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Final acceptance: T1.5 Level. 2.08 Million words, complete. Work tags: post-apocalypse, joy, DND, ice age, secret sect, light novel. Rating: A. The original slime protagonist, the mysterious and magical extraordinary power system, and the novel and alternative ice cream era background B. The overall quality is quite excellent. Regardless of the setting, background, plot or characters, it can be echoed and implemented throughout. C. The battles are tense and exciting, and the daily life is fun and interesting. In addition, it is recommended to strictly check the author's side work on external websites. A brief review in one sentence: Although the sparrow is small, it has all the internal organs, and as it continues to discover surprises and unique treasures, it is a light novel 1. Introduction The doomsday impact has almost destroyed all material civilization, but this is only a part of the conspiracy behind the scenes. The remaining creatures gradually established fragile new ecological settlements, adapting to the unrecognizable post-disaster world with different ways of survival. The man-made slime with a mysterious origin was born in the sewer where fish and dragons were mixed, and embarked on the road to legend driven by a passionate but chaotic heart. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The development of the plot can be said to be a thousand miles long, and the author has dug a lot of holes and filled them in cleverly. As clues are collected, the hidden truth is constantly revealed, and the logic is coherent and reasonable. The character creation in this book is outstanding even among light novels with characters as the main selling point. The attributes of the characters are no longer limited to a single label, and they can be said to be thousands of people with different faces. The author's writing is both level and stylish. It can be said that without the support of high-quality and distinctive writing, it would be difficult to blend such complex and diverse elements with the chaotic and escaping protagonist. 3. Highlights The look and feel of this book is just as mentioned in the brief review, and you will continue to be surprised as you read further. My first impression at the beginning is that it is a high-quality moe light novel; As the protagonist expands the scope of his activities, a picture of underground steam civilization slowly unfolds; The protagonist encounters situations and emotions, and the author uses delicate brushstrokes to show the natural and contagious psychological transformation of the character; Revealing the extraordinary power system, it feels like a DND structure with esoteric style CG, which is both mysterious and rational. With the top-level plasticity of the slime body, it can be said that the protagonist is full of expectations every time he upgrades; The first high-intensity battle, the exciting and powerful description makes readers feel the impact of the text, and the later battles show the grand shock of high-level conflict; The humorous and leisurely daily scenes are contrasted with the passionate and emotional battle content. It can be said that the styles are very different and each shows its own special abilities; Survivors from various regions are tenaciously exploring the future on the ruins of the old civilization. The cold and dead land has hidden vitality because of these unique ways of survival... 4. Questions ①The essence of the story is closer to the fairy tale style than the salvation myth. We are far superior to the enemy only in terms of strength. The protagonist finally succeeds in saving the world without experiencing too serious setbacks. Facing the cold apocalypse, the exploration and friction of the development directions of different civilizations are basically superficial, and the overall atmosphere is not intense and urgent. ②The main problem of this book is the plot rhythm. It is too slow in the early stage and a little divergent in the middle stage. ③The transition to opening a new map is a bit abrupt, and the character who invested a lot of ink in the early stage is directly reduced to a mere bystander on the side of the road. ④The protagonist is not a strong and mature protagonist in the mainstream of online novels. In many cases, he is relatively passive.

Summary of discontinuation: Class T2. 460,000 Words, no updates. Work tags: Tokyo flow, Cthulhu, faith-like flow, folklore, light novels. Rating: A. The setting system with the deep sea as the core and including floating, diving, depth and interactive features is undoubtedly the primary focus of this book; B. The author's idea of trying to be inclusive and integrate the mystery and reality of a multi-cultural system may be a good one, but the execution effect... Is hard to say; C. The author's writing skills are excellent, which adds a lot to the book. A brief review in one sentence: The pinnacle work of a senior general manager, with online standards and never forgetting his original intention. 1. Introduction The scumbag traveled to modern Tokyo where ghosts and gods are everywhere. Ghosts and gods exist in the deep sea, so they cannot reach mortals above the sea. However, the scumbag's diving speed is comparable to that of a free fall... 2. Plot, characters and writing level The story roughly consists of two plot lines, light and dark. The bright line is about the protagonist improving himself to deal with the ghosts and gods crisis he is currently facing, and the dark line is about exploring the ultimate truth of the mysterious system. The author obviously put a lot of effort into character design, but the actual effect can only be said by different people. The author's writing skills are truly top-notch in the field of online literature. The fundamental reason why he still achieves amazing results after repeatedly entering the palace to open a trumpet is precisely because of his outstanding writing ability. It is a pity that he has good writing skills but has been cleansed repeatedly. 3. Highlights The author's insistence on the implementation of the setting is worthy of recognition. The underlying rules of interaction that can only be seen are implemented throughout. Powerful ghosts and gods are mostly dealt with by cutting off the anchor to make them sink or restricting the eating logic. Villain organizations or careerists do the opposite, making the deep-seated terror float up by establishing anchors. The author has a wide range of knowledge, and can easily pick up Eastern, Western and Japanese mystical legends. The story contains not only relatively serious humanistic and social theories, but also brilliant ideas from imaginative fantasy literary works. As the plot develops, new elements are always added to attract readers' attention, such as the three angels of the concrete/hydrocarbon/haze industry, the God's Canteen, the black box confession room, etc. The key to the mysterious confrontation in the book is to compete for public recognition. Compared with the traditional direct combat mode of fist to flesh, it is more maneuverable and interesting. The protagonist's several methods of controlling the reversal of public opinion can be said to turn his hands into clouds and rain. In the information age, appearing in front of people is undoubtedly a top-notch refreshing/immersive experience. 4. Questions ①The biggest and most critical problem in this book is that there is no more below. What is more hateful than the Riddler is that half of the riddle is gone; ② The grass-roots team in the story is everywhere: the Tokyo Secret Team, which is synonymous with waste, the Black Gate Club, the top pig teammate cabinet official, the Metropolitan Police Department that outsources everything... It can only be said that in order to make the simple organization built by the protagonist with scraps bigger and stronger, the author had to bring everyone down to the same level; ③The author has a strong desire for expression and is full of confidence, especially in character design. If readers don't buy it, they must not understand my painstaking efforts. I can only interpret it in a single chapter... ④The stitching elements in the book are many and complex, and the author also has the ambition to raise themes and reflect reality, so the reading experience is a bit nondescript.

Final acceptance: T1.5 Level. 1.6 Million words, complete. Work tags: Ghost stories, heavens, cognition, light novels. Rating: A. There are not many settings that use cognition as the source of power, but this is the only one that can form a complete system; B. The entire work, including the setting, background and core plot, is fully closed-loop, and its integrity deserves a high score; C. The rhythm is not ideal, and the plots of some copies lack enough highlights. A brief comment in one sentence: There is no doubt about the author's creativity. From my personal point of view, this book is the author's most successful work. 1. Introduction "From Nothing to the Divine Lord of the Infinite City" "A journey to attract attention in all the worlds" "Becoming an immortal has disasters, becoming a god has pitfalls" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The main plot of this book is to become stronger and climb the tower until you become the master of ghost stories, while the side plot is to increase traffic in different worlds according to local conditions. This book has made great achievements in terms of characters. Among the characters with more weight in personal perception, Qing Xingdeng is more impressive. Compared with the level of imagination and plot conception, the author's writing level is considered a shortcoming. 3. Highlights The author's introduction of the Infinite City and the Tower of Babel into the background of the story is undoubtedly a masterstroke. The former makes the entire story logical and reasonable and transforms it into a pattern similar to the flow of heaven, while the latter carries the core plot of the story. The structural flaw of Zhutianliu is the sense of fragmentation caused by different worlds. The overall work is like a hodgepodge that has been put together bluntly. In this book, Infinite City is the de facto main world. From the beginning, the location of the intersection of Zhutianliu is implanted in the reader's impression, so that when the dungeon world appears later, the reader can accept it naturally. Another major drawback of Joten-ryu is that the overall structure is loose and the main line is vague. The Tower of Babel in this book has laid an extremely solid core plot line. The author even uses Hyakumonogatari and multiple dungeon worlds as a reflection of the final truth, gradually hinting at the surface and inside of the highest goal of the Kaidan system. The power system in this book is clearly set up and is in line with common sense and intuition. The underlying rules of "set bigger than the sky and attack the sun gods" are throughout. The behavioral logic of "nothing", which relies on cognition to maintain its existence, will do anything in order to be recognized can easily be understood and recognized by readers. 4. Questions ① In the middle and later stages, quite a few dungeon world plots are not very interesting and the core is highly repetitive. The reading experience is stinky and long. Perhaps the title of the book has already hinted at it. The most exciting part of the book is the story before the protagonist becomes a ghost story; ② The main plot develops slowly in the early stage, then rushes forward in the later stage, and the ending even feels like a sudden death. Although it is indeed in line with the foreshadowing hints in the story, it is difficult to understand why more words are not put into the core content to make it more smooth and smooth. Instead, it is a high-intensity output in a boring dungeon world; ③ Some of the content in the book may be reasonable, but the balance is hard to say. From the middle to late stage, the extraordinary confrontation basically relies on the author's nonsense. The protagonist's strength increases by leaps and bounds like a rocket. The story style changes to an invincible flow. Most of the dungeon worlds depend on how to make them work. The sense of urgency and oppression is almost non-existent; ④The author's writing is relatively dry, and his writing style tends to be expository. The supposedly colorful fantasy world fails to give readers a matching sense of the picture.

Project establishment demonstration: T3 level. Work tags: Steampunk, Cthulhu, Official Organization Gambit, Resurrection of Goldfinger, Western Fantasy. Rating: A. The background setting and painting style are compatible and harmonious, and the extraordinary system is mysterious and systematic; B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily; C. The author's plot rhythm and text expression are both bonus points. A brief review in one sentence: realistic steampunk, a Western fantasy novel with a strong sense of mystery and measurement. 1. Introduction Langdon traveled to a world in the steam age. This is a prosperous era - the flag of the empire is flapping in the morning mist, and the difference engine is calculating the glory of reason... This is also a time when madness breeds - the man in the mirror begins to whisper, dreams erode at the edge of reality, legendary angels descend into the world... Reason and miracles go hand in hand, and prosperity and disaster coexist. Langdon Lorenzo, a new agent of the Department of Abnormal Affairs, a good citizen of Trisus, and a living sealed artifact. Facing the ancient god who wanted to drag the world into the abyss, Langdon helplessly stood up from the pool of blood for the nth time. "How about you try to kill me again? What if I really die this time?" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The protagonist traveled through time and became a sealed object contained by the official paranormal control agency. After the cultists failed to steal it, it was discovered by the officials. After passing the review, he joined the official paranormal control agency. Goldfinger has high inspiration and resurrection abilities that can communicate with the sealed object. Not much can be seen in the character creation yet, but the characters with relatively large roles are relatively solid. So far, the characters should not be a deductible for this book. The author's writing ability is worthy of praise, the plot unfolds with a sense of narration, and the description of extraordinary scenes is quite graphic. 3. Highlights First of all, the opening scene of the book is well played. The protagonist starts as a sealed object that has been stolen but is undoubtedly a relatively novel idea. The subsequent description of the spirit sea also shows the author's strength in expressiveness. Secondly, the content of the book is quite solid. The background, settings, characters, and plot all show a considerable degree of harmony and solidity. You can feel that this is indeed a carefully conceived and prepared book. The story is not just a toy that just throws away the beginning; thirdly, the author controls the rhythm of the plot reasonably, and does not introduce an overly large plot at the beginning to test the readers' patience, and advances the plot by connecting small plots in several chapters; finally, the extraordinary sketches in the book are more brilliant, showing the author's imagination and accumulation of materials in mysterious and magical aspects. 4. Questions ① The protagonist's ideas and abilities are relatively close to those of ordinary people, and some choices and processing methods are slightly flawed. Some readers who prefer perfect protagonists may have some negative experiences; ②The current plot lacks enough impactful breaking points, and the overall story line is slightly dull; ③ There is still room for improvement in details, such as the lack of distinction in the name of the organizational hierarchy.

Project establishment demonstration: T3 level. Work tags: adventure, pseudo-DND, western fantasy. Rating: A. Goldfinger is simple but not simple. The Adventurers Association has the style of an international organization; B. The integrity cannot yet be evaluated; C. The plot design and writing level are both passable. One-sentence review: A potential Xihuan seedling that is worth looking forward to but requires further observation. 1. Introduction In this world of swords and magic, the legend of dragon slaying is widely circulated in taverns, the discovery of treasures is talked about by bards, and the great cause of killing gods is the yearning of countless adventurers. But few people know that behind that epic lies how much moldy bread, broken swords, lost blood, and messes left by others. "In addition, no matter which commission you make, don't forget to ask your seniors for advice, polish your weapons, pack your bags, and plan your retreat." "The most important thing is to arrange the right audience in advance and design a beautiful set, so that you can better convey your epic!" "Yes, that's what adventure is like!" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The author put some thought into the plot design. The protagonist did not go out of his way to dive into the XX forest/swamp/mountain to kill monsters at the beginning. The plot length of the early missions was controlled to a reasonable extent, leaving room for further expansion. The character creation is not good enough, there are no impressive characters, and there are no extreme characters that can make people laugh. The author's writing level is above average, and he seems to be relatively good at daily plots and character communication. 3. Highlights The golden finger of this book is to temper abilities from objects with extraordinary experiences. The condition for tempering is a personal experience that matches the objects. First of all, the function of this cheat is simple, direct and easy to understand; secondly, the essence of cheat is to exchange one story for another and obtain the corresponding power from the obtained story. Compared with the overly rigid game-like panel system, the cheat in this book is more harmonious with the Western fantasy background and is less likely to cause drama; thirdly, quenching The prerequisite for refining abilities is to experience a story of the same type, which actually serves as a plot guide similar to system tasks. However, with the package of discovering the stories behind the items, the negative feeling of the protagonist being manipulated by the system is alleviated. Finally, the setting of continuing and spreading the story also expands Goldfinger's potential. The Adventurer's Association in this book breaks my personal stereotype of similar organizations in Western fantasy novels, that is, the Adventurer's Association is a zombie organization whose internal management and training are useless, and externally deaf, blind, and passive response. All traces of evil forces are discovered by the protagonist, and reporting to the organization is of no use. It is still up to the protagonist to turn the tide and wipe the whole process of closed-loop services. The association in this book is well-informed externally, operates efficiently and plannedly, sets up internal entry barriers, guides adventurers through tasks to cooperate with the organization's planning, and can negotiate compensation in case of accidents. While giving full play to the association's adventurer scale advantages, it selects elites to train as new blood. 4. Questions ① There is not much difference between the protagonist and the indigenous people, which may be a deduction for some readers; ②The description of the battle seems almost meaningless.

Interim assessment: T1 level. Work tags: cyberpunk, post-apocalypse, Greek/Roman mythology, AI crisis. Rating: A. The background is grand and deep, the setting is novel and systematic, the overall painting style is unified and full of cyberspace flavor; B. The integrity is quite complete, and the setting and background are organically combined and complement each other; C. The writing style is unified and fits well with the overall atmosphere of the work. A brief comment in one sentence: I am the sinner through the ages. 1. Introduction The protagonist is the developer of the digital personality project "Janus", who was plucked on the eve of success. The protagonist sacrificed his life for research and voluntarily conducted human experiments. The sequelae left him with little time left and no money or money. In the desperate situation, the protagonist chose to upload the digital personality "Janus" based on himself to the Internet, and then lost consciousness. The super artificial intelligence Janus hijacked the Internet and launched the "Great Impact" with the goal of annihilating mankind. Countries were forced to join forces to fight magic with magic, and created several digital personality AIs with the same principle to fight against Janus in the network. The two sides fought to the edge of network signals, and even the servers were wiped out... After the War of the AI Gods, super artificial intelligence disappeared dormantly, and the network was polluted by a large number of malicious programs created by AI, but there were also super-era scientific and technological achievements developed by AI. The post-war world was controlled by super corporations, which jointly built the firewall "River Styx" that divided the entire network. The area where danger and opportunity coexisted was called the "Abyss Dark Web." When the protagonist wakes up a hundred years later, while hiding inside a super company and logging into the Janus account to roam the abyss, he becomes a member of the Icarus organization who resists the oppression of super companies, and begins a legendary journey to liberate the world. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot development is coherent and reasonable, the character behavior is consistent with the human setting, and even the golden finger can be perfectly integrated into the background setting. The integrity and rationality of the work are evident, and it is better than the deus ex machina mode. The character creation is quite successful, especially the new organizational leader Booker. In just a few chapters, he has gone through the transformation of a man behind the scenes with overwhelming feelings of oppression → a victim of cyber fraud → a heavy-duty successor to ZTE. The down-to-earth contrast of the voice pack is even more hilarious. Even now, it is still impossible to say whether Booker is black or white. Such a three-dimensional and complex character image is rare in online literature. The author's writing skills are quite good, but he often uses unconventional sentence patterns/word orders. 3. Highlights The author's packaging of the background and settings is mixed and reasonable, taking into account fashion value and compatibility. The explanations when stitching together different elements are quite cybernetic. For example, ancient myths are used to describe super artificial intelligence in order to prevent AI from self-searching and counter-reconnaissance. The setting and plot generally stand up to scrutiny. For example, the two-line development can be supported by the secretly connected logical chain of protagonist → Janus → multi-purpose printer → permission memory → controllable elements. From the lines, you can feel that this is a meticulous work that has put a lot of effort into it. Even the relatively rigid chapter numbering by the author has been done in hexadecimal format. 4. Questions ①The author has a history of abandoning eunuchs ②Switching the perspective leads to a sense of fragmentation ③The parallel plot mode may not suit some book lovers.

Project establishment demonstration: T3 level. Tags of works: Secret Cult, Family, Suspense, Steampunk, Western Fantasy. Rating: A. Embroidered lake background + Tantra frame + mystery and suspense, it sounds like it would be an interesting combination; B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily; C. The author has certain writing skills and the atmosphere of the story is well created. One-sentence review: A mysterious and suspense-style Western fantasy novel worth looking forward to, but the follow-up development remains to be seen. 1. Introduction [To my son George: Dear child, our family is in decline. But if you are reading this, please come back to Paradise Island as soon as possible, we need you very much now. You should still remember our mansion, which is proud and majestic, standing high on the island in the middle of the lake. I have heard the gracious word of the Lord, and am about to be called by Him, but the domain and estate require a young and vigorous Viscount. Go home and claim your inheritance while I am still alive. You deserve it. Your father | on September 22, 1859] 2. Plot, characters and writing level The protagonist's family runs a manor on an island in the middle of a lake. As the eldest son, the protagonist worked in a mental hospital after studying abroad. After experiencing many strange situations, he received a letter from the viscount's father calling him back to the manor to inherit the family. The character creation in this book is relatively successful, especially the protagonist's two companions and family members. The characters are distinct but not extreme. The author's writing skills are good and the writing has a certain sense of immersion, which is a plus point for this book. 3. Highlights First of all, the opening structure of the book combines many attractive elements: a strange mental hospital, a mysterious family, an isolated lake island manor... The author has successfully created a story atmosphere that inspires readers to follow the protagonist to uncover the secret inheritance that lasts for several generations; secondly, the protagonist's character and behavior are reassuring, and his range of abilities He is not shy about taking action inside, and can retreat decisively even outside the scope of his abilities. When faced with unknown risks, he does not choose to fight alone. The companions he chooses are all well-informed and reliable characters, and on this basis, they also have extraordinary potential. Finally, the author's writing style fits the overall atmosphere well, giving people a gloomy, mysterious, and calm reading experience. 4. Questions ①The game of Goldfinger Dreamland Cards seems to be a little too familiar.

Project establishment demonstration: T3 level. Work tags: magic, firearms, knights, war, western fantasy. Rating: A. The subject matter is novel and interesting, and the background has great potential; B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily; C. The author's writing skills and attitude deserve recognition. One-sentence review: A Western fantasy war novel where firearms and magic coexist. 1. Introduction In this world of swords and magic, the birth of firearms gave birth to a new profession - the gunner. But often the emergence of a new thing is accompanied by criticism. Magicians viewed firearms as "crude machinery" and "pathetic attempts by untalented mortals." The knight regarded the gunman as a "coward hiding at a distance" who lacked the courage to fight face to face. What they said is not completely wrong, at least because the gunman cannot be enchanted or transcendent, all criticisms have a foothold. Until on another new continent, the magic patterns deconstructed from the magic core were extracted to extract a new exclusive enchantment professional skill book. As for Lucas Bellingham, he has the gift of "biological radar" and a proficiency system. As long as he works hard, any difficult enchanting skills will eventually become instinctive. Then, the glory belongs to the gunner. PS: This book is a slow-burner. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The background of the story is on the eve of the change of the times when gunpowder weapons are emerging but mysterious powers have become more mature. The protagonist travels back to the younger generation of the traditional military aristocracy. He chooses the emerging direction of firearms as his development path and enters the military academy for further study. It is expected that the external conflicts in the subsequent plot will be mainly about exploring and colonizing the New World and fighting for hegemony. The internal conflicts will be the battle for the route of military development: emerging hot weapons VS traditional mage knights. There isn't much to say about the characters at the moment. The protagonist's personality is highly consistent with his career path, but it lacks some human touch. The author's writing skills are average to above average, and the text has traces of polishing, leaning toward realism. 3. Highlights First of all, this book is a world view similar to that of "Steel Gunpowder and the Spellcaster" in which magic and thermal weapons go hand in hand. The latter has proven that the realistic-style low-magic Western war theme represented by it is still very exciting; secondly, the story background of this book has strong scalability, including but not limited to exploring the new continent and revealing the secrets of super self. However, colonial wars, etc., There are a large number of historical prototypes as reference and it is not easy to write down; finally, from the content point of view, the author's information and materials are well prepared, the plot development is clear, and a series of information such as the friction between traditional magic and emerging forces, recent drills and confrontations, and long-term overseas wars are properly explained in just a few chapters at the beginning. 4. Questions ①The author's intention of arranging the confrontation between the three forces of gunmen, knights and mages is too explicit, and the narrative technique is a bit hasty; ②The protagonist looks more like a machine than a human being, and even the language used in daily communication is quite written; ③Some character names are too straightforward and make people look funny. Why not choose transliteration for foreign language names? ④The combination of novice author + slow-burning works + cool fantasy is a high-risk combination...

Project establishment demonstration: T3 level. Work tags: No time-travel elements, indigenous non-human protagonist, slow-burning, classical fairy tale. Rating: A. It's quite a pure story about alien cultivation. Let alone the time traveler, the origin of the protagonist has nothing to do with humans; B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily; C. The author's words and the background of the story complement each other, and the atmosphere is quite in place. A brief review in one sentence: A journey of spiritual practice that begins with a wild reptile, focusing on the inability to see, understand, and remember. 1. Introduction The road to cultivation may seem beautiful, but in reality it is like walking on thin ice, and only you know the pain involved. A black snake from a humble background, helpless and alone in the wind and rain, wandering on the edge of the human world. Unable to escape being burned by thunder and fire, struggling hard, the road ahead is unknown... True story. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The main plot is basically consistent with the introduction. It is worth mentioning that the author has a good control over the rhythm, which to a certain extent shows the persistence and regrets of the spiritual path. The character creation is one of the highlights of this book. The characters with more scenes are all flesh and blood, which is impressive. The author's writing is of excellent quality, giving the story a spiritual and elegant classical style. 3. Highlights First of all, as a novel about alien cultivation, this book is extremely pure. It includes all the opening bonuses such as past life experience, time-travel knowledge, and system cheats. The short-sightedness, low intelligence, and parasites of snakes are not left out. It can be said to be quite realistic. Secondly, most alien beast novels usually start with a demon or a mature spiritual monster. It quickly transitions to the demon stage, and the beast part only serves to create the atmosphere. As of the time the book is released, the protagonist can hardly be called a demon. This shows that the author does not just use the beast protagonist as a gimmick; finally, the background, atmosphere, and plot of the book are all in the classic fairy-xia style, and combined with the author's writing style, the effect of one plus one is greater than two. 4. Questions ①The story develops quite slowly; ②The protagonist's influence on the plot is too passive; ③The story is relatively dull and lacks impact.

Project establishment demonstration: T3 level. Work tags: Victorian era, witcher, UMA, Western fantasy. Rating: A. The classic theme of hunting in the foggy city of the Victorian era, with Goldfinger integrated into the background; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. The author is quite attentive, and the illustrations are helpful to enhance the sense of immersion. A brief review in one sentence: A western fantasy witcher novel with a unified style and careful polishing. 1. Introduction [On May 12th, I successfully hunted a C-level demon, obtained a incomplete scorched heart, and my spirituality was sublimated. ] [On March 27, successfully hunted a Wendigo and obtained a pair of complete frost bone horns, which can unlock the skill 'Ice Hunting'. ] [On September 13th, I failed to hunt down a witch, fought fiercely all night, and got a morning with backache...] "No? Even if the hunt is not successful, it should be recorded?" ... The fog is thick, the steam is roaring, and demons lurk in the shadows. After traveling through time, Byron inherited a "Monster Hunting Notebook" that automatically updated his daily routine of hunting monsters. He originally just wanted to exchange those dirty souls for strength and live a prosperous and peaceful life. But gradually, "Scarlet Reaper", "Omen King", "Miracle Magician"... These inexplicable names were all placed on his head at some point. Many years later, he realized that the owner of the notes not only left behind extraordinary things and wealth, but also left behind a premeditated and unavoidable disaster. "This is not the best of times, but with us here, it won't be the worst of times." [Real adaptation, legendary tales, UMA] 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot is roughly consistent with the title of the book. I have to say that the author's title has done well. The popular long book titles are indeed very informative, but they also sacrifice atmosphere and appeal to a certain extent. The title of this book is concise and can fully display the theme of the work, which is quite good. It is difficult to evaluate the character creation, but there are no characters that are too extreme so far, and we are cautiously optimistic about the subsequent development. The author's writing level is above average, the text is not dry, and the reading experience is relatively smooth. 3. Highlights First of all, the overall style of the work is highly unified, and it is more pure in flavor than many hodgepodge works. Even Goldfinger did not directly use the simple and crude panel system. Instead, it was modified and packaged in the form of a demon hunting note that is more harmonious with the story background. Secondly, the author's creative attitude deserves recognition. , The matching illustrations allow readers to feel the story content more intuitively, and the language and text also show signs of polishing; finally, the author is relatively stable and solid in plot design, and the rhythm is reasonable. Promoting the plot by connecting small plots in several chapters is more conducive to maintaining readers' patience. 4. Questions ① As of now, no more prominent core highlights have been found. It is not good for online articles to be slow to warm up. If you have to slow down to warm up, you should draw a picture first; ② The opening seems too hasty, and the protagonist's time-travel explanation is not very clear. However, from another perspective, writing too much about the situation before the time-travel may not be conducive to readers' immersion into the Victorian foggy background of the main story.

Summary of discontinuation: Level T3. 1.87 Million words, no updates. Work tags: 1990s, urban magic, entertainment, textual research. Rating: A. Using real ghosts to create magical and supernatural entertainment works is undoubtedly an interesting and reasonable idea; B. Without nature below, there would be no integrity; C. The author has excellent knowledge in the field of film and television, but the narrative technique is a bit long-winded. A brief review in one sentence: Bad news, practitioners have traveled to the end of the Dharma era; good news, this is Hollywood where demons are dancing. 1. Introduction "Hey, Charlotte, the special effects of the female ghost in this movie you made are really realistic! How did you do it?" "That one you're talking about is a real female ghost." "..." The legend of a generation of horror movie masters. A Hollywood version of Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio. A story about a mage in the end of the Dharma era. --Do you think this is an entertainment novel? This is actually a supernatural novel. --Do you think this is a supernatural novel? This is actually an urban novel. --Do you think this is an urban novel? This is actually an entertainment novel. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot is relatively easy to understand. Simply put, it is about using the golden finger to reduce dimensionality and attack Hollywood. The effect of character creation can be said to be mixed. The good aspect is that the author has a deep understanding of the film and television industry, and the endless cold knowledge is very helpful in establishing the character image; the bad aspect is that the information in the old book lags behind, and many realistic prototypes have been destroyed, resulting in the character image in the book disappearing... The author's writing is not concise enough, and his chatter and excessive wordiness are major demerits of this book. The last three sentences of the introduction to the work are a typical example. 3. Highlights The underlying structure of the story is to use magic as a cheat to get involved in the Hollywood entertainment industry. First of all, the story takes place in the 1990s when the technical level is relatively backward. There is no doubt about the competitiveness of "spell" special effects that can be fake and very cost-effective; secondly, it is similar to the magic of the West. The idea of ​​the article is that Hollywood Vanity Fair, which is full of fantasy and desire, is undoubtedly a natural breeding ground for supernatural phenomena and magic; finally, the author is comparable to an encyclopedia in the field of film and television entertainment, with various industry operating rules and anecdotes at his fingertips, and even the chapter names come from the titles of different works. 4. Questions ①As far as personal experience is concerned, the core enjoyment of this book is filmmaking and audience feedback, but the author seems to be unusually insistent on dealing with one supernatural event in each film, resulting in a series of bad experiences such as a lack of focus and divergent climax plot content; ② The book uses a large number of dialogues to explain the plot. This narrative technique is far less compact than the narration, and combined with the author's relatively ink-writing style, it has the negative effect of putting the pot on the wrong stove; ③ It may be because the writing was relatively early and the understanding of overseas society is not deep enough. The American-style interpersonal interactions described in the book are relatively superficial and more like using a translation accent to express stereotypes; ④Emotional drama is undoubtedly one of the core competencies of entertainment literature. As for this aspect of the book...

Project establishment demonstration: T3 level. Work tags: Pseudo-DND, Ranger, Adventure, Psychological Description, Western Fantasy. Rating: A. Goldfinger has outstanding characteristics and is relatively restrained. The details and psychological description give the story a certain sense of reality and immersion; B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily; C. The writing details are slightly rough. A brief review in one sentence: The sense of reality and immersion is acceptable, but it is a Western fantasy novel that needs further observation. 1. Introduction Born into this world, demons are whispering, dragons are circling, goblins are wandering in the wilderness, and dangers are everywhere. Monsters, enemies, and even gods all have a [health bar] suspended above their heads that only he can see. From then on, the ranger's arrow trajectory was redefined. [Weakness attack! -99! ] [Fatal blow! -999! ] A dragon showing off its immortal scales? Interesting, why is there a negative sign of [Old Injury] next to your health bar? Are the saints of the church inviolable? Wait, what is that chain-like [seal] behind your health bar? "There is no real immortality in the world, it's just that the damage is not enough." Bol-Bosk whispered. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot follows a traditional path. The protagonist, who was born in a small border town, becomes a legendary ranger with the help of a golden finger that visualizes the blood bar. The character creation in this book is not very outstanding, but most of the characters are relatively comfortable. It is worth mentioning that the overall social atmosphere is relatively positive, and there are no dark and despicable people who are unworthy of the stage at the beginning. The author's writing is of a somewhat standard but not stable type. The description of psychology and life is acceptable, but the expression techniques are relatively simple. For example, close-ups of lips are used too frequently. 3. Highlights There are two main features of this book: First, it is relatively restrained. In terms of setting, the strength of Goldfinger is not too exaggerated. It is a type that is easy to use but does not reduce the protagonist to a pendant. In terms of story, it is reflected in the smooth and solid operation of several small plots. There is no deliberate pursuit of big news such as facing a life-and-death crisis at the beginning, all teammates dying on the first adventure, or a novice being involved in a shocking conspiracy. The second is the description of psychology and life. There are very few online works that touch on this aspect. Most of them quickly cut into the high-speed feedback loop of fighting, winning, and becoming stronger. This is so refreshing, but the price is that the protagonist is like a ruthless upgrade machine, somewhat lacking in human touch, and the sense of substitution is slightly insufficient. This book contains psychological transformation content, and the scale and magnitude are properly grasped, which can not only make readers empathize to a certain extent, but also prevent them from losing patience due to too much relevant content. 4. Questions ①The opening plot is relatively bland, basically the same old routines that we are used to seeing; ②The author's numerical settings for quantifiable items such as price and distance seem to be open to question; ③ From time to time, you may experience difficulty in reading because of missing words, or even feel that a paragraph is missing.

"Start from the bottom adventurer to clear the world"-T3 level. Work tags: DND-like, realism, team adventure, record-enhancing plug-in, western fantasy novel. Rating: A. Paying attention to details brings a good sense of reality, and the classic Western fantasy team adventure mode; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. The text has been polished to a certain extent and the reading experience is smoother. One-sentence review: A classic Western fantasy novel with a certain sense of reality. 1. Introduction [Squad Adventure] [Pseudo DND] [Mixed World View] Ren came to a fantasy world and obtained the "Adventurer's Information Record". You can become stronger by killing monsters, and you can become stronger by exploring. From then on, he got out of hand and became a low-level adventurer. From dark forest secrets to lost ancient ruins, from underground cities under the yellow sand to floating cities in the clouds. He crossed the snowy ridges, waded through the valleys, stopped next to the corpse of the demon god, and looked far away from the back of the giant dragon. Until one day, he held the supreme crown on his forehead, looked at the thousands of creatures kneeling before him, and sighed with emotion on his face: The adventure has no end, the adventure never stops. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot doesn't have too many tricks. For adventurers who travel through the bottom, the golden finger can record the monsters killed or the locations explored. Reaching a certain number will obtain reward enhancements. The subsequent plot should focus on exploration, monster hunting, team formation, and upgrades. The character creation is at an above-average level, and the more important characters are given background stories with a certain amount of room for exploration. The NPC-level supporting characters also use nicknames to concisely show their characteristics. The author's writing attitude is more serious, and the words have been polished. 3. Highlights First of all, the author pays more attention to details, including but not limited to character behavior and reactions, the ecology and nickname culture of low-level adventurers, the protagonist's experience in non-adventure plots, etc., Which to a considerable extent improves the realism of the story; secondly, the author devotes a certain amount of pen and ink to show the various forms of living beings in the low-level adventurer group, further enriching the sense of layering and substitution of the world background; thirdly , the author is not overly eager for quick success in the plot arrangement, and arranges the protagonist to be involved in a shocking conspiracy and difficult operations without any preparation. The protagonist in the story is indeed like a real low-level adventurer, playing steadily within the scope of his abilities; finally, the author controls the rhythm of the plot appropriately. The first few adventures are clean and tidy, and there are not too many unexpected encounters to test the readers' patience. 4. Questions ①In the opening design, the main character has a reputation as a coward, which may be intended to be suppressed first and then promoted, but the effect is not ideal, it is painless and slightly deliberate; ②The appearance of the female character seems a bit tight, especially since the story has not yet fully gotten on track. ③The early plot is relatively soothing, and scenes like taking a bath can indeed make the story background more three-dimensional, but the price is that it may consume the patience of some book lovers who prefer fast pace. ④The author tries too hard to arouse emotions. The teammates in the dungeon exploring the fortress are all bitter and resentful. He repeatedly emphasizes the defenders' determined fight back then, and is almost asking the readers whether they are moved or not...

"DND: Make the Vampires Great Again"-T3 level. Work tags: DND, vampires, team adventure, traditional fantasy. Rating: A. Classic team adventure mode, the opening plot is also unique; B. There is a DND framework as the foundation, the main goal is relatively clear, and the overall performance is cautiously optimistic; C. The opening section is a bit complicated, starting from the Dark Territory officially enters the main theme of the story. A brief review: Underneath the abstract style title is a solid and rather traditional team adventure plot. 1. Introduction Tags: Dungeons and Dragons (second creation), anti-heroes, team running, magical weapons Linn felt that the only main mission of "Making the Vampires Great Again" seemed a bit evil-- [Prevent extravagance and waste, improve the cohesion of the blood clan, and the current task completion rate is 0.1%] If this is normal, what next? [Inducing a blood count to die permanently and clearing the team of pests. The current task completion rate is 1%. ] [Help the adventurer team break the 35-year-old death curse, the vampire's reputation will increase, and the current mission completion rate is 10%] [Let the vampire spawn be kind and charitable, the vampire become a neutral camp, and the current mission completion rate is 20%] ... [Strength has been greatly improved, becoming an elite adventurer, the current mission completion rate is 30%] When only Linn is left in the pure-blood clan-- [Becoming the leader of the vampire clan, the current task completion rate is 50%. ] At this time, Linn said, "In this case, can I play a little wilder? Anyway, greatness does not need to be defined." 2. Plot, characters and writing level The protagonists unite as spawns who were squeezed by the real Vampires. When the master is being attacked by adventurers, they fight back and start the legendary journey of making the Vampires great again from the Dark Territory. The character creation is relatively successful, especially for the core team members. The teammates have distinct personalities but are not offensive. The author's writing level is average to above average, and the overall style is relatively relaxed. 3. Highlights First of all, this book is a classic team-based adventure running mode. The author introduces core teammates quite directly at the beginning, which is in sharp contrast with the classic lone wolf protagonist of online novels. Readers who prefer traditional Western fantasy are worth a try. Secondly, the author's performance in plot design and character creation is stable and improving. The protagonist team members have outstanding personalities and distinct differences. The plot rhythm is well grasped, and there are basically no repeated routines. Thirdly, the author gives The racial characteristics of the vampire team of the protagonist are enhanced. On the one hand, it enhances the fun of character construction. On the other hand, it facilitates the development of conflicts between good and evil. It also makes the story plot less rigid than copying team battle reports. Finally, the author has both ability and attitude. He has passed the basic skills in terms of ability and the reading experience is smooth. It belongs to the type that even if there are some minor flaws, it will not cause strong resentment. The attitude is updated stably and can basically maintain quality and quantity. 4. Questions ①The plot structure at the beginning is a bit bloated, and the rationality of some links needs to be discussed; ②The golden finger of the protagonist, especially the one in the spiritual space, feels somewhat familiar.

"Dragon's Ritual Book"-T2 level. Tags of the work: Big imagination, new system, sense of setting, ritual, law, relationship between gods and evildoers, curses and sinners, Western fantasy. Rating: A. The setting is interesting and self-contained, consistent with general logic and detailed and specific; B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily; C. The author's writing skills are not outstanding. One-sentence review: A Western fantasy novel worth checking out for setting parties. 1. Introduction (A brand new system, the setting is interesting, no riddles, no riddles, no riddles, the author has completed 4 million copies, his character is absolutely guaranteed, you will not lose money if you join the trap!) In this world, the fate is woven by "laws", and the gods use "curses" to judge the death of the living. However, when the twenty-fifth clock is about to ring, blasphemy will sprout in the depths of the gap, and the abyss will be eroded by the world... In Longjia's dream, there was an additional ritual book. In this world where dragons do not exist, the first dragon will be conceived and born from Longjia's discordant dream, and will respond to the law with dragon breath. The gods never judge, they only inflict harm. Human laws can only be written by humans themselves. The oath-breaking Dragon King of the old world will eventually become the foundation of the law of the new world. Longjia stood on the court of truth, broke the gavel base with his sword, and knocked down the judgment bell with his blunderbuss. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The opening plot is quite satisfactory, with no obvious poisonous points but also lacks anything eye-catching. The character creation is so-so, still mainly based on labeling. The author's writing skills are qualified. 3. Highlights In the introduction, the author calls this book a "new system with a sense of setting", and the actual experience is indeed worthy of the name. What I personally find more interesting are the following: 1. Ceremony. The book has a clear, specific, and quantifiable definition of ritual. The three elements of a ritual include atmosphere, medium, and host. The atmosphere is the flesh and blood of the ritual, which determines the scope and intensity of the ceremony. The medium is the skeleton of the ritual, establishing a mysterious connection and guiding the power of the ritual. The host is the brain of the ritual, and actually controls the start and operation of the ritual. The atmosphere can be divided into seven levels. The first five levels are daily life, strange scene, secret atmosphere, liminal place, and sublime realm. Public dreams belong to the fourth level. There is the possibility of transformation of low-level atmosphere. If the author plays it properly, the fight for dominance of the atmosphere will surely become a highlight worth looking forward to. 2. God. There are 5 righteous gods and 24 righteous gods in the story world. The latter can be understood as subordinate gods. The gods made detailed and harsh laws, and the executioners were the executioners who carried out the punishments. There was one executioner for each hour of the day. 3. Sinner. The extraordinary people in the book are called sinners. They actively violate the law and use rituals to turn the punishments imposed by the executioners into their own lynchings, thereby stealing the power of God and achieving extraordinary results. After embarking on the path of criminals, you will continue to face more powerful punishments until you are destroyed or face the executioner. 4. Questions ① Compared with the outstanding setting, the plot level can only be said to be quite satisfactory; ②The amount of information in the opening chapter is too large. A large number of new concepts are introduced in just tens of thousands of words, and there is room for improvement in the pace of content output.

"Only I Dream of All Humans"-T2 level. Tags of works: cyberpunk, artificial intelligence, dreams and reality, imagination, science fiction. Rating: A. The expression technique is absurd and bizarre but unexpectedly realistic. The plot is based on hot social issues and is meaningful; B. The first story is well completed, and the subsequent development is worth looking forward to; C. The author is very good at giving concrete images to abstract concepts. One-sentence review: The author's first book already demonstrated his talent for imagination, and this book has been further upgraded to "imagination with an overall plan." 1. Introduction Dreams are manifestations of subconsciousness and suppressed human desires. What would a world be like if there were no dreams? Where will human desires be directed? Become a concrete monster? Or become a broken alien world? If you are lucky enough to be the only being with a dream... How lucky are you? Or, how unlucky is it? 2. Plot, characters and writing level Overall, the main theme of the plot is quite consistent with the core of cyberpunk "technology alienates people". Since this book is very prominent in "fantasy", the characters lack realism. The author's writing style is a bit like listening to thunder in silence. The writing is simple and direct, but the content of the expression is unpredictable. This contrast is also one of the characteristics of this book. 3. Highlights The plot in the hospital at the beginning is very good: first of all, the author selects elements such as dreams, emotions, memories, and technology to integrate well. On the one hand, it can be self-explanatory and related, and on the other hand, it is naturally integrated with the plot. During the reading process, people once overlooked that this is a cyberpunk-themed science fiction novel; secondly, the author has a superb grasp of the transitional rhythm of the interweaving of reality and fantasy, with implicit hints in the hazy, the story scene changes from reality to fantasy, and then uses the similarities between fantasy and future technology to create reality. Establishing connections and creatively interpreting what "science" and "fantasy" are; thirdly, the plot twists are often unexpected, but the reading experience basically does not feel sluggish or stiff. The author accurately captures the characteristics of dreams and makes good use of them, even when there are "illogical" expressions in the book. It can also produce a sense of identity; finally, the author has a relatively complete overall planning of the story plot, with sufficient foreshadowing, smooth and smooth plot development, and even the names of the characters have hidden mysteries. The writing experience of the author of this book is somewhat similar to that of the author of "The Abyss Wanderer". The common point is that he rose to prominence with the first book, and the second book made up for his shortcomings and improved to a higher level; the difference is that the author of this book has no criminal record. 4. Questions ①In order to show the absurd and psychedelic atmosphere of the story at the beginning, the reading experience of the early plot can be described as foggy. ②The protagonist's ability to control the influence of the plot is too low. It is not too much to call it drifting. In many cases, he is even directly managed and offline after entering the dungeon...

"Abnormal Era"-T3 level. Work tags: imaginative, genre, traditional style, apocalypse, science fiction. Rating: A. The plot atmosphere is well created and the overall style is realistic; B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily; C. The author has good writing skills and the words are quite tense. A brief review in one sentence: An old-school science fiction style work that is rare in current online literature. 1. Introduction The laws of physics are dying and the world is reduced to a mad sketch. All common sense as we know it is slowly failing. Sudden cancer, whale carcasses on the top of the mountain, snake eyes on the road... When reality falls apart, can reason take us to the end? 2. Plot, characters and writing level The main plot is generally about the end of the world gradually approaching. The protagonist's friend, a top scientist, entrusts the protagonist with a clue to the last light of hope that has been accidentally discovered but has not yet been verified. The specific plot is about the protagonist's adventures in pursuing the light of hope. The character creation in this book is quite successful. The characters with more scenes are all flesh and blood, and most of the images are complex and three-dimensional, not simple and crude products of facial makeup. The author's writing is of high quality, and the words are cold and concise, which fits the story's atmosphere of depression and despair. 3. Highlights First of all, this book has a strong traditional science fiction flavor, and readers who have experienced the era of physical magazines in the science fiction world may feel a long-lost sense of familiarity; secondly, the author's writing skills are excellent, and the cold and cruel apocalyptic atmosphere and extremely diverse living beings are vividly portrayed, which can bring readers an immersive reading experience and resonate with the theme of the story of pursuing the light of hope in despair; thirdly, the author The author has both imagination and science fiction literacy. For example, the scene where the protagonist and his party drive down from high altitude to escape from the gravitational field is quite shocking. The additional grammatical elements introduced are also very suitable for showing the impact of apocalyptic desperation on the heart and mind. Finally, this book is not only a pure "science fiction" novel, or in traditional science fiction novels, the author's plot expression and derived humanistic thinking are an important part of the story. 4. Questions ① This book reflects to a certain extent the reason why old-school science fiction novels are at a disadvantage in competition with online novels, and it is not satisfying enough; ② Compared with the current mainstream writing style of online articles, the riddle content in the early stages of this book seems to be a bit excessive; ③The overall atmosphere of the story is relatively depressing and may not be suitable for light readers who want to relax.

"Steam Knight"-T2 level. Tags of works: fictional history, disputes among schools of thought, changing times, martial arts novels. Rating: A. A rare traditional martial arts flavor in online articles, with simple and interesting background and setting; B. Important characters, events, and locations all have prototypes, and the whole is cautiously optimistic; C. The author's writing can be bold or humorous at first, and the flow is excellent after the plot at the beginning. A brief comment in one sentence: I discovered something good again, and there are still capable people at the starting point. 1. Introduction This is a world where martial arts are still flourishing, but gunpowder and steam engines have also begun to take the stage. Steel, gunpowder and inner strength compete on the same stage, and battleships, steam and peerless martial arts complement each other. Mathematical geniuses use difference engines to calculate sword moves, and martial arts masters rely on telescopes to study astronomy. From the center of the World Island to the edge of the New World, people are rushing towards the future. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of this book can be divided into two parts based on the exit of an important character. The first part has a strong martial arts flavor, and the protagonist is very consistent with the image of a time traveler who is involved in disputes when he first comes to another world. Personally, I understand that the main function of this part is to show the background of the times and the atmosphere of the world, so that readers can gradually integrate into the story with the protagonist; the second part returns to the rhythm of the Internet, and the protagonist begins to take control of the situation and act proactively. The author does not engage in major events that often require three-digit chapters. The gradual plot promotes the smooth development of the plot, making the reading experience very smooth. My characterization is also remarkable, and most of the important characters are vivid. Thanks to the martial arts style and the background of ideological contention, the characters in the book can fully express their personalities without being artificial, and it is easy to leave an impression on readers. The author's basic skills may not be top-notch, but his personal style has begun to take shape, and his method of switching perspectives has gradually matured. He has used folk songs, dramas and other characteristic elements to echo the plot and heighten the atmosphere more successfully, which is somewhat similar to the performance effect of Black Myth: Wukong. 3. Highlights Traditional martial arts style novels are rare in the category of online literature, and this book is indeed a bit like that, not only in terms of presentation techniques, but also in the plot atmosphere, which is also full of heroic feelings and happy grudges. The author chooses an imaginary background. Emerging forces still need to grow but have already begun to show their strength. The traditional camp has a deep foundation but is flourishing and declining. The collision of different ideas has created a changing era, and shows the beauty of exploring the future with a cruel survival of the fittest. The setting is not complicated but is concise, clear and logical. This is also reflected in all aspects of the rationality of the work. The plot turns are foreshadowed but not too convoluted. The martial arts techniques have their own characteristics but do not deviate from the limitations of basic conditions. 4. Questions ①The biggest reading threshold of this book is the opening plot of the first 18 chapters. Some readers may think that this is an outdated novel with a protagonist who drifts with the crowd, but the subsequent content does change a lot. It is recommended to watch the opening plot with the mentality of experiencing the background and integrating it into the story, which may lead to a more ideal reading experience. ②As a novel with martial arts as the core element, the description of the battle is somewhat lacking in meaning. ③Transitions and other techniques are used too frequently ④The plot mode is slightly repetitive and single, especially the assassination master aspect.

"Starting from the Smashing of Dunkirk"-T2 level. Tags of works: Imagination, World War I, deduction, historical novel. Rating: A. The relatively unpopular historical background of World War I and the unique problem-solving ideas; B. Based on past resume, the author's works are generally sound as a whole; C. The author's writing technique has the effect of turning magic into decay. A brief comment: Most of the author's outstanding historical works are about the Three Kingdoms. This time I chose the background of World War I. It's really hard to guess what the follow-up development will be. 1. Introduction Lu Xiu was originally just playing a game, but inexplicably he was transported to 1914 and became an army corporal. As soon as he opened his eyes, his superior told him: "Go and hold this coastal road and withstand the enemy's breakout that is two hundred times greater!" Those kings and emperors who do not treat their people as human beings should be damned! It's the same on both sides! There are a hundred times the number of enemies in the east who want to break through, and there are a hundred times the number of enemies in the west who want to join in. There are torrential floods to the south, and the vast North Sea and enemy cruisers to the north. Can this battle still be fought? "Of course we have to fight! If we don't fight, we will die! Isn't it just like fighting five divisions in a row? The advantage is mine!" "But after the fight is over, I will sweep all the kings on both sides who care so little about human life into the trash heap of history!" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The main plot line is generally about traveling through front-line technical soldiers and making extraordinary achievements to change the world. Characters have always been the author's weak point, and in this book the author even directly let the avatar take part in the battle himself. The author's writing level is difficult to evaluate. High EQ: clear, direct and accurate; low EQ: are you writing a novel or an expository essay? 3. Highlights First of all, the background theme of the story is quite interesting. There are a lot of Internet articles related to World War II, but novels about World War I are very rare. Secondly, the author has always performed well in plot design, the deduction is bold and reasonable, and the ideas for solving problems are unexpected while still being feasible; thirdly, The author's character is passable. Even though the previous book was a hit, he insisted on completing the main story, and the updates are relatively stable, and the word count is reasonable; finally, the author shows the characteristics of modern warfare very well. The protagonist uses advanced military concepts to reduce dimensions to attack the enemy, and develops epoch-making equipment to crush the opponent. This is undoubtedly an important and exciting point of this work. 4. Questions ①The author's expository writing style is the main negative factor in the appeal of his works. He can make all kinds of exciting scenes seem ordinary and turn magic into decay. ② The author's writing style also affects the charm of the characters. I personally speculate that the reason why the author's performance in Three Kingdoms is better than other historical themes is that the characters of the Three Kingdoms are deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, which to a certain extent conceals the problem of the author's character creation; ③The author will repeatedly demonstrate the rationality in order to prevent conflicts. Readers who are not too serious may find it verbose.

"Hokkaido Horse Racing Story"-T2 level. Work tags: Hokkaido, veterinary medicine, horse racing, system flow, daily writing. Rating: A. The background theme is quite interesting, and the author's information is well prepared; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. The rhythm of the plot is more realistic, and the details are well controlled. One sentence summary: After reading this book, I have a certain understanding of veterinarians and horse racing, and I can more or less feel the fun of horse racing. 1. Introduction Just like the spring that is destined to end as soon as it arrives, the famous horse racing family that was once active in the middle and long fronts has declined. The glory of the twentieth century has gradually faded, but the unfulfilled wishes remain to this day. At the foot of Mount Yotei, the inherited torch quietly changes hands. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot is basically consistent with the title of the book. The protagonist comes from a famous horse racing family in Hokkaido, which has declined. Due to financial pressure, he chooses to become a veterinarian. After owning his own clinic, he obtains the golden finger system, and then... Horse racing, start! As a daily novel, the author has put some effort into character creation, and it has shown certain results. The protagonist's personality is quite likable and his actions are steady and orderly. Authors who can write ordinary prose are not bad at writing, and this book is no exception. It can even be said that the author's writing skills are excellent in the field of online writing. 3. Highlights The main highlights of this book are as follows: First of all, the subject matter of this book is relatively novel. Whether it is horse racing, veterinary medicine or Hokkaido, they are all elements that are rarely covered in online articles. Compared with campus, business and Tokyo, which are widespread in scale, the content of this book may be more attractive; Secondly, the author's knowledge reserve can support the content of relatively unpopular subjects. The professional skills of veterinarians and the operating model of the horse racing industry can be said to be meaningful. The protagonist's veterinarian profession can be linked to the horse racing system without excessive overlap. The complementarity of the core content reflects the author's ingenuity in setting; Thirdly, the author is unique in his control of the rhythm, and does not choose the highly urgent style that is more popular nowadays. Once the horse racing system is started, he can't wait to play and win the next day. The protagonist of this book has a softer and more relaxed style. From industry research, purchasing horses, training and training to competing, the entire process is executed clearly and methodically; Finally, the author's writing technique is relatively mature, the chapter transitions feel a bit like a script, the system's presence is not high, and the story content is mainly about daily life and competitions. 4. Questions ①A common problem in everyday literature, the plot development is relatively dull; ②Horse racing is obviously the main attraction of this book, but as far as the opening part is concerned, the protagonist's participation seems a bit low; ③The opening part is designed to balance the quick entry into the competition and show the operation of the industry, and it feels a little like a running account; ④The plot routines in the middle and later stages are slightly repetitive and single.