it. Don't write it out. Let these words hurt my eyes, okay?

The first point of timeline confusion is that the Weasley twins are two years older than Ron. You wrote it as one year. Is it really okay if so many of the spells invented in the second point are published? The third point is that you already know that reporter's character and you just let her spread it without warning.

The first part is good, but the second part about my trip to Japan is hard to read.

Haha, you are really a saint. Just contribute a few magic spells to earn some reputation. If you keep contributing, you might as well contribute your golden fingers, haha.

It's extremely boring, the protagonist has no character and is always a passive victim. The plot behind is confusing. I want to go see the Witch King to wash my eyes.

The lump my sister created is worse than nothing, disgusting

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

One invention is exposed and the other is exposed. I am really speechless.