Crimson Blade: Wandering Journey

"Scarlet Blade: Wandering Journey"-T3 level. Work tags: DND Deserted State, Western Fantasy, No Golden Finger, Realistic Style. Rating: A. The protagonist's image is remarkable; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. Character interaction is a bit cumbersome. A brief review in one sentence: The reading experience is a bit like an adventure game with a first-class single-player plot but poor online experience. 1. Introduction Wandering - wandering - traveling far - Honor-Hangover-Death- This is the story of an adventurer 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of the story is relatively clear. The protagonist is a young and well-known bounty hunter who has gained the opportunity to join the Imperial Academy of Magic through years of hard work. The long-term plot aims at learning magic to save his hometown that is gradually being swallowed up by the swamp. The short-term plot mainly tells the protagonist's series of efforts to join the empire's mage training system. The character creation in this book is a bit polarizing. The protagonist's image is relatively successful, and it perfectly interprets the appearance and interior of a strong man. He has both outstanding strength and the extraordinary inner ability to control this strength. The other characters may be to set off the protagonist. Although they are flesh and blood, they seem to be a little too weak or emotional... The author's writing is of high quality, which adds a lot to the overall atmosphere. 3. Highlights The main highlights of this book are as follows: first, the author's writing style is more consistent with the background of Western fantasy, especially the protagonist's independent plot part, which is simple and lively, clear in expression, smooth and smooth, and the narrative technique makes people feel smooth and natural; secondly, the protagonist's character is comfortable, strong in execution, clear in goal, firm in heart, and clear in mind. As a seasoned adventurer who is young but has a long working experience, the protagonist is able to make decisions before taking action without losing the courage to take advantage of the fire. He has good strength and delicate mind, and is a bit like a tiger sniffing the roses; again, both the protagonist and the plot are relatively safe. The high-level Shuangwen mode is like the protagonist's fighting method, which starts with a critical strike to establish the victory, and then proceeds to patiently and steadily deal with it until victory, without giving the opponent any chance to counterattack, leaving the enemy confused in defeat and dying in frustration; finally, there is no special cheat introduced in this book. 4. Questions ① Although the title of the book already indicates that the nature of organizations that use blood magic is not too negative, the author deliberately used too much force in the early stage to create an oppositional image between the empire and the blood magic organization. The protagonist forcibly sided with the blood magic organization without any evidence, just like the empire and the blood magic organization in the Werewolf game. The former does good things and the latter does bad things. The protagonist says that it has nothing to do with me while choosing to side with the blood magic organization. This can only be regarded as a charging wolf... ②Compared with the smooth narrative of the plot, the character dialogue and communication scenes seem a bit tedious and awkward; ③ There is still a lot of room for improvement in the rhythm control. For example, the scenes between trading owl bears and defeating jackals are too slow and too fast. One reading experience is awkward and the other is inexplicably abrupt; ④As a Chinese online novel, is it necessary to list both Chinese and English names of spells? ⑤Perhaps to highlight the protagonist, the performance of other characters is not satisfactory.

"Scarlet Blade: Wandering Journey"-T3 level. 600,000 Words, no updates. Work tags: DND Deserted State, Western Fantasy, No Golden Finger, Realistic Style. Rating: A. The protagonist's image is remarkable; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. Character interaction is a bit cumbersome. One-sentence review: It is recommended to treat it as a short story. Giving up the book after reading the owlbear hunting section is the most cost-effective reading option. 1. Introduction Wandering - wandering - traveling far - Honor-Hangover-Death- This is the story of an adventurer 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of the story is relatively clear. The protagonist is a young and well-known bounty hunter who has gained the opportunity to join the Imperial Academy of Magic through years of hard work. The long-term plot aims at learning magic to save his hometown that is gradually being swallowed up by the swamp. The short-term plot mainly tells the protagonist's series of efforts to join the empire's mage training system. The character creation in this book is a bit polarizing. The protagonist's image is relatively successful, and it perfectly interprets the appearance and interior of a strong man. He has both outstanding strength and the extraordinary inner ability to control this strength. The other characters may be to set off the protagonist. Although they are flesh and blood, they seem to be a little too weak or emotional... The author's writing is of high quality, which adds a lot to the overall atmosphere. 3. Highlights The main highlights of this book are as follows: first, the author's writing style is more consistent with the background of Western fantasy, especially the protagonist's independent plot part, which is simple and lively, clear in expression, smooth and smooth, and the narrative technique makes people feel smooth and natural; secondly, the protagonist's character is comfortable, strong in execution, clear in goal, firm in heart, and clear in mind. As a seasoned adventurer who is young but has a long working experience, the protagonist is able to make decisions before taking action without losing the courage to take advantage of the fire. He has good strength and delicate mind, and is a bit like a tiger sniffing the roses; again, both the protagonist and the plot are relatively safe. The high-level Shuangwen mode is like the protagonist's fighting method, which starts with a critical strike to establish the victory, and then proceeds to patiently and steadily deal with it until victory, without giving the opponent any chance to counterattack, leaving the enemy confused in defeat and dying in frustration; finally, there is no special cheat introduced in this book. 4. Questions ① Although the title of the book already indicates that the nature of organizations that use blood magic is not too negative, the author deliberately used too much force in the early stage to create an oppositional image between the empire and the blood magic organization. The protagonist forcibly sided with the blood magic organization without any evidence, just like the empire and the blood magic organization in the Werewolf game. The former does good things and the latter does bad things. The protagonist says that it has nothing to do with me while choosing to side with the blood magic organization. This can only be regarded as a charging wolf... ②Compared with the smooth narrative of the plot, the character dialogue and communication scenes seem a bit tedious and awkward; ③ There is still a lot of room for improvement in the rhythm control. For example, the scenes between trading owl bears and defeating jackals are too slow and too fast. One reading experience is awkward and the other is inexplicably abrupt; ④The quality of the plot dropped off a cliff after entering the academy, especially the heroine, who was a failure among failures; ⑤Perhaps to highlight the protagonist, the performance of other characters is not satisfactory.

The warrior starts, followed by the ability build of the demon hunter and wizard.

1 point. So verbose.