Hogwarts Pureblood Glory

This software can't change the review. I'm really impressed. I can only say that the heroine here is named Taylor. She has a brain problem. She uses the name of the hero all day long to cause trouble for him. When people ask, they tell the hero to take responsibility for it. She obviously caused the trouble but let others take the responsibility for her. I can only say that the heroine is really screwed up. I suggest you don't watch it. The plot is also bad. Then the male protagonist is also surrounded by some girls all the time, just like opening a harem, and even split up Hermione from the original threesome. Those who have objections to this should not watch it. I can't stand it anyway. Moreover, the original heroine was Luna, but later a lot of women were randomly inserted into it, and she was really convinced to be the harem for the male protagonist. Then there was also a problem with his character setting. It turns out that the male protagonist was a gentleman before going to Hogwarts, but after he went there, he turned into a scoundrel. Anyway, this book really has a lot of blocking points, the plot is very weak, and the characters are confusing and the plot is very dry. My suggestion is that you really, really don't read this book.

It's not bad, it feels a bit like "The Great Sword", but it seems immature. I feel like I'm trying to get closer to John, but I just can't write that feeling! ! ! But it's much better than most such books! !

The writing is not very good, it might as well be My Swinging the Sword at Hogwarts, The Glory of Slytherin, he didn't write it, he wanted to be the next Dumbledore. The plot is also very bland and not recommended.

Since he is determined to imitate the Witch King's book, but he can't feel the same feeling, it feels like something is missing. And I don't want to start from the part where he writes about Draco. As long as I have read the original work, I feel that I don't actually hate Draco as a character. Many times , as long as I don't read the fanfic, I like him more than many characters in the beginning, so I feel that his books are not that popular. This problem may be a little bit, he has some problems with Draco, and I feel that the plot is a bit bland. After reading too many fanfics, I don't have any new ideas when reading about him.

Typos are wrong from beginning to end, the plot is messy, and the timeline is messed up. Umbridge was the headmaster earlier than Dumbledore, and in terms of content, he himself doesn't know what the protagonist is going to do. The characters are also messed up. Taylor is smart at times, not to mention the protagonist. All the good things he does are superfluous. Some of them still don't know what they are doing. They just simply add some sense of presence to the protagonist. This 9.3 Rating is very poor, and the writing does not deserve points.

How to say it? Hmm... It's not bad. The overall outline is very good, but there are a lot of bugs in the small details. Generally speaking, it is very good, and the ending is also very good. It is one of the better endings among the books I have read. But sometimes there are some problems with the character creation, and there are some small bugs. If you don't abandon the book when you encounter those small bugs, the experience should still be good. There will be things from Grindelwald's era, the era of the Big Four, and there will also be time travel. It's just that there are too many female characters around the male protagonist. There are also not too many typos.

Lese

There are a lot of typos, the plot is a bit watery, and I couldn't stand it after watching a fifth of it.

It's really good. It's very comfortable to read and the number of words is enough.

There are many typos, but they can be corrected.