[World-class from the Neck Down] A Collection of Graded Recommendations for High-quality Online Articles
【脖子以下世界级】精品网文分级推荐合集
Welcome all book friends! The following is currently publicly available information: "World-class from the neck down" is a gag that describes athletes with well-developed limbs but simple minds. Since this book mainly introduces "non-head" works, it also belongs to "below the neck"; the concept of recommending high-quality products is similar to the meaning of "world-class", so it has this title. This book focuses on excellent works that are relatively less well-known but have bright content and highlights, and introduces hidden gems outside the mainstream lists. The book list is recommended by grade, and the specific information is as follows: Evaluation dimensions: A. Outstanding highlights (core competitiveness, determines whether it can attract readers to watch) B. Complete system (core competitiveness, determines whether readers can be retained to read) C. Other highlights (extra points) Grading standards: T1: If you also have a dream when reading online articles, it should be this one with two core competitiveness and extra points: A+B+CT1.5: Half-step T1, more suitable for the physique of Internet-reading babies The spiritual food has two core competencies but no extra points or deductions: A+BT2: The secret treasure of the book to overcome the tribulation, a typical online article with outstanding advantages and disadvantages has one core competitiveness and extra points: A/B+CT3: Waiting for a Destined Person, Bi Xian Wo Po's radio article only has one core competitiveness or extra points: A/B/C Finally, thank you all book friends for your patient reading. The book list contains personal subjective opinions and is for reference only! PS: The book list contains suspended/discontinued works, which have been marked and noted. Book lovers who are interested can skip them by themselves.
24猩红之刃:漂泊之旅
Three Wolves And Six Birds
Wandering - wandering - traveling far - Honor-Hangover-Death- This is the story of an adventurer [Bounty Hunter][Blood Magic][Mythical Equipment][Dnd Desert World Setting][Witcher-style Adventure]
Wandering - wandering - traveling far - Honor-Hangover-Death- This is the story of an adventurer [Bounty Hunter][Blood Magic][Mythical Equipment][Dnd Desert World Setting][Witcher-style Adventure]
"Scarlet Blade: Wandering Journey"-T3 level. Work tags: DND Deserted State, Western Fantasy, No Golden Finger, Realistic Style. Rating: A. The protagonist's image is remarkable; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. Character interaction is a bit cumbersome. A brief review in one sentence: The reading experience is a bit like an adventure game with a first-class single-player plot but poor online experience. 1. Introduction Wandering - wandering - traveling far - Honor-Hangover-Death- This is the story of an adventurer 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of the story is relatively clear. The protagonist is a young and well-known bounty hunter who has gained the opportunity to join the Imperial Academy of Magic through years of hard work. The long-term plot aims at learning magic to save his hometown that is gradually being swallowed up by the swamp. The short-term plot mainly tells the protagonist's series of efforts to join the empire's mage training system. The character creation in this book is a bit polarizing. The protagonist's image is relatively successful, and it perfectly interprets the appearance and interior of a strong man. He has both outstanding strength and the extraordinary inner ability to control this strength. The other characters may be to set off the protagonist. Although they are flesh and blood, they seem to be a little too weak or emotional... The author's writing is of high quality, which adds a lot to the overall atmosphere. 3. Highlights The main highlights of this book are as follows: first, the author's writing style is more consistent with the background of Western fantasy, especially the protagonist's independent plot part, which is simple and lively, clear in expression, smooth and smooth, and the narrative technique makes people feel smooth and natural; secondly, the protagonist's character is comfortable, strong in execution, clear in goal, firm in heart, and clear in mind. As a seasoned adventurer who is young but has a long working experience, the protagonist is able to make decisions before taking action without losing the courage to take advantage of the fire. He has good strength and delicate mind, and is a bit like a tiger sniffing the roses; again, both the protagonist and the plot are relatively safe. The high-level Shuangwen mode is like the protagonist's fighting method, which starts with a critical strike to establish the victory, and then proceeds to patiently and steadily deal with it until victory, without giving the opponent any chance to counterattack, leaving the enemy confused in defeat and dying in frustration; finally, there is no special cheat introduced in this book. 4. Questions ① Although the title of the book already indicates that the nature of organizations that use blood magic is not too negative, the author deliberately used too much force in the early stage to create an oppositional image between the empire and the blood magic organization. The protagonist forcibly sided with the blood magic organization without any evidence, just like the empire and the blood magic organization in the Werewolf game. The former does good things and the latter does bad things. The protagonist says that it has nothing to do with me while choosing to side with the blood magic organization. This can only be regarded as a charging wolf... ②Compared with the smooth narrative of the plot, the character dialogue and communication scenes seem a bit tedious and awkward; ③ There is still a lot of room for improvement in the rhythm control. For example, the scenes between trading owl bears and defeating jackals are too slow and too fast. One reading experience is awkward and the other is inexplicably abrupt; ④As a Chinese online novel, is it necessary to list both Chinese and English names of spells? ⑤Perhaps to highlight the protagonist, the performance of other characters is not satisfactory.
26圣堂教会从赐福开始
Buster's Ballad
People cannot live without faith. But here, faith has become a way for the nobles to exploit the common people, and the church has become a place for the nobles to seize power. The nameless existence cuts off the past history, the unexplorable mystery devours the soul, and the unknown will distorts the will of all living beings. Corleone came to this world, accompanied by only a group of light that can give birth to commandments. His enemies say he is a demon who harvests souls in the name of faith. His followers say he is hope, brings truth and liberates souls. He allows history to continue, lets the mystery go away, and guides all living beings towards the future. Initially, Corleone just wanted to build a familiar home in this turbulent and dangerous world. [Demining: Group portrait, no female protagonist]
People cannot live without faith. But here, faith has become a way for the nobles to exploit the common people, and the church has become a place for the nobles to seize power. The nameless existence cuts off the past history, the unexplorable mystery devours the soul, and the unknown will distorts the will of all living beings. Corleone came to this world, accompanied by only a group of light that can give birth to commandments. His enemies say he is a demon who harvests souls in the name of faith. His followers say he is hope, brings truth and liberates souls. He allows history to continue, lets the mystery go away, and guides all living beings towards the future. Initially, Corleone just wanted to build a familiar home in this turbulent and dangerous world. [Demining: Group portrait, no female protagonist]
"Temple Church Begins with Blessing" - Level T3. Tags of works: development of faith, church management, commandments, group portraits, western fantasy. Rating: A. Compared with the traditional upgrade mode Western fantasy novels that have been rolled into the Red Sea, faith and church are undoubtedly a new track with great potential; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. The setting of commandments is quite clever, which is very helpful for character creation and control of strength expansion. A brief comment: In most works, the church is the top force, so building a church from scratch will definitely be a wonderful story. 1. Introduction People cannot live without faith. But here, faith has become a tool for the nobles to exploit the common people. Corleone came to this world, accompanied by only a group of light that can give birth to commandments. His enemies say he is a demon who harvests souls in the name of faith. His followers say he is the Father who brings truth and liberates souls. Initially, Corleone just wanted a safe and free home in this turbulent and dangerous world. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The general plot of the story takes place in the extraordinary historical background of the Middle Ages. The nobility is the ruling class with extraordinary power. The church's existence is only reflected in burials and comforting the common people. The protagonist spreads faith and develops the church with the golden finger that breeds commandments, and reshapes the social structure of the entire world by taking the path of the lower class. The author has made some achievements in character creation. The protagonist's personality is comfortable, and there is considerable room for development according to the setting of supporting characters. It is foreseeable that there is the possibility of group portrait writing. The author's writing skills are up to standard and can be regarded as meritless. 3. Highlights The author is quite courageous in making choices. For example, the status of the church is set as a dispensable marginalized organization. Although it will leave the protagonist with no shadow to rely on at the beginning, it also gives the protagonist the opportunity to go into battle lightly without historical baggage, which can better reflect the thorny road and sense of achievement of starting from scratch; The setting of the law transfers many functions to the supporting characters. You must know that scenes such as fighting have always been the standard for the protagonist. After all, it is most intuitive to show the saint in front of others. However, directly participating in the conflict does not meet the role of the protagonist as a trader. Just like the prototype of the protagonist's name, it would be too shameful for the godfather to do it himself. The protagonist's personality and behavior match the role's positioning. He has clear self-awareness and is flexible and flexible. He does not have the frivolity of ordinary time traveler protagonists who are too jumping off. The look and feel is more in line with the impression of a calm and important character; the plot operation mode is somewhat like an auto-chess game. The protagonist ( The chess player) grasps key aspects such as management and upgrades, and leaves the specific execution to the supporting characters (chess pieces). In addition, the setting that the commandments given can be withdrawn and redistributed by the protagonist also enhances the reader's sense of security. After all, the power of life and death cannot be left in the hands of others. 4. Questions ① The mysterious and powerful lords and mages appear prematurely and slightly abruptly; ②This is not a novel where the protagonist is purely responsible for the plot. Characters from different social classes will plan actions based on their own interests; ③The content of the early Bible debate may not meet the taste of some readers.
27我的民俗文字游戏成真了
Cookies Are So Crispy
One day when he was fighting against life, Chen Che suddenly discovered that a folk word game called "Breatharian" appeared on his mobile phone. And the rewards obtained in the game can actually be brought to reality? From then on, his life changed. Ghost control, spells, soul summoning, support, exorcism, nightmare suppression, head reduction, witchcraft... Various means are available at your fingertips. However, just when Chen Che was living a prosperous life, he discovered that there seemed to be more and more strange incidents in reality.
One day when he was fighting against life, Chen Che suddenly discovered that a folk word game called "Breatharian" appeared on his mobile phone. And the rewards obtained in the game can actually be brought to reality? From then on, his life changed. Ghost control, spells, soul summoning, support, exorcism, nightmare suppression, head reduction, witchcraft... Various means are available at your fingertips. However, just when Chen Che was living a prosperous life, he discovered that there seemed to be more and more strange incidents in reality.
"My Folklore Word Game Comes True" - Level T3. 28,000 Words, the first 30 chapters are blocked + the author's account is cancelled. Tags of works: folklore, supernatural games, strange recovery, city. Rating: A. The author is quite accomplished in supernatural-themed online articles, and story mode is also the author's area of strength; B. The integrity is quite difficult to evaluate. On the one hand, there is still little content, and on the other hand, there is a lack of reference; C. After the author rested for a few years, his writing skills improved instead of falling, making up for his shortcomings in writing ability. One-sentence review: A new work in the comfort zone of a veteran author of supernatural themes. 1. Introduction One day when he was fighting against life, Chen Che suddenly discovered that a folk word game called "Breatharian" appeared on his mobile phone. And the rewards obtained in the game can actually be brought to reality? From then on, his life changed. Ghost control, spells, soul summoning, support, exorcism, nightmare suppression, head reduction, witchcraft... Various means are available at your fingertips. However, just when Chen Che was living a prosperous life, he discovered that there seemed to be more and more strange incidents in reality. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of the story is roughly that the protagonist who is engaged in game development accidentally plays a mysterious text supernatural game. On the one hand, the gains in the game can be reflected in the real world, and the protagonist gradually acquires extraordinary abilities. On the other hand, since the protagonist starts the game, ghosts have also appeared in the real world. The character creation is at an average level in the field of online writing. There are no extreme characters, and the characters' actions and reactions are more natural and reasonable. The author's writing skills have improved significantly. The negative experiences that were relatively rigid in the previous two books have been basically eliminated, and there is even a subtle feeling of flexibility and freedom. 3. Highlights The highlights of this book are mainly reflected in the following aspects: First of all, there are only a handful of online writers who can truly show the charm of supernatural themes, and the author of this book is one of them; secondly, although the model of word games affecting reality has only emerged in recent years, it happens to be similar to the core idea of the author's debut work "I Created an Urban Legend in Tokyo", which is a popular element + original. The combination of powerful forces with successful experience reflects the author's ingenuity in story structure; thirdly, in this book, the author chooses to use his strengths and avoid weaknesses, using the protagonist as the starting point for the supernatural, that is, there is no systematic official organization, which circumvents the key pain points in the first two books; finally, the author's writing skills have improved quite a few years after he stopped writing, and the reading experience is smooth and relaxed. The jokes and jokes incorporated follow the trend and are not obtrusive. 4. Questions ① The author has a long criminal record and the book he writes cannot be completed normally; ②Compared with previous works, it seems to have less of a thrilling and depressing atmosphere.
28Alienation Border
Xuanhuan异化边境
Zhao Buqie
The area outside the real world is called the "border". It is an unknown place that has never been visited by humans. Until one day, the border collapsed. Black aura seeped out from the cracks, distorting the rules of reality, and all kinds of weird things appeared one after another. A stone that can change shape at will, a tavern hidden deep in an alley, an arrow target with absolute defense but extremely timid... In order to repair all this, Fang Tang established the "Border Organization". It is hidden behind every door, standing between reality and the border, silently holding all the secrets. Every time you take action, you will get closer to the truth. And one step closer to danger... "Walking between reality and the border, we are both hunters and prey."
The area outside the real world is called the "border". It is an unknown place that has never been visited by humans. Until one day, the border collapsed. Black aura seeped out from the cracks, distorting the rules of reality, and all kinds of weird things appeared one after another. A stone that can change shape at will, a tavern hidden deep in an alley, an arrow target with absolute defense but extremely timid... In order to repair all this, Fang Tang established the "Border Organization". It is hidden behind every door, standing between reality and the border, silently holding all the secrets. Every time you take action, you will get closer to the truth. And one step closer to danger... "Walking between reality and the border, we are both hunters and prey."
"Alienation Frontier"-T3 level. Work tags: Weird suspense, organizational management, urban superpowers. Rating: A. The development route focuses on organizational construction, and the atmosphere of strange events is relatively well created; B. It can be felt that the author has a relatively systematic outline plan and is cautiously optimistic about the overall quality; C. The extraordinary element style in the story has a sense of control, such as the deformable black stone equipment. A brief review in one sentence: The development history of the extraordinary salvation organization that treats both the symptoms (reality) and the root cause (border). 1. Introduction The area outside the real world is called the "border". It is an unknown place that has never been visited by humans. Until one day, the border collapsed. Black aura seeped out from the cracks, distorting the rules of reality, and all kinds of weird things appeared one after another. A stone that can change shape at will, a tavern hidden deep in an alley, an arrow target with absolute defense but extremely timid... In order to repair all this, Fang Tang established the "Border Organization". It is hidden behind every door, standing between reality and the border, silently holding all the secrets. Every time you take action, you will get closer to the truth. And one step closer to danger... "Walking between reality and the border, we are both hunters and prey." 2. Plot, characters and writing level The main plot is roughly that the protagonist can come into contact with the collapse and erosion of the world's borders in the dream. The protagonist uses the resources obtained from the dream to establish and run a salvation organization. On the one hand, it solves abnormal events in the real world, and on the other hand, it limits the deterioration of the border. The character design and creation are a bit simple and crude. The author's writing skills are up to standard, and he deserves a lot of credit in this respect. 3. Highlights The main highlights of this book are reflected in the organizational route and cheats: first of all, the writing method with organization as the core is quite fresh. It can be seen that the setting and cheats of the book are designed around the needs of the organization, and the author constantly throws out new content rhythmically, which shows that the overall plan is relatively complete; secondly, the introduction method of cheat packaging is more particular and has a certain gradual process. The evolution and development process, and there is a correlation between them; thirdly, the author made a wise choice to hand over difficult-to-solve problems to the golden finger to explain, including but not limited to venue, information channels, concealment, etc.; Finally, the author has a good character. Although the last book only had a few hundred subscriptions, it was still completed with 4.2 Million words, which is worthy of the word "uncut" in the ID. 4. Questions ① A common problem with business and development themes, the plots are more or less "giving pillows when you are dozing"; ②The plot twist is not rigorous enough, and the protagonist sometimes gives a conclusion without ruling out other possibilities; ③The character creation is a bit inexplicable. Personally, I feel that Li Lele's painting style is incompatible with it. There is a subtle feeling of being forced in, and the sense of presence is still very high.
29骷髅的成王之路
Dragon Fruit Tycoon
Ten years after his death, Vader was resurrected as a skeleton in a wasteland. He thought he would dissipate like embers, but he never thought that a mysterious twenty-sided dice would lead him to start legends one after another. This is just the story of a dead man who keeps moving forward. --Sword and magic, farming, adventure.
Ten years after his death, Vader was resurrected as a skeleton in a wasteland. He thought he would dissipate like embers, but he never thought that a mysterious twenty-sided dice would lead him to start legends one after another. This is just the story of a dead man who keeps moving forward. --Sword and magic, farming, adventure.
"The Skeleton's Road to Become a King"-T3 level. 510,000 Words, unfinished. Work tags: Skeletons, Similar to Zhutianliu, Western Fantasy. Rating: A. The author has made certain achievements in the understanding of skeleton characteristics, biological positioning and ability exploration; B. The integrity is currently difficult to evaluate; C. It has a certain effect in shaping the mood and atmosphere, but the expression is a bit verbose. One-sentence review: A radio-readable novel worth checking out for readers who are interested in alien protagonists, undead creatures, and realistic Western fantasy themes. 1. Introduction Ten years after his death, Vader was resurrected as a skeleton in a wasteland. He thought he would dissipate like embers, but he never thought that a mysterious twenty-sided dice would lead him to start legends one after another. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The author designed a plot mode similar to that of Zhutianliu: the protagonist first travels to a different world, and after death in the other world, he is reborn in the form of a skeleton in a wasteland similar to the world of death. This is where the story officially begins. The protagonist's golden finger is a dice, and its discovered function is to open a dream portal. In this way, the protagonist can reach other areas to explore and interact, and can carry non-material existence back to the wasteland. The author has put a lot of effort into character creation, but it remains to be seen how effective it will be. The author's writing skills are average to above average, and the mood and atmosphere are relatively successful. The personal feelings and writing can be further refined. 3. Highlights As you can tell from the title, the first attraction of this book is the skeleton protagonist. The author has indeed thought deeply about the skeleton, a common undead life form. It is different from the cannon fodder image of skeletons in general Western fantasy works. In this book, the skeleton is positioned as an ideal assassin based on the characteristics of the skeleton, which does not need to breathe or heartbeat, has great freedom of joint movement, deforms and adjusts the volume and shape, and the vision of the soul. If you think about it carefully, it does make sense. How to further develop the advantages of the skeleton form and strengthen and upgrade it while retaining the characteristics of the creature is one of the keys to the success or failure of the novel. The Zhutianliu-like plot line set by the author is also somewhat interesting. The dead wasteland where the protagonist is located is an exclusive area created for the growth and development of undead creatures such as skeletons. It is relatively safe except for the natural environment but has relatively scarce supplies. The protagonist improves his abilities and obtains resources through adventures in dreams, using this as capital to explore and develop the wasteland. This is also one of the core joys of the Zhutianliu theme, and it is compatible with both exciting exploration and stable management. The difference between this book and the traditional Zhutenliu is that the wasteland (main world) and the dreamland (dungeon world) may be located in different areas of the same world, which strengthens the interactivity and overall sense of the plot and reduces the messiness and patchwork of traditional Zhutenliu. 4. Questions ①The rhythm is relatively slow and the text is not concise enough, which further deepens this problem; ②The content is relatively divergent, and the writing is devoted to the cultivation of little ghosts when the basic background and main line are not yet clear. It may not be suitable for the current mainstream model of online articles that start with a fast pace and enter the theme; ③Both the exploration of skeleton abilities and the operation of double-crossing upgrades are still at a superficial level, and the core features with sufficient impact have not been fully demonstrated.
30Under the Nuo Mask
Urban傩面之下
Make A Cup Of Tea
When Qi Lin woke up from the interrogation room, he found that he had become the main suspect in a murder case. Confusing and confusing memories, contradictory evidence, and irreplaceable time gaps... Unreasonable murders point everything to a strange new world. Until he put on the mask and wanted to explore the truth through the eye holes, he found that all living beings were under the Nuo mask and could no longer see the future and ending clearly. [Urban suspense + supernatural powers + group portrait writing, stable daily updates of 4,000+]
When Qi Lin woke up from the interrogation room, he found that he had become the main suspect in a murder case. Confusing and confusing memories, contradictory evidence, and irreplaceable time gaps... Unreasonable murders point everything to a strange new world. Until he put on the mask and wanted to explore the truth through the eye holes, he found that all living beings were under the Nuo mask and could no longer see the future and ending clearly. [Urban suspense + supernatural powers + group portrait writing, stable daily updates of 4,000+]
"Under the Nuo Face"-T3 level. Work tags: folklore, suspense, urban supernatural. Rating: A. Masks + superpowers are no longer new. Maybe the element of Nuo noodles can be regarded as a feature? B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate, but there are very few works that can write well about official supernatural organizations; C. There is something special about the author's writing techniques and words. One-sentence review: A non-traditional web-style urban supernatural novel packaged with folklore elements. 1. Introduction When Qi Lin woke up from the interrogation room, he found that he had become the main suspect in a murder case. Confusing and confusing memories, contradictory evidence, and irreplaceable time gaps... Unreasonable murders point everything to a strange new world. Until he put on the mask and wanted to explore the truth through the eye holes, he found that all living beings were under the Nuo mask and could no longer see the future and ending clearly. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot has elements of suspense but not too much. When encountering situations that are difficult to explain with common sense, you don't need to think too much and just assume that Nuo Mian is responsible for the matter. According to the author's writing style and the label of the work, character creation should be one of the important contents of this book, but the character creation direction chosen by the author may not necessarily be in line with the tastes of ordinary online readers. The author's writing skills are quite excellent, not only limited to his writing skills. The author also uses metaphors, symbols and other processing techniques in the form of expression, which enhances the sense of substitution and makes the world he writes more vivid and real. 3. Highlights It can be seen from the content of the work that the author has both ability and attitude in creation. The setting and plot of the story are not too flawed, and the presentation techniques are often excellent. Personally, I feel that this is an urban supernatural novel with a high minimum quality limit. If you don't mind the content of the story that is not in the mainstream style of online literature, this book is well worth a try. 4. Questions ① The most obvious problem with this book is the writing style. It is a bit like ordering state banquet dishes in a fast food restaurant. You can really taste the difference in taste, but it is neither authentic enough nor served slowly; ② It is no longer the version of the Riddler, at least not in the current field of online literature; ③The follow-up development of the APP and the official organization is questionable. The former has a more abrupt sense of supporting plot tools, while the latter can easily turn into a negative burden that is unpalatable to both parties; ④The opening part is not without its highlights, but what supports the highlights is more the author's writing skills rather than the plot or setting.
31Mercenary War Chronicles
Fantasy佣兵战纪
Gao Jianli
Gao Ganuo had absolutely no idea how he, a herbalist apprentice, ended up working as a mercenary in Nanhai Town. Perhaps it was because he heard the bard say: "Life is not only about the goblins in front of you, but also dragons and the distance." Fararo is a world where religion is paramount. Mortals here are accustomed to praying for holy names and blessings from the gods they believe in. Gaugano's view on this is: What materialists lose is only one god, but what they gain are all gods, saints, angels, Titans, elements, demons... ------ Keywords: pretending to be DND, holy name, blessing, prophecy, adventure, apothecary, blood elf, arcane, church, guild, pagan, plane
Gao Ganuo had absolutely no idea how he, a herbalist apprentice, ended up working as a mercenary in Nanhai Town. Perhaps it was because he heard the bard say: "Life is not only about the goblins in front of you, but also dragons and the distance." Fararo is a world where religion is paramount. Mortals here are accustomed to praying for holy names and blessings from the gods they believe in. Gaugano's view on this is: What materialists lose is only one god, but what they gain are all gods, saints, angels, Titans, elements, demons... ------ Keywords: pretending to be DND, holy name, blessing, prophecy, adventure, apothecary, blood elf, arcane, church, guild, pagan, plane
Summary of discontinuation: Level T3. 730,000 Words, no updates. Work tags: traditional style, simple and steady, DND-like, Western fantasy. Rating: A. The main traditional style is organically combined with some innovative elements, and the protagonist's character and behavior are comfortable; B. The integrity is still difficult to evaluate, there are some problems in the details, and the main structure is cautiously optimistic; C. The author's writing skills are relatively solid, his ideas are clear and not boring. A brief review in one sentence: The longer the name, the more powerful it is, a traditional Western fantasy world story. 1. Introduction Gaoganuo had absolutely no idea how he, a herbalist apprentice from Driftwood Town, ended up working as a mercenary in Nanhai Town. He just heard the bard say: "Life is not only about the goblins in front of you, but also about dragons and the distance." Fararo is a world where religion is paramount, and mortals here are accustomed to praying for holy names and blessings from the gods they believe in. In this regard, Gaugano said: What materialists lose is only one god, but what they gain is all gods, saints, angels, Titans, giants, elements, demons... 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot leans towards the traditional Western fantasy style, but the actual plot design is not overly conventional; in addition, the author does not arrange for the protagonist to become a "special one" from the beginning, and the step-by-step story rhythm is more traditional. He has made some achievements in character creation, especially the protagonist. The author's writing is of high quality, and the embedded plotting techniques are quite smooth, making readers smile without destroying the overall atmosphere of the story. 3. Highlights Personal opinion: The most striking feature of this book is the overall style of neither arrogance nor impetuosity, and a measured advance and retreat. This is reflected in all aspects of the work: 1. In terms of background and settings, the author did not overly mix redundant content. He used "technology and ruthless work" that he pieced together to attract attention. The introduced foreign elements were modified and not obtrusive. For example, many online articles directly copied the game entries to make people laugh. In this book, the author packaged them as "holy names", which is quite in line with the Western fantasy style, giving the world in the story a highly consistent, simple and simple beauty. 2. The character and behavior of the protagonist in this book are very in line with my personal taste. First of all, the character is not destined to influence the world, which avoids the sense of "the world is focused on you" from the beginning. Secondly, the protagonist is calm and upright in dealing with things. He can calm down and level up after gaining developmental abilities. Make careful choices while actively trying; again, the protagonist uses the combination of his own abilities quite well, is logical, and achieves the effect of 1+1>2; finally, the protagonist can face himself honestly and generously, neither coquettishly nor pretentiously, neither giving up easily nor being too showy. 3. The scale of the plot in the early stage should be appropriately grasped. The adventures or conflicts the protagonist participates in are mainly based on self-improvement, supplemented by the harvest of external objects. Once the risk is higher than psychological expectations, stop in time. This not only further consolidates the protagonist's character, but also avoids a series of problems caused by the whole world revolving around the protagonist. 4. Questions ①The detail processing is slightly rough, and the rationality of some bridge sections deserves further polishing; ②For readers who are accustomed to the protagonist being born extraordinary, it may be a bit bland.
32以一龙之力打倒整个世界!
Tang, Song, Yuan And Ming Dynasties
[After being guided by Zhenlong, I don't take anything for granted and I'm not writing randomly] Steel becomes scales, flames forge bones. The bloodlines of the red dragon and the iron dragon are intertwined and fused in my body, creating a dazzling new life. Flame and steel are my innate talents. Adaptation and evolution are my eternal powers. The weak have many worries, but the king has no taboos. Whatever doesn't kill me makes me stronger. In front of me, those who kneel live, and those who stand die. All life and death are mine, and life and death are up to my heart. If the entire world becomes my enemy, I will burn the world with the power of a dragon and then rule its ashes. My name is Garos, and the world respects me, fears me, and respects me as the eternal dragon! ---- There are already more than two million words of high-quality novels "The Dragon Who Controls Time" and "Emperor Dragon". You are welcome to appreciate and read them.
[After being guided by Zhenlong, I don't take anything for granted and I'm not writing randomly] Steel becomes scales, flames forge bones. The bloodlines of the red dragon and the iron dragon are intertwined and fused in my body, creating a dazzling new life. Flame and steel are my innate talents. Adaptation and evolution are my eternal powers. The weak have many worries, but the king has no taboos. Whatever doesn't kill me makes me stronger. In front of me, those who kneel live, and those who stand die. All life and death are mine, and life and death are up to my heart. If the entire world becomes my enemy, I will burn the world with the power of a dragon and then rule its ashes. My name is Garos, and the world respects me, fears me, and respects me as the eternal dragon! ---- There are already more than two million words of high-quality novels "The Dragon Who Controls Time" and "Emperor Dragon". You are welcome to appreciate and read them.
"Destroy the whole world with the power of a dragon!" >>-T2 level. Work tags: Dragon protagonist, self-discipline, growth and evolution, Western fantasy. Rating: A. The protagonist has the beauty of a hexagon with no dead ends + omnidirectional numerical monsters; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. The development direction of the protagonist's abilities is reasonable, the text and pictures are strong, and have a certain impact. One-sentence review: The introduction says that after burning and ruling the ashes, at first glance it looks like burning a boiler. 1. Introduction Steel becomes scales, flames forge bones. The bloodlines of the red dragon and the iron dragon are intertwined and fused in my body, creating a dazzling new life. Flame and steel are my innate talents. Adaptation and evolution are my eternal powers. The weak have many worries, but the king has no taboos. Whatever doesn't kill me makes me stronger. In front of me, those who kneel live, and those who stand die. All life and death are mine, and life and death are up to my heart. If the entire world becomes my enemy, I will burn the world with the power of a dragon and then rule its ashes. My name is Garos, and the world respects me, fears me, and respects me as the eternal dragon! 2. Plot, characters and writing level Not surprisingly, the plot should revolve around the growth, upgrading and power management of the protagonist. Character creation is mainly based on the tag mode, but it has to be said that tagging alien characters does not feel too inconsistent. The author is a veteran in this field, and his writing skills are trustworthy. 3. Highlights First of all, the focus of this book is very clear, focusing on the development of a giant dragon bucket number. The protagonist's exploration of his own characteristics is logical, and the process of continuous accumulation and strengthening can also give people positive feedback of continuous and steady progress. Secondly, the author's writing is quite tense, which fully demonstrates the power and robust beauty of the dragon. The battle descriptions are fist-punching, urgent and exciting without losing the sense of the picture. Thirdly, the content of the story is not just about fighting and killing. The dragons around the protagonist have different personalities and are clearly different. From time to time, there are humorous expressions that make people laugh. The protagonist interacts with them through the "dragon control technique" that is suitable for the situation. The daily plot is full of fun. Finally, the author has been guided by real dragons, so he does not take anything for granted and does not write randomly. 4. Questions ①The plot routines are relatively repetitive and simple, daily exercise→killing monsters and upgrading→sleep upgrading...
33Entertainment: 1990
Urban文娱:1990
Top Of The World
The controversial famous writer, screenwriter, producer, music industry talent, and film and television company boss Zhang Yan once summarized his life as follows: The rise of a speculator, the fall of an infatuated person...
The controversial famous writer, screenwriter, producer, music industry talent, and film and television company boss Zhang Yan once summarized his life as follows: The rise of a speculator, the fall of an infatuated person...
"Entertainment: 1990"-T3 level. Work tags: 1990, literature, entertainment, city. Rating: A. The ingenious golden finger design vividly reflects the social style of the times; B. According to the author's resume, the overall quality is relatively optimistic; C. The author's writing quality is trustworthy and the future is promising. One-sentence review: It's rare to find a book in which the author personally turns into a golden finger. 1. Introduction The controversial famous writer, screenwriter, producer, music industry talent, and film and television company boss Zhang Yan once summarized his life as follows: The rise of a speculator, the fall of an infatuated person... 2. Plot, characters and writing level Internet readers with certain experience can basically get the general outline of the story by looking at the title of this book. The highlight of the plot of this book is that the protagonist is not a time traveler. His golden finger experienced the author's creative process in his dream. On the one hand, he can get the first pot of gold by copying the author's other novels. On the other hand, the author's process of retrieving novel materials also reveals certain future information for the protagonist of this book. Character creation can be regarded as the author's specialty. In today's online literature environment, there are very few authors who are willing to give supporting characters the function of promoting plot twists. After all, letting the protagonist control everything can give readers a sense of security, but this also compresses the space for character creation. One of the writing features of the author of this book is that each of his characters has the potential to promote the plot. He is good at using the character's status, personality, psychology and personal interest orientation to arrange the characters to act reasonably and autonomously, so as to achieve the task of guiding the plot while also establishing the character's image. The author's writing skills are quite excellent, which can be said to be his basic foundation for earning a living in Internet writing. The repertoire of previous works that destroyed poems and lyrics reflects the author's quality and accumulation from another level. 3. Highlights The author has done an interesting job in the cheat design of this book, arranging the protagonist to copy the author, and the author uses the protagonist's hand to analyze his own work from another angle. The author describes in disguise which sections are his proudest works in his life, and which content is the dross filled with water under the pressure of updating. For old readers, this is a fun easter egg that brings back memories. They open the chapter with a knowing smile and say, like "The author of BYD really tricked me into counting coins." For new readers, this is brand-new content that they have never experienced before. It is similar to watching a collection of highlights and famous scenes in the author's career, and it is carefully selected and recommended by the author himself. He promotes old books in new books openly. The author is really good at playing. After reading so many rough and subtle macho protagonists in this book, I feel that the protagonist in this book who was born in a newspaper office is most like the projection of the author himself. Therefore, in a sense, this book can be said to be full of a sense of immersion, but this sense of immersion belongs not so much to the readers as to the author's fantasy time: What would it be like if I published my current work in the blue ocean era of literature and art? 4. Questions ① The selling of ghost coins at the beginning of the chapter played a role in shaping the atmosphere and characters of the era, but it also slowed down the pace of the main plot to a certain extent; ② It is from a relatively long time ago, and new generation readers may not have enough understanding of some characters.
34驱邪从食尸请神开始
Crab Eggs
Maoshan altar, human skin lanterns, inviting gods. The Eight Trigrams are running through the arms, the wind is dancing, the faces are appearing in all directions, and the magic numbers are astonishing and can reach the sky. Nine Hells, Seven Mountains, Alchemy, Corpse Eating, Saha is unbearable, the five turbid worlds are evil, and all living beings are upside down, no matter how bad you or me are. Hello everyone, My name is Chen Ying, I am capable of both literary and military skills, and I am very or even nine times handsome. I was born in the spring breeze and grew up under the red flag. After experiencing an unnecessary but severe labor pain, I became a part-time worker in a non-traditional religion. The current goal in life is to find the source of all laws in the universe and become a sage who is proficient in the mysteries of the world. Our company has a long history, orderly inheritance, and specializes in contracting various civil engineering projects. We once buried a one-eyed stone man in the Yellow River. Nowadays, the competition among friends is unscrupulous. They can actually make such outrageous promises that as long as they change their faith, they can go to heaven and distribute various models of succubi. I still miss the traditional friends and merchants who shouted "Heaven is dead". I really hope to return to the original world. If you have a way to go back or are a beautiful girl, please contact me as soon as possible.
Maoshan altar, human skin lanterns, inviting gods. The Eight Trigrams are running through the arms, the wind is dancing, the faces are appearing in all directions, and the magic numbers are astonishing and can reach the sky. Nine Hells, Seven Mountains, Alchemy, Corpse Eating, Saha is unbearable, the five turbid worlds are evil, and all living beings are upside down, no matter how bad you or me are. Hello everyone, My name is Chen Ying, I am capable of both literary and military skills, and I am very or even nine times handsome. I was born in the spring breeze and grew up under the red flag. After experiencing an unnecessary but severe labor pain, I became a part-time worker in a non-traditional religion. The current goal in life is to find the source of all laws in the universe and become a sage who is proficient in the mysteries of the world. Our company has a long history, orderly inheritance, and specializes in contracting various civil engineering projects. We once buried a one-eyed stone man in the Yellow River. Nowadays, the competition among friends is unscrupulous. They can actually make such outrageous promises that as long as they change their faith, they can go to heaven and distribute various models of succubi. I still miss the traditional friends and merchants who shouted "Heaven is dead". I really hope to return to the original world. If you have a way to go back or are a beautiful girl, please contact me as soon as possible.
"The Upside Down" - Level T3. Work tags: martial arts, fictional Republic of China, folklore, Hong Kong-style supernatural. Rating: A. The Hong Kong-style supernatural atmosphere is well created. Readers who have watched the film and television works of that era should be able to have a sense of the picture; B. The author's story has an unserious temperament, and its integrity is questionable; C. The author writes about the turbulence and characteristics of the times in a place where world cultures meet. A brief comment: The recent economic situation is not optimistic, and even my father-in-law has returned to his old career. 1. Introduction Maoshan altar, human skin lanterns, inviting gods. The Eight Trigrams are running through the arms, the wind is dancing, the faces are appearing in all directions, and the magic numbers are astonishing and can reach the sky. Nine Hells, Seven Mountains, Alchemy, Corpse Eating, Saha is unbearable, the five turbid worlds are evil, and all living beings are upside down, no matter how bad you or me are. Hello everyone, My name is Chen Ying, I am capable of both literary and military skills, and I am very or even nine times handsome. I was born in the spring breeze and grew up under the red flag. After experiencing an unnecessary but severe labor pain, I became a part-time worker in a non-traditional religion. The current goal in life is to find the source of all laws in the universe and become a sage who is proficient in the mysteries of the world. Our company has a long history, orderly inheritance, and specializes in contracting various civil engineering projects. We once buried a one-eyed stone man in the Yellow River. Nowadays, the competition among friends is unscrupulous. They can actually make such outrageous promises that as long as they change their faith, they can go to heaven and distribute various models of succubi. I still miss the traditional friends and merchants who shouted "Heaven is dead". I really hope to return to the original world. If you have a way to go back or are a beautiful girl, please contact me as soon as possible. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot design of the opening chapter is quite brilliant, highlighting the characteristics of the subject matter and having a certain impact. Character creation is one of the author's strengths. The famous debut novel "The Emperor's Training Diary in the Martial Arts Era" depicts several father-in-laws vividly, and you can tell at a glance that the author really understands the ways of the palace. It's not bad to be a well-known father-in-law. After all, being able to stand out from the many holes dug and left unfilled on the side of the road is a matter of time and again. 3. Highlights First of all, the author has made a super hodgepodge in terms of settings, such as the Queen who has ruled the plus version of the Empire where the sun never sets for seven hundred years, the Black Supreme of Egypt, the Thunder Emperor of Eastern Europe... It can be said that there are countless immortals; secondly, the author chose the great era of world cultural confluence and the intersection center of Eastern and Western cultures as the core story background; finally, the author uses the Hong Kong film and television style as the main tone of the work, and the use of jokes and memes is more appropriate. It can be said that the stage is very big, it depends on how the author plays it. 4. Questions ①The development of the plot is relatively abrupt and out-of-the-box. For example, the protagonist with a big background is inexplicably involved in street fights and supernatural events, which gives people a sense of abruptness; ②The combination of humorous writing style and ghost and supernatural themes has different effects; ③The opening chapter has 100,000 words, and the exact meaning of the inverted image in the title is still unknown; ④The author is a has-been father-in-law with numerous criminal records.
351988从蔬菜大棚开始
Running Board
Li Zhe returns to 1988, carrying the memories and regrets of his previous life, and sets sail again in this golden era...
Li Zhe returns to 1988, carrying the memories and regrets of his previous life, and sets sail again in this golden era...
"1988 Starts in the Vegetable Greenhouse" - Level T3. Work label: 1988, countryside, rebirth. Rating: A. The rural atmosphere with the characteristics of the times is well created, showing a more realistic rural style; B. Taking into account the author's resume and the subject matter of the work, the overall quality is relatively optimistic; C. The author's writing quality is trustworthy and the future is promising. A brief review in one sentence: A rebirth novel written by a professional literary master. 1. Introduction Li Zhe returns to 1988, carrying the memories and regrets of his previous life, and sets sail again in this golden era... 2. Plot, characters and writing level Generally speaking, the plots of rebirth novels are of the type with a high lower limit and a lower upper limit, which can be said to be quite consistent with the author's consistent style. Thanks to the relatively single supply and industry in rural areas, the author devoted a lot of pen and ink to create characters and achieved great results. The simple and traditional rural clans and sentient beings are deeply portrayed. As a creator of Qidian Da Shen Yue level, it goes without saying that the author's writing skills are excellent. 3. Highlights The subject matter of this book is somewhat unexpected. I thought the author would write another criminal investigation work, but the author's performance in this rebirth novel is still excellent. First of all, 1988 is an era with unlimited possibilities, and this book has a very broad space for development; secondly, the author chooses to start in the countryside, avoiding the homogenization problem of urban rebirth novels. At the same time, the author's excellent text expression also shows the simple, single but vibrant rural life in front of readers; thirdly, the author has a good grasp of the content scale. It not only shows the difficulty of the protagonist breaking through the traditional inertial resistance, but also does not make the readers feel excessive frustration; finally, the author has profound writing skills and is a rare type that can make a plain plot attractive. It can be said that the author can achieve the current results with such a simple and vigorous style in the fast-paced Internet literary circle, and the writing carving that turns decay into magical effects is indispensable. 4. Questions ①The author's style is uneven and steady, which may not be suitable for readers who prefer stimulation; ②The plot of building a greenhouse from scratch at the beginning is a bit slow, and the feedback cycle is relatively long.
36Forbidden Mountains and Seas
Xianxia咒禁山海
North Sea Shepherd Whale
In the twenty-eighth year of Zhengzheng, the emperor ascended the throne and issued an edict: Do not go to sea! Don't go to sea! Don't go to sea! In the fourth year of Xiaokang's reign, the Ghost Coffin from the Zhuohe River jumped over the Dragon Gate and took away all the people who fished for corpses from the Zhuohe River. In the eighth year of Xuande's reign, the treasure ship fleet returned to Liujiagang, but there was no one on board... Opening the history books, the water veins of the world and the vast ocean in the east are always frightening in the words on the page. Fortunately, as early as the first year of the Han Dynasty, Jiutian Dao Qi descended and made a covenant with others to establish the power of the Three Officials Alliance. With the "Lord of Sheji, the True Dragon Emperor" as the veneration, and the three officials of heaven, earth and water as the main sacrifices, a Shinto official system covering the three religions, nine streams, and eight internal and external sects was formed: Walking in the mountains to collect water, leading fire and fighting backwards, leading sheep and monkeys, Luban catching knives, golden orchids... Everything is included. It has been a thousand years since then, and the three officials have been celebrating the new year, and they have cursed the mountains and seas! Wang Cheng came to this world with a [World Treasure]. When he opened his eyes, he was tied to a king's ship that was about to be sacrificed. He was shocked to find that as the orphan of the King of East China Sea, the leader of the Maritime Merchant Alliance, he had already stepped into the maelstrom of changes in the East China Sea, Southeast Asia, and even the world over the past millennium. (There are already high-quality products such as "Super Voyage", major high-quality products "The Fruit of the Killing Path", and Wanding's "Pirate Kingship", and the character is guaranteed)
In the twenty-eighth year of Zhengzheng, the emperor ascended the throne and issued an edict: Do not go to sea! Don't go to sea! Don't go to sea! In the fourth year of Xiaokang's reign, the Ghost Coffin from the Zhuohe River jumped over the Dragon Gate and took away all the people who fished for corpses from the Zhuohe River. In the eighth year of Xuande's reign, the treasure ship fleet returned to Liujiagang, but there was no one on board... Opening the history books, the water veins of the world and the vast ocean in the east are always frightening in the words on the page. Fortunately, as early as the first year of the Han Dynasty, Jiutian Dao Qi descended and made a covenant with others to establish the power of the Three Officials Alliance. With the "Lord of Sheji, the True Dragon Emperor" as the veneration, and the three officials of heaven, earth and water as the main sacrifices, a Shinto official system covering the three religions, nine streams, and eight internal and external sects was formed: Walking in the mountains to collect water, leading fire and fighting backwards, leading sheep and monkeys, Luban catching knives, golden orchids... Everything is included. It has been a thousand years since then, and the three officials have been celebrating the new year, and they have cursed the mountains and seas! Wang Cheng came to this world with a [World Treasure]. When he opened his eyes, he was tied to a king's ship that was about to be sacrificed. He was shocked to find that as the orphan of the King of East China Sea, the leader of the Maritime Merchant Alliance, he had already stepped into the maelstrom of changes in the East China Sea, Southeast Asia, and even the world over the past millennium. (There are already high-quality products such as "Super Voyage", major high-quality products "The Fruit of the Killing Path", and Wanding's "Pirate Kingship", and the character is guaranteed)
"Forbidden Mountains and Seas"-T3 level. Tags of works: Oriental navigation, extraordinary folk customs, East China Sea and Nanyang, sea ban on Japanese pirates, imaginary history, saving the world, sister control, pictures and texts. Rating: A. The subject matter is novel, Nanyang, sea ban, Japanese pirates, folk customs, etc. Are all attractive and interesting elements; B. According to the author's resume, the overall quality is relatively optimistic; C. The author's writing quality is trustworthy and the future is promising. One-sentence review: The author, who is a professional author of nautical themes, follows the first part "Navy" and the second part "Pirates" in the series "Maritime Trader", the third part in the series, and it is serialized! 1. Introduction Wang Cheng came to this world with a [World Treasure]. When he opened his eyes, he was tied to a king's ship that was about to be sacrificed. He was shocked to find that as the orphan of the King of East China Sea, the leader of the Maritime Merchant Alliance, he had already stepped into the maelstrom of changes in the East China Sea, Southeast Asia, and even the world over the past millennium. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The author's plot routine is, as expected, the overall structure of the material world being eroded by the source material sea + the external packaging of Eastern navigation and folklore themes + the dual upgrade of power development and personal strength + the cool performance techniques from beginning to end + the writing style that combines detailed information at the review paper level with private goods and jokes + the sister heroine. The author has proven himself in character creation, so I suggest you not to have such expectations. The author's writing skills are better than the previous ones. It won't hinder the overall quality, but it's not a bonus either. 3. Highlights The author of this book is on the must-eat list for his personal starting point. It has witnessed his dream start (4.5K high-quality products) to being wiped out in half, from regaining his glory (6k+ high-quality products) to the peak of his career (10,000 orders). The recognition of the author's achievements mainly comes from the following four aspects: 1. Novel material selection. The author dares to choose topics and backgrounds that are unpopular and attractive, but have a high demand for knowledge reserves, which can brighten the eyes of readers who are tired of traditional online content, such as the Eastern Voyage + Voyage to Southeast Asia in this book. I wonder if the next new book can have a Western theme? 2. Content is king. Don't do porcelain work without diamonds. The author has both ability and attitude in data collection and preparation. He has dozens of physical reference books at every turn. Supported by such a large amount of knowledge reserves, the content of the novel is so substantial that it is breathtaking. People, events, and objects are all based on prototypes. The illustrations introduced by the author bring the eating experience to a higher level. The author even won the title of wild illustrator for this. 3. Reasonable and interesting. After nearly 10 million words of continuous iteration, the author has formed a self-contained writing model, supplemented by a solid information database. Regardless of the design contradictions or solutions, both rationality and interest can be taken into account. The plot twists are both dramatic and can withstand scrutiny. 4. Don't forget your original intention. The author knows that there are only three underlying logics in writing online articles: it's cool, it's cool, and it's fucking cool. The protagonist in this novel has an information advantage in the early stage, a strength advantage in the mid-term, and all in the later stage. The main theme of the story is always about winning for a while and being happy for a while, and winning for a long time, and it is a brain-driven feeling with the support of the first three points. 4. Questions ① Being too happy leads to a lack of tension; ②The level of the power system is vague and has no real sense; ③The content of illegal goods slightly exceeds the standard; ④Forcibly praise the heroine.
37A Certain Hogwarts Forbidden Magic Legend
Light Novel某霍格沃茨的禁术传奇
Han Yousi
Hodge, who unexpectedly awakened his spellcasting ability due to a magical accident, finally entered Hogwarts, the school of magic, two full months after the start of school. With extraordinary spiritual awareness, visitors from outside the realm of destiny are venturing into an unprecedented realm of magic. The world has deviated from its planned trajectory. Keywords: memory, prophecy, dreams, forbidden magic, becoming a legend step by step, fighting against gods!
Hodge, who unexpectedly awakened his spellcasting ability due to a magical accident, finally entered Hogwarts, the school of magic, two full months after the start of school. With extraordinary spiritual awareness, visitors from outside the realm of destiny are venturing into an unprecedented realm of magic. The world has deviated from its planned trajectory. Keywords: memory, prophecy, dreams, forbidden magic, becoming a legend step by step, fighting against gods!
Final acceptance: T3 level. 440,000 Words, complete. Work tags: Harry Potter, fantasy magic, fan fiction. Rating: A. A journey of magic based on fantasy and emotion, a pure Hogwarts fan journey; B. According to the author's resume, the overall quality is relatively optimistic; C. The author's writing quality is trustworthy and the future is promising. One-sentence review: Harry Potter fan fiction from top Harry Potter fan authors. 1. Introduction Hodge, who unexpectedly awakened his spellcasting ability due to a magical accident, finally entered Hogwarts, the school of magic, two full months after the start of school. Extraordinary spiritual awareness, a visitor from outside the destiny. "Those words are not what I said, but Mr. Ollivander's exact words." Many years later, he calmly told reporters, playing with a cursed ring in his hand, "a souvenir of the incident." The world has deviated from its planned trajectory. Keywords: memory, prophecy, dreams, forbidden magic, becoming a legend step by step, fighting against gods! 2. Plot, characters and writing level Judging from the character of the protagonist and the background of the story, the main plot should be consistent with the original work. As a mature author who has proven himself, there should be no big problems in plot design. Characters are an advantage of fan works. In this aspect, the author is also one of the top players in the national server with recordable records. The author's writing is considered first-rate in the field of online writing, and the atmosphere is well created, which adds a lot to the story itself. 3. Highlights There is no doubt about the author's accomplishments and achievements in Harry Potter fandom. The previous book may be the best work on the same subject in the minds of many people, including me. Although the author still chooses comfort zone themes, it can be foreseen that this book is not a Chinese-Chinese remake of the previous book. First of all, the protagonist of this book is set to be a new student at the same time as the original trio, which is very different from the reserve white devil protagonist of the previous invincible style. Secondly, compared to the previous book that focused on the background plot, this book will pay more attention to the exploration and analysis of magic. The protagonist through fantasy childhood picture books The section where the heroic giant assists in casting spells is the first highlight of this book. Emotions and imagery may be the key core of the study of magic in this book. Finally, although the plot has not yet been fully developed, the title of the book already reflects the author's new ideas in plot entry. We look forward to the author's future performance. 4. Questions ① The opening part is like a fast-forward CG animation. It can be understood that the author wants to get to the main content as soon as possible, but the method and method should also be considered; ②The identity of the protagonist makes the game relatively weak at the beginning, and the level of excitement is not as good as that of the previous game; ③High emotional intelligence: the protagonist is fully integrated into the background of the story; low emotional intelligence: the protagonist is like a native who understands the plot.
38Ember of the Old God
Fantasy旧神余烬
Shi Jiudong
Kingdom News headline: "Recently, through the unremitting efforts of the Ember Investigation Bureau, we finally locked in Lin Jie Leonard, a fanatical secret cult member who is trying to revive the old god. I believe that in the near future, this thug who seduced the saint, blackmailed the king, and beat the pope will die on the gallows. Light will eventually defeat darkness! " The next day, the Kingdom News headline: "Because Lin Jie Leonard, the director of the Ember Investigation Bureau, took the risk to go undercover to the esoteric cult, he repeatedly foiled the esoteric cult's evil plots and saved thousands of lives. The king decided to award Mr. Lin Jie the Imperial Order of the Sword and select a date to hold his wedding to the saint. Let us cheer for our great heroes! " ... Ash calendar year 1370. The esoteric cult activities that were rampant in the kingdom were finally effectively controlled. A large number of hiding pagans were arrested and many dens of evil god believers were destroyed, and I was the biggest contributor to this series of events. Because I rebelled - an excerpt from "The Autobiography of Lin Jie: My Years as an Undercover Agent"
Kingdom News headline: "Recently, through the unremitting efforts of the Ember Investigation Bureau, we finally locked in Lin Jie Leonard, a fanatical secret cult member who is trying to revive the old god. I believe that in the near future, this thug who seduced the saint, blackmailed the king, and beat the pope will die on the gallows. Light will eventually defeat darkness! " The next day, the Kingdom News headline: "Because Lin Jie Leonard, the director of the Ember Investigation Bureau, took the risk to go undercover to the esoteric cult, he repeatedly foiled the esoteric cult's evil plots and saved thousands of lives. The king decided to award Mr. Lin Jie the Imperial Order of the Sword and select a date to hold his wedding to the saint. Let us cheer for our great heroes! " ... Ash calendar year 1370. The esoteric cult activities that were rampant in the kingdom were finally effectively controlled. A large number of hiding pagans were arrested and many dens of evil god believers were destroyed, and I was the biggest contributor to this series of events. Because I rebelled - an excerpt from "The Autobiography of Lin Jie: My Years as an Undercover Agent"
"Embers of the Old God"-T3 level. Tags of the work: Esoteric Cult, card cheats, multiple identities. Rating: A. The background setting is quite interesting, simple, direct and consistent in style; B. The integrity is currently difficult to evaluate; C. The author's writing is very skillful, clear and can show the charm of the magical atmosphere. A brief review in one sentence: A novel about esoteric religion that you can give it a try but look forward to with caution. 1. Introduction Kingdom News headline: "Recently, through the unremitting efforts of the Ember Investigation Bureau, we finally locked in Lin Jie Leonard, a fanatical secret cult member who is trying to revive the old god. I believe that in the near future, this thug who seduced the saint, blackmailed the king, and beat the pope will die on the gallows. Light will eventually defeat darkness! " The next day, the Kingdom News headline: "Because Lin Jie Leonard, the director of the Ember Investigation Bureau, took the risk to go undercover to the esoteric cult, he repeatedly foiled the esoteric cult's evil plots and saved thousands of lives. The king decided to award Mr. Lin Jie the Imperial Order of the Sword and select a date to hold his wedding to the saint. Let us cheer for our great heroes! " ... Ash calendar year 1370. The esoteric cult activities that were rampant in the kingdom were finally effectively controlled. A large number of hiding pagans were arrested and many dens of evil god believers were destroyed, and I was the biggest contributor to this series of events. Because I rebelled - an excerpt from "The Autobiography of Lin Jie: My Years as an Undercover Agent" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The author's plot arrangement should be the highlight of this book. The protagonist's identity design is quite clever. If done properly, it is not impossible to achieve both hands with both hands, not to mention the possibility of deriving funny plots. The character creation in this book tends to be exaggerated, with a high proportion of extreme characters. The author's writing skills are relatively high, which is a plus point for the quality of this book. 3. Highlights The setting of this book is not complicated, but the style of painting is unified and the logic is smooth. The extraordinary elements are concentrated on the theme of ashes, which not only highlights the sense of weight but also highly fits the atmosphere of the esoteric religion. The power system is simple and intuitive, and the promotion ideas are simple but logical. There is no deliberately mysterious packaging, but enough room for development is reserved. The main focus is not to increase the number of entities, but it is enough. In addition, it is worth mentioning that the author's words can maintain a certain degree of appeal despite a relatively monotonous extraordinary structure, which is the best proof of the author's writing skills. 4. Questions ① The protagonist frequently encounters troubles, the threshold for the fate of the gods is not high, and the way to solve problems is slightly rough... These details make the story give people the bad impression of being like child's play; ② The important characters all have outstanding quirks. Although there may be reasonable explanations, it will inevitably destroy the atmosphere and sense of substitution of the work to a certain extent; ③Goldfinger is too simple and crude. The simplicity is reflected in the fact that it is like copying a card game and lacks proper packaging modification. The crudeness lies in the strength super model. The initial function is similar to being immune to all negative states and has top growth and scalability; ④ There is a lack of decisive highlights. The double identity of the protagonist may be considered a possibility but it has not yet been expressed with enough weight.
39Myth of Trickery
Xianxia诡道神话
The Younger Brother Among Younger Brothers
This is a world where ghosts and myths are intertwined. Countless ghosts and gods are derived from familiar mythological allusions. Lord Xingxin hanging upside down in the air, General Fenshui wandering in the deep sea, Jiazi Taisui sitting in the clouds... Who would have thought that at the end of a mortal's practice, there would be ghosts and gods.
This is a world where ghosts and myths are intertwined. Countless ghosts and gods are derived from familiar mythological allusions. Lord Xingxin hanging upside down in the air, General Fenshui wandering in the deep sea, Jiazi Taisui sitting in the clouds... Who would have thought that at the end of a mortal's practice, there would be ghosts and gods.
Final acceptance: T3 level. 1.65 Million words, complete. Work tags: Weird and curious, mythology and folk customs, variant simulator flow, ancient spiritual practice. Rating: A. The pursuit of novelty and weird style was successfully created, and the simulator's golden finger was fully utilized; B. The overall quality is quite so-so, and the parts that are difficult to explain are basically ignored; C. Text and imagination are harmoniously combined, and the hunting scenes are quite picturesque. One-sentence review: The reading experience is a bit like a zombie version of a superhero or a weird version of myths and legends. 1. Introduction This is a world where ghosts and myths are intertwined. Countless ghosts and gods are derived from familiar mythological allusions. The Xing Xing Lord hanging upside down in the air, the Shui Shui General wandering in the deep sea, Jiazi Tai Sui sitting in the clouds... Who would have thought that at the end of a mortal's practice, there would be ghosts and gods. [Warrior: Eat like gluttons, and refine hungry ghosts into Dantian. Those with a strong appetite will have abundant Qi and blood. ] [Qi Practitioner: Using ghost pupils as eyes, he can know the Yin meridians of the world, breathe out Yin Qi and practice. ] [Gu Master: Corpse worms enter the heart, and the ghost in the abdomen replaces the intestines and stomach to feed the worms. ] [Sword Cultivator: The spine is attached to the mother ghost and turns into a sword soul, the sword is integrated into the child ghost, and the flying sword can be used to kill people's heads for hundreds of miles. ] 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot can be roughly divided into two parts: the main world and the dungeon world. The main mode is to be beaten and upgraded in the dungeon world, and to enjoy the results and control thunder and lightning in the main world. The characters tend to be crazy and crazy, which fits well with the overall world view. The author's writing skills are average to above average, and he is especially skilled in the creation of weirdness. 3. Highlights The subject of treacherous cultivation is considered the author's specialty, and the scenes, atmosphere, and character creation are all performed to a high level. The protagonist in the main world always has the advantage of information and strength, and is responsible for the sense of pleasure in the story; the dungeon world shows the curiosity and oppression of the weird myth, and is responsible for the weirdness in the story. The division of labor between the two is reasonable and each shows its own special abilities. The author has a good grasp of the balance between the weird atmosphere and the sense of security. 4. Questions ① Upgrading does not feel satisfying enough, and in most cases the problem is solved by plot killing; ②The quality of the copy is difficult to maintain a high level stably, and it is easy to get tired of aesthetics in the middle and later stages; ③A common problem with weird writing is that its rationality cannot withstand in-depth investigation, especially since this book also involves the interaction between history and current time and space.
40人在欧洲,我是古董军火商
Great Craftsman
After the war, ammunition, equipment, and treasures in oil paper bags are still scattered across Europe and even the world today. [Battlefield intelligence: In the cellar of an abandoned residence in Ruedov, there is the OHV 750cc BMW engine you need] [Battlefield Intelligence: The ammunition depot in the abandoned military camp in Vostro has the 50mm mortar shells you need] ............ [Battlefield Intelligence: In the swamps of Kursk, there is the Porsche electric transmission chassis you need] A magical Enigma machine, carrying the battlefield intelligence system, opened the wonderful life of Xia Yu, a German student studying abroad. Arms dealers in the antique circle said: It is better to use weapons for entertainment than for war. The wealth buried in the soil is not wealth. Collection is just a short-term possession. Behind it is a relay life. PS: This book is also known as "Armed Gold Captain", "I Practice Tiger Style in DDR", and "Europe on the Bite of the Tongue"
After the war, ammunition, equipment, and treasures in oil paper bags are still scattered across Europe and even the world today. [Battlefield intelligence: In the cellar of an abandoned residence in Ruedov, there is the OHV 750cc BMW engine you need] [Battlefield Intelligence: The ammunition depot in the abandoned military camp in Vostro has the 50mm mortar shells you need] ............ [Battlefield Intelligence: In the swamps of Kursk, there is the Porsche electric transmission chassis you need] A magical Enigma machine, carrying the battlefield intelligence system, opened the wonderful life of Xia Yu, a German student studying abroad. Arms dealers in the antique circle said: It is better to use weapons for entertainment than for war. The wealth buried in the soil is not wealth. Collection is just a short-term possession. Behind it is a relay life. PS: This book is also known as "Armed Gold Captain", "I Practice Tiger Style in DDR", and "Europe on the Bite of the Tongue"
"I am in Europe, I am an antique arms dealer" - level T3. Work tags: European cities, battlefield intelligence, hard-core science popularization, pictures and texts, treasure hunting and management. Rating: A. The subject matter is scarce and interesting, the content is professional and hard-core, and the information cheat is relatively fresh; B. There shouldn't be any big problems with the overall quality, but there may be some lack of surprises; C. The stories written by the author are close to life and full of fireworks. In addition, the pictures also add a lot of color to the work. A brief review in one sentence: A story about antique arms and treasure hunting with the blessing of intelligence golden fingers. 1. Introduction After the war, ammunition, equipment, and treasures in oil paper bags are still scattered across Europe and even the world today. [Battlefield intelligence: In the cellar of an abandoned residence in Ruedov, there is the OHV750cc BMW engine you need] [Battlefield Intelligence: The ammunition depot in the abandoned military camp in Vostro has the 50mm mortar shells you need] ............ [Battlefield Intelligence: In the swamps of Kursk, there is the Porsche electric transmission chassis you need] A magical Enigma machine, carrying the battlefield intelligence system, opened the wonderful life of Xia Yu, a German student studying abroad. Arms dealers in the antique circle said: It is better to use weapons for entertainment than for war. The wealth buried in the soil is not wealth. Collection is just a short-term possession. Behind it is a relay life. PS: This book is also known as "Armed Gold Captain", "I Practice Tiger Style in DDR", and "Europe on the Bite of the Tongue" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The main plot is quite clear. With the help of the intelligence golden finger, you can explore the treasure of weapons and make the antique arms trade bigger and stronger. The core of the story is World War II and Cold War equipment, the characters are relatively minor, and the author does not seem to intend to invest too much in the characters. The author's writing level is average to above average, and the overall style is relatively relaxed. 3. Highlights First of all, the subject matter of this book is relatively new. There have been some hits among novels related to the Diggers, but the subject matter is still quite scarce overall. Secondly, the author has a rich reserve of professional knowledge, including history, vehicles, light and heavy weapons, and humanities and customs, which greatly enhances the authenticity and sense of immersion in the story. Thirdly, the author also introduces corresponding stories when discovering antique equipment to reveal the secrets of old things. Combining the past and present life of the piece, combined with the actual pictures released by the author, it is quite a wonderful feeling of visiting a military museum while listening to the explanation; finally, the author is more particular about the details, and the antique equipment penetrates into all aspects of the protagonist's life and career. Even the carrier of the intelligence golden finger is the Enigma cipher machine of the German army in World War II, which further enhances the atmosphere of treasure hunting and life management. 4. Questions ①The core problem of this book is that the plot is relatively dull and lacks explosive points. ②The plot routines in the middle and later stages are slightly repetitive and single.
41I Am Song Shizu
History朕才是宋世祖
People From Eastern Zhejiang
The new book "From Smashing Dunkirk" has been uploaded, welcome to read.
The new book "From Smashing Dunkirk" has been uploaded, welcome to read.
Final acceptance: T3 level. 830,000 Words, complete. Work tags: History of the Song Dynasty, Water Margin, Emperor Liu. Rating: A. A historical background that integrates Water Margin and martial arts elements, and the author has always been good at reasonable deductions; B. Referring to the author's past works, there shouldn't be any big problems with the integrity; C. The author's writing style is too expository, and the plot tension is not well expressed. One-sentence review: A new book by a trustworthy old author, tentatively designated T3. 1. Introduction Who said someone with the surname Zhao could not rebel against the Song Dynasty? Inside there is Songjiang Fangla, outside there are Liao, Jin and Xixia, and there are six thieves in the middle who harm the people. Zhao Ji and Zhao Gou Pifu, if you can't control this world, let me do it. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The protagonist is a descendant of Zhao Da whose family has declined. He is a candidate for officialdom and on his way back home, he encounters the green-faced beast Yang Zhi in the Hua Shi Gang boat capsizing incident. He becomes acquainted with the Murong family. The follow-up should be a plot line that quells Fang La's rebellion and makes the Song Dynasty great again. Characters are an important part of historical literature, but judging from the author's consistent writing style, one should not expect too much in terms of character creation. The author's writing skills are excellent. On the one hand, he can explain the plot and logic clearly, but on the other hand, he also has shortcomings in creating atmosphere. 3. Highlights The basic foundation for the quality of this book is the author's relatively mature online writing experience and reasonable problem-solving ideas. The former is a reliable guarantee of the lower limit of the quality of the work, while the latter determines the final height of the book to a considerable extent. At present, there are many works on historical time travel that ignore the background of the times and objective conditions, and unconditionally choose hard solutions through industrialization and upgrading. The author of this book basically has no such problem. It is the author's specialty to propose logical and operable problem-solving methods. 4. Questions ① The author's expository writing style is the main negative factor in the appeal of his works. He can make all kinds of exciting scenes seem ordinary and turn magic into decay; ② The author's writing style also affects the charm of the characters. I personally speculate that the reason why the author's performance in Three Kingdoms is better than other historical themes is that the characters of the Three Kingdoms are deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, which to a certain extent conceals the problem of the author's character creation.
42The Copy is 0 Fault-tolerant, and the Last Words All over the Place Have Been Made for Me
Science Fiction副本0容错,满地遗言替我错完了
Twelve Foods
Violating hospital rules and leaving the ward late at night will result in sudden death. Without access application, climbing over the gate will be blocked. Bet money with the fat guy in the lounge and he'll cheat and win your life. How do I know, you ask? The last words of players everywhere said that this is how they died. After many dangers, I met the hidden guardian of justice and asked me to see what the last words on his body were saying. "Master Priest, don't do anything. I am also a believer of the evil god. We are our own!" Oh, it's another trap, there's nothing to say, just light up the health bar!
Violating hospital rules and leaving the ward late at night will result in sudden death. Without access application, climbing over the gate will be blocked. Bet money with the fat guy in the lounge and he'll cheat and win your life. How do I know, you ask? The last words of players everywhere said that this is how they died. After many dangers, I met the hidden guardian of justice and asked me to see what the last words on his body were saying. "Master Priest, don't do anything. I am also a believer of the evil god. We are our own!" Oh, it's another trap, there's nothing to say, just light up the health bar!
"The copy is 0 fault-tolerant, and the last words all over the place have been made for me" - Level T3. Work tags: Infinite flow, relaxed humor, golden finger of last words, imaginary city. Rating: A. The plot of the dungeon is remarkable, but the real plot is relatively inferior; B. The wholeness is rather stretched, and some details cannot withstand in-depth study; C. The author has a certain sense of humor and imagination, and the scale is moderate. A brief review in one sentence: The protagonist's starting ability is relatively hellish, but his name just makes up for the lack of hellishness. 1. Introduction Violating hospital rules and leaving the ward late at night will result in sudden death. Without access application, climbing over the gate will be blocked. Bet money with the fat guy in the lounge and he'll cheat and win your life. How do I know, you ask? The last words of players everywhere said that this is how they died. After many dangers, I met the hidden guardian of justice and asked me to see what the last words on his body were saying. "Master Priest, don't do anything. I am also a believer of the evil god. We are our own!" Oh, it's another trap, there's nothing to say, just light up the health bar! 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of the dungeon is indeed pretty good, but other parts are a bit unsatisfactory. The author of the book uses a lot of extreme characters in the real world, but the dungeon NPCs are much more normal. The author's writing skills are quite good, and there are many wild and unconstrained metaphors in the story that make people laugh. 3. Highlights The biggest highlight of this book is the plot of the copy. First of all, the background materials of the dungeon are unconventional and well-shaped, which is both fresh and distinctive. Secondly, the plot of the dungeon is carefully designed. Each dungeon is not a single story that can be seen at a glance. The plot twists are basically logical and the foreshadowing is generally in place. Finally, the plot rhythm of the dungeon is well controlled. The volume of the two opening dungeons is controlled at 20+ chapters, which can present a relatively complex story without excessively testing the readers' patience. Another feature of this book is the deep integration of memes. The phenomenon of using memes can be said to be quite common in current online articles. However, this book is different from the relatively common method of using memes to adjust the atmosphere. Many of the memes are deeply integrated with the plot of the story. It can be said that the author is not only playing with memes, but also using memes. Reading allows readers to appreciate the fun of memes without making the story unbalanced in the direction of fun and fun. 4. Questions ① There are basically no Mugenliu novels that can write about official organizations well, and this book is no exception; ②The rationality of non-dungeon plots is not as good as that of dungeon plots, especially the economic system, and even some ancient online game novels have a sense of déjà vu; ③The plot design of the dungeon is good, but every time the final BOSS feels a little fragmented, and it feels like a white jade with slight flaws; ④Although it is true that the plot serves the plot of the work, the rigor of the system should not be ignored. Many of the abilities and props in the story are too deliberately tailored for plot twists, sometimes with supermodel strength and sometimes inexplicably.
43Mysterious Stories
Fantasy神秘物语
Luoqinhai
Demon refers to magical power; Shu refers to magic; the power of magic comes from mystery. The mystery is fixed. The more people know about it, the more the mystery is dispersed, and the mysterious power that everyone obtains will be weakened. Even magic, if it is cracked by someone and obtained by multiple people, will be downgraded to magic. Eleven magics, each with its own wonder! The third method: interference of will The fifth method: formulation of cause and effect The Sixth Method: Elemental Control The ninth method: forbidden spells If there is anything else specific, come in and find the answer!
Demon refers to magical power; Shu refers to magic; the power of magic comes from mystery. The mystery is fixed. The more people know about it, the more the mystery is dispersed, and the mysterious power that everyone obtains will be weakened. Even magic, if it is cracked by someone and obtained by multiple people, will be downgraded to magic. Eleven magics, each with its own wonder! The third method: interference of will The fifth method: formulation of cause and effect The Sixth Method: Elemental Control The ninth method: forbidden spells If there is anything else specific, come in and find the answer!
Abort summary: T1.5 Level. 1.1 Million words, no updates. Work tags: Western fantasy, supernatural battle, mysterious epic, Xingyue fanfic. Rating: A. The background is grand, the setting is emotional, the emotions are sincere, and the battles are exciting; B. The overall quality is good, and it even has an epic feel in the later stage, but unfortunately it has become the last song; C. There are some problems with the rhythm of the plot, and it has a slightly homey feel. One-sentence review: If you put on a nostalgic filter, this book can be considered a T1 level 1. Introduction A soul from another world rejected by the world embarks on the path of the twelfth magician. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot was a little slow at the beginning, but became more and more exciting from the middle. I personally reread it many times starting from the point where the protagonist reunited with his father. The character creation of this book is also relatively successful. At the core character level, there are key descriptions and relatively outstanding characters in both the enemy and friendly camps. For example, the protagonist's father Allison is a ruthless warrior outside, a doting husband beside his wife, and a father with complex emotions and poor expression when dealing with his son. Although the lines are relatively few and may not be very profound, they can always make people feel the sincere and deep inner emotions. He is a successful character that can embody multi-dimensional charm that is uncommon in online books. The author's writing style is delicate and elegant, and the reading experience is excellent. 3. Highlights The description of family affection, especially that of the protagonist's family, is fully worthy of a sincere and touching evaluation. In just a dozen chapters, the reader is introduced to a warm family composed of an elegant and loving mother, a clumsy but sincere father, and children who pretend to be confused and enjoy family care. This book can be said to be a bit slow in the early stages, but the extremely delicate and vivid description of family life plays an excellent transitional effect. In addition, the author's outstanding description of family love is not only reflected in the protagonist's family, but also the Holy Father who appears in the middle and later stages of the novel can also make people feel the greatness and unrequited love of family. The description of the battle scenes is a highlight of "Mysterious Story". The protagonist has embarked on a unique path based on the knowledge of his previous life. The basis of his personal system is based on a very simple ability, but the protagonist can perform many amazing operations with this ability alone. The idea of converting abilities into attacks is amazing. It breaks away from the simple routines of higher, faster and stronger in the traditional web novels. The imaginative fighting method can be said to be far better than the various "One Punch Man" and "Mighty Fighter" that are now rampant. Although the protagonist also has fixed moves, the author has not used some mature routines until they fail, causing reader fatigue. Basically, in every medium and high-intensity battle, the protagonist can maximize the effect of his own abilities to weaken the opponent according to local conditions, and come up with some creative new tricks based on the actual situation. It is eye-catching and enjoyable. It can be said that it perfectly explains the core concept that magic can not only be used in direct combat. 4. Questions ① A common problem in ancient texts is that the rhythm is not smooth enough; ②The author's writing style and some plot arrangements have a certain homely feel; ③There is no more below.
44没点毛病谁学心理学啊
Panda's Big Wooden House
[Who would study psychology if there is nothing wrong with them? "Who said this?" Nan Zhuren raised his eyebrows: "He's right!" ... Professional articles on psychological themes. Serious keyword 1: [depression] [personality disorder] [hypochondriasis disorder] [post-traumatic stress disorder] [Oedipus complex] [groupthink], etc. Serious keyword 2: [Big Five Personality] [Behavior Modification] [Dream Analysis] [Hakoniya Therapy] [Reasonable Emotional Therapy], etc.
[Who would study psychology if there is nothing wrong with them? "Who said this?" Nan Zhuren raised his eyebrows: "He's right!" ... Professional articles on psychological themes. Serious keyword 1: [depression] [personality disorder] [hypochondriasis disorder] [post-traumatic stress disorder] [Oedipus complex] [groupthink], etc. Serious keyword 2: [Big Five Personality] [Behavior Modification] [Dream Analysis] [Hakoniya Therapy] [Reasonable Emotional Therapy], etc.
"Who can study psychology if there is nothing wrong with them" - Level T3. Work tags: psychological counseling, city, system flow. Rating: A. This is called professional. Jpg; B. Urban professional literature generally does not have overall problems; C. The overall rhythm is relatively relaxed. A brief comment in one sentence: There are limits to psychological counseling. Fortunately, I am the protagonist of the novel. 1. Introduction [Who would study psychology if there is nothing wrong with them? ] "Who said this?" Nan Zhuren raised his eyebrows: "He's right!" ... Professional articles on psychological themes. Serious keyword 1: [depression] [personality disorder] [hypochondriasis disorder] [post-traumatic stress disorder] [Oedipus complex] [groupthink], etc. Serious keyword 2: [Big Five Personality] [Behavior Modification] [Dream Analysis] [Hakoniya Therapy] [Reasonable Emotional Therapy], etc. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of this book is not entirely limited to the field of psychology, and it even somewhat makes up for regrets. After all, in reality, psychological counselors can help clients find problems, but many times it is difficult to solve them. Just like the name of the protagonist, it is difficult to help others. Character creation is both the strength and weakness of this book. On the one hand, psychological analysis can deeply analyze the characters and allow readers to fully understand the characteristics of the characters; on the other hand, psychological analysis deconstructs the characters too thoroughly, making it easier for readers to regard them as tools to a certain extent. The author's writing skills are average to above average, and because he incorporates a lot of professional knowledge, the reading experience is somewhat dry. This is also a common problem in hard-core professional writing. 3. Highlights First of all, since the author himself is a practitioner with a professional background who has systematically studied in higher education and has practical experience, the professionalism of this book as a professional text is unquestionable; secondly, even in today's era, psychological counseling is a relatively mysterious profession, which is more fresh and attractive to readers who are accustomed to various conventional professional texts; Thirdly, based on the author's solid professional foundation, this book is more realistic in style and has a strong sense of reality. It is not a demonizing stereotype of being indecisive and hypnotic + talking skills. Finally, the author is very clear that what he is creating is an online novel, which balances the seriousness and entertainment of the story well, and professional issues are expressed in a "human-speaking" way as much as possible. 4. Questions ①The plot is relatively simple and elegant, lacking explosive points.