Harry Potter: A Vampire Villain? Call Me The Chosen One

It's beautiful, but I can't understand it at all. Actually, I can understand it, but the sentences are disjointed and it's hard to get into the story. Also, sometimes I wonder if there's one or two main characters. One minute it's his/her brother, my younger brother, my younger sister, my older sister—it's so annoying.

The sentences are incoherent, riddled with typos, and impossible to read.

I don't understand, I'm completely baffled.

I don't understand. Why use a perspective in writing?

I don't understand it; the perspective keeps jumping around, and I have no idea what it's about.

After reading it for a long time, I realized I couldn't understand it at all; it was really messy.

Why are all the sentences grammatically incorrect?

The premise of this book is quite good. It's just that the plot is too chaotic. The point of view is completely confusing. The meaning is unclear, and there are tons of typos. The perspective also keeps shifting.

The article is so messy

The constantly changing perspectives are so annoying; I initially thought the plot was alright.