Harry Potter: the Strongest Senior

This book is a fan + second creation, with original characters and private settings. The single male protagonist, two years older than Harry, has a golden finger (Sharingan in the magical world?) And is unsystematic. The writing is good and the plot is smooth. Except for a supporting role in the early stage, there are basically no OOC characters. The characters are pretty good. So far, the description of the Harry trio is relatively flat, but at least it has not collapsed. The author has added some original settings and minor changes (I have not listed them in order to avoid spoilers). I personally think it is acceptable, but those who are more serious about the original work may find it annoying. The storylines so far are quite interesting, especially the friendly match between the four schools, where each team competes in tactics. The plot is compact and exciting, very exciting (≧▽≦)b The protagonist doesn't interact much with Harry and others, so the HP main plot is not very involved. Professor Snape does have quite a lot of scenes, which can be considered a highlight~ [It's almost 200 chapters and I haven't seen a few long reviews. This is the first Harry Potter fan novel I've read, and I want to try writing one. I haven't read many fans who can refer to it, so my personal thoughts are just for reference, which is embarrassing (；^ω^)]

The overall plot development is pretty good. However, I have been reading books for a long time, so I am more realistic about the author's personal settings. This is not intentional. There are actually some places that feel awkward when I look at them. But I feel like the author won't change it, because it is his core setting (such as using mental power instead of magic power, her inexplicable name of surviving the catastrophe, building a model to cast a spell, etc.) You should respect the original work when you write a fan. There are many places that conflict with the original work, and there are two places that conflict with the original work's iron settings. Is this really good?

Warm reminder This book does not have a system. To be honest, the author has read system articles for many years. When he saw "ding", he was already a little tired of reading. Wizards who want to read the system text may be disappointed. Single heroine or no heroine, I haven't decided yet, Hermione is not considered. The male protagonist is in the same class as the twins of the Wei family, and there is still some time to wait for Harry's role. After all, he is two years older. The previous plot is all original, and the male protagonist Harry enters the third grade.

The framework is a bit awkward, but still acceptable. I always feel that HP magic is very idealistic, a bit like spiritual magic and blood magic, and language, magic, emotion and will are necessary factors for spell casting but not completely necessary. (Purely personal opinion) Personally, I feel that the problem with the second design of this framework is that the most important thing is the magic power and the framework, as if you can cast spells with the magic power and the framework. Does this feel a bit materialistic? So many people feel awkward, after all, memorizing the frame is a bit of a show (I personally think you can add some patches, the frame is very important, you can cast spells through words and gestures even if you don't know it, but the cost and power are lower than building a complete frame yourself. The above are just personal feelings and suggestions. If the author feels that it affects other people's reading or conflicts with this book, you can delete my post, I don't mind)

After reading it, it suddenly disappeared, and I remembered that I was a child in this book... The plot is very smooth, and I am really looking forward to the plot of the four-school competition. I would like to make a comment, the narrative style is sometimes a running account (especially at the beginning of school, the main character was given a running account style one class after another, and the beginning of each class was similar). I hope that there are some places where the rhythm can be relaxed, such as adding detailed descriptions and so on.

What's the point of the protagonist criticizing all the teachers?

Why did the author make the protagonist's character so unbeatable?

After reading a few chapters, I realized that I had read it before. After persisting for more than ten chapters, I realized why I had not finished it before... I first gave the protagonist a trick to see through magic, and then changed the spellcasting into a simulation frame combination, making the spellcasting more difficult. By lifting and pressing, other students can be as good as the protagonist without having to read or study. . . . I finished self-study in the third grade before enrolling and still didn't have a magic wand. After I got the magic wand after enrollment, I didn't want to go to class. I want to continue self-study. Is it a bad idea to ask the professor to strengthen myself? . . . Whatever you have taught yourself, you have learned from books. Your first-year classmates have come up with new tricks for floating spells. You can see through the frame without making any new attempts. The hanging that can see through magic is not usually used as a decoration. . . I still like the genius stream and the scholar stream. . Goodbye

After it was put on the shelves, the quality plummeted. I wanted to be original and try to figure out the plot, but the result was completely different. Writing about Halbo and Voldemort is a big mistake, the writing style cannot be controlled. Halber and Salazar share the same body, which is a big failure, and the writing style is completely insufficient. A crappy plot. What I wrote before it was put on the shelves can be said to be above the standard. I always feel that someone else has written it.

The magic frame can be vividly described as an irregular three-dimensional figure formed by overlapping three-dimensional figures. If you can't see it intuitively but only rely on a picture to imagine it, it is really difficult. For example, what kind of curved figure is the intersection of a saddle surface and a sphere? You can't imagine it with just a picture. You can only understand it by looking at the three-dimensional structure. However, how other wizards can learn it is also a problem. Most college students don't understand it.

After reading the free chapter, I feel a little discouraged. There is no female protagonist, and the protagonist is a time traveler. When he was in the first and second years, he doubted the Defense Against the Dark Arts professor and knew about the notebook. But when Harry entered school, he did not doubt Quirrell. In the second grade, he kept talking about how Quirrell joined the job, but later on, he did not have any precautions and thought he was a good person.

Ogadis and the elves directly persuaded me to retreat. Goodbye.

The change was really awkward. The whole story line made me feel a little sick. Oh, what a stupid change.

I have read more than 140 chapters, and I think it is outrageous that the protagonist is still dragging the plot. After the ancient dark wizard came out, it has become obvious that the plot has gone crazy. It is strange that the protagonist did not care about Voldemort on the back of Quirrell's head. Quirrell suddenly turned into an "Indian" and such a strange thing, the protagonist did not doubt it. There are also many other aspects. The original plot is obviously unreliable, so we still need to refer to the plot. My personal suggestion is to stop forcing the plot. It will make the protagonist look particularly stupid. The plot and prerequisites of the main plot are almost torn apart.

Analysis of several poisonous points in the book. First, the author changed the setting of Merlin's Secret Treasure, which is suspected of suppressing the growth of the protagonist. The third point is the plot of Chapter 105. Without the protagonist, others survived to the finale, but with the protagonist, others died at that time. This kind of plot is not fun except that the protagonist becomes a burden. Although the protagonist may use other methods to make a comeback, this plot makes the protagonist feel a bit redundant, which makes people feel that this book will make people better off without the protagonist What is the meaning of the existence of the protagonist? The last comment is there another world? I'm a little discouraged from giving up.

Hahaha, fortunately I invested early. 500 Arrived. Come on. Start with rewards.

Renew! ! ! ! It's been 8 days. Do you know how I spent these 8 days?

It is innovative, has some new content, and is attractive at the beginning, but the connection is not good enough, and it messes up the things to be done at each age. It adds a lot of new elements and it is a bit different. Let's talk about the bad points: the decency in the middle period is too intellectual, and any new character will beat Lao Deng for three minutes. It is really hard to imagine that these decency have survived until now! As the peak combat power of the original work, I can understand that occasionally there is a character who can compete with Old Bee 50-50, so that we can get some new content, but when he becomes a new character's combat unit, I can't stand it. The author, please think about why Lao Deng keeps staring at Voldemort? It's because Voldemort was very strong when he was at his peak. No one in the world except Lao Deng could stop him from doing bad things. Now, dozens of people who can beat Lao Deng have come out. Where do you want Voldemort, the Dark Lord, to put his face? Now see old Dunsnap plus Newt! When I was fighting back and forth with several 5-star dangerous animals... I couldn't bear to say goodbye (PS, let's change the name to Xiao Deng and those old zongzi who are stronger than him)

Let's talk about the first few chapters of this work. We see that there are several loopholes before the protagonist enters Hogwarts. For example, the protagonist is glad that he is not from an ordinary family because he is afraid that there will be traces of magic practiced in childhood (there should be no traces in the period before entering school - refer to Hermione of the original three protagonists. She practiced several magic at home before entering the first grade. If not, please don't criticize me). Other loopholes will not be mentioned here, and the article is not too vivid, maybe because it does not enter into the plot. Now I'm ready to test the water and read the first few chapters. I hope the author will write better and better. Come on💪

The protagonist doesn't want to go to Slytherin, but the Sorting House wants him to go, so I decided to retreat.

This is an ordinary building that provides book lovers with experience (*´ω｀*)

The premise of the second setting is that it cannot violate the original work. The magic framework suddenly turns idealistic magic into materialistic science. There is a problem with this book from the beginning.

My grandfather betrayed the Ministry of Magic, and my parents betrayed Voldemort. As a result, I was sorted into Slytherin. I decisively persuaded him to quit. The author deliberately wrote about conflict. I read so many nonsense things in a novel. I'm really embarrassed.

After reading more than ten chapters, I feel like the protagonist will become Harry Potter's bitch! ! Whenever I encounter Harry-related plots, I always think of Harry Potter! !

The beginning was okay, but after it was released, the useless protagonist became aggrieved!

So powerful! ! I scanned this book in the morning, joined the investment, changed the status in the afternoon, and received the profits. A small reward is not disrespectful! Come on, author! ! ! 😍 By the way, please give me some advice, that's great! ! !

As an author who updates three times a day, two times a day, and one update a day, it would be best for you to update as you please from time to time.

Sean

That Malfoy Rising copied yours.

I want to ask the author of Malfoy, did you copy it?