Alienation Border

1. Let's talk about the most disharmonious part about the protagonist's positioning. As written, the protagonist is the leader of the border organization (a folk extraordinary organization that collects alienated objects) and the new god of the border world (in terms of personality alone, he is a genuine center) The god of the world), is also the appointed restorer of the border world and the controller of the border station. If it is just the first identity, the protagonist personally accepts the commission from the official organization and collects alienated objects personally. There is no problem, but adding the following identities feels too low-priced and completely unnecessary. Status (as long as there are still followers in the border world) and the strength of the protagonist. As an existence that ignites the divine fire, the repair rate of the central world has reached more than 30. Not to mention that the lower god must be at least a demigod, and a third realm. It's too low-priced and fragmented, and there's also an issue with the protagonist's growth rate. I really don't understand how the Storm Manager can advance at the same speed as the protagonist. The protagonist of this kind of behind-the-scenes salvation story should be a mysterious being instead of being aloof. 2. The second question is that the protagonist establishes a border organization to collect alienated objects. The first question is that the entire organization's weapons or supernatural beings only have the Ornament Stone. There is nothing special about it. The protagonist has the advantage of being able to enter and exit the border world and the advantage of being able to create alienated objects by himself. Moreover, the Ornament Stone also has the advantage of being able to enter and exit the border world. It's not that he's bound and can't die and returns to the protagonist's side voluntarily, but he feels like he can be sold or lost by his subordinates, which means he's lost his sense of exclusiveness. There's also the rune system. It feels weird that the protagonist can't praise the divine system for absorbing runes. The divine fire has been ignited to absorb these runes or spells. The fragments should be more reasonable. I will only express my hope for the growth system. As a god, the protagonist can create his own runes instead of absorbing the runes of other gods. The entire organization takes the protagonist's runes as the core, and alienated objects can create a rune printer and the like, which can give the organization special features. Specially speaking, the only extraordinary feature of the entire border organization is the Ornament Stone, and there is no means of extraordinary power. Then it needs nothing but the equipment of the official organization. Such a extraordinary organization has no attraction in the extraordinary field. The main problem is that it is not bound. 3. The definition of alienated objects. The setting given by the author is the product of the cluster of black energy and human subconsciousness. It is somewhat similar to something supernatural. It has its own special logic and is similar to a product of rules. It has benefits and costs. According to the main line of the story, the protagonist collects such alienated objects. The alienated objects born on a small earth can repair an extraordinary world that is hundreds of times larger, because at one point it becomes an alienated object. It's a bit pricey. It's the protagonist's Spirit Blade Pen, the first original alienated object. Although the author gave it a very high rating, its performance in combat is mediocre. It lacks the ultimate effect and can only defeat monsters. It's not even as powerful as the pocket watch that appeared later. It feels like it suddenly fell from a conceptual level to an ordinary magic weapon. This also makes it strange that the information in the alienated object can repair a large world.

This book is actually okay, but the first few chapters were too boring, and I don't know how many people were persuaded to quit. I think the main reason is that the protagonist Goldfinger was not written out in the first few chapters, and the plot was not attractive enough. I kept reading just because I was bored, and I felt that it was well written.

The protagonist's strength, equipment and organization are too cheap, sorry for the protagonist's identity.

It looks good at the beginning, but in the middle, it starts to overwhelm the protagonist.

I usually don't read Cthulhu, but this book is definitely worth reading. The author's worldview structure is very good. It feels a bit like the Lord of Mysteries, but it is completely different. It is not as nerve-wracking as Mystery, but more easy to understand. The book definitely has the potential to be a big hit, but it just doesn't have enough exposure, otherwise it will definitely explode.

So far, it seems to be invincible. It has a good pace and is not sloppy. It is just that the updates are a bit slow. If it can maintain this state with a word count of 2 to 3 million words, this book can be regarded as a god.

In my opinion, there are basically no logical problems, and it is still good grass food.

I think it's pretty good, and I've settled on it. However, this book was quite good when I read hundreds of chapters. Now I'm starting to catch up on updates. The amount of updates is a bit small. The author should try to write more.

Fortunately, there are not many poisonous points. Although many things seem to have some logical problems, the author can barely justify it. But there is one poisonous point that I must say. How stupid can a person be to design the parents of a person who can do divination? Is it because he is afraid that she will not be able to discover it? What is even more stupid is that he pushes her to a high position because he is afraid that she will not be able to escape his control?

The author has strong writing skills, concise and clear writing, no nonsense, and the plot is not procrastinating. Although the first incident is a common substitute in supernatural stories, it is fascinating, suspenseful, and new.