Harry Potter: Magical Me

From refusing to go to the wizarding world at the beginning to negotiating business at Gringotts later... If you can't write a high-IQ protagonist, you just make the supporting characters stupid, right? And the protagonist eavesdropping on conversations in the living room... Just laying out character backstories? A batterer, an Auror, a whole bunch of backstories... Too rushed.

Initially afraid to enroll, he then provoked Quirrell to learn combat! Reborn after death and raised for eleven years—that's basically reincarnation with his memories intact, right? Yet, he finds it difficult to fit in! Then there are his various attempts to steal from the main characters, even his condescending accusations—all quite unlikable.

The subject matter is novel and very good. ... I'm at a loss for words. But it's a pretty good novel.

It's so faithful to the original, it feels like an adapted version of the original book (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴

Oh my god... Carp, you're not updating anymore?! To be honest, this was the first novel I ever read, and it means a lot to me (I forgot to log in back then!!). Carp writes very well, and I waited for your updates every day. I had just downloaded Seven Cats back then, and as a loyal Harry Potter fan, I spotted this book among all the Harry Potter fanfiction available.

They're always doing inexplicable and unnecessary things.

It's alright. It would be even better if some other elements could be added or if there could be any collaboration.

The character design is terrible. The protagonist is always forced to do things he doesn't like, and he never says no. To put it nicely, he has a good personality and is easily influenced; to put it bluntly, he's a cowardly, somewhat saintly idiot. The plot lacks any sense of freedom.

It's really good. I've been reading Harry Potter since elementary school, for over ten years, and I still think it's great.

Author, please update quickly! (Just now, an update was made.)