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"The Hidden Library"-T3 level. 280,000 Words, unfinished. Work tags: variant unlimited flow, variant simulator, Cthulhu, fast pace. Rating: A. The dungeon theme selection is interesting and distinctive, with certain puzzle-solving and reversal elements; B. The integrity remains to be seen, there is a certain correlation between the copies, and some sections cannot withstand careful study; C. The good news is that the dungeon has a tight pace, but the bad news is that there are almost no other plot lines except the dungeon. A brief review in one sentence: Cthulhu style single-player unlimited streaming. 1. Introduction Open the archives, cut off history, tease the ancient gods, and mock fate. Xu Ming put down the book and couldn't help but sigh as he looked at the eyeballs and tentacles growing out of his body. "Sure enough, books are the ladder of human evolution." 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot is basically dungeon after dungeon, with almost no transitions. Since the author has chosen a fast-paced writing style, he naturally does not leave much room for character development, which can be considered a gain and a loss. The author's writing skills are above average, and the atmosphere-adjusting jokes and jokes are only so-so, which is not enough. 3. Highlights The author has properly controlled the size and style of the opening copy. Generally speaking, the early copy should be short and concise. It is not wise to test the readers' patience before the story has a strong appeal to the readers. Even if you have to arrange a big job, it is best to adopt a staged mode, and stop in time when the plot points are reached. This book does a relatively good job in this regard. The first two copies are both solved within 5-10 chapters. In addition, the author has put a lot of thought into the selection of themes and the creation of the painting style and atmosphere of the copies. Although the copies are short in length, they have distinctive features and prominent themes, and most of them have certain memory points. 4. Questions ① The plot lacks an absolute breakthrough point or a theme that runs through the entire story, and its appeal is highly dependent on the quality of the plot; ② Upgrading and strengthening is one of the core joys of Infinite Stream. The setting of this book is too limited in terms of freedom and potential exploration in this aspect; ③Many of the protagonist's operational decisions are based on head-to-head gambling, and their rationality is questionable; ④Compact copy can cover up many problems through fast pace. I wonder if the author of copy with larger content in the middle and later stages can still control it.

"Driving a Train to Go Wild"-T2 level. Tags of the work: steam locomotive, business adventure, traveling station, railway feelings, turbulent times. Rating: A. Rich and solid professional knowledge, easy access to industry information, and sincere and full railway feelings; B. Based on the author's knowledge base and attention to detail, the integrity should be trustworthy; C. There are some problems with the rhythm, and there is a sense of separation between the prologue and the main text. One-sentence review: A steel and steam fantasy story with a profound understanding of the railway system and some romantic feelings. 1. Introduction In a fantasy world where you can run wild, be a happy slash youth-- Scavenger in troubled times/Second-hand car dealer/Wasteland postman/Armed transport team/Occasionally a guest mercenary and expedition team... Break away from the stereotyped life and do not define yourself. Driving a train, forming a team, fighting, adventuring, scavenging, trading, transforming, upgrading... Running at high speed in turbulent times, deeply feel the romance of land cruisers and multi-riveted steam steel! 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot has not yet been fully developed, but many overt and hidden lines are being laid out in an orderly manner. As the saying goes, it is never too late to eat well. Just like the first story in this book, although the preparation is slow, it is compact and comfortable. The protagonist's behavior is consistent with his driving style. The more comprehensive the preparations, the smoother the driving process. The character creation is relatively successful in the field of online writing. The character dialogue information is comprehensive, clear and organized, and it looks very comfortable. The author has excellent writing skills, which can reflect the beauty of steel machinery without losing the warmth and warmth of human nature. His objective statements are clear and clear, and his emotional expression is natural and touching to the readers. 3. Highlights The author's high level of professionalism and detail creates an unparalleled sense of reality, and even gives people the impression of working on a train while taking time to write. The resulting sense of heaviness is far beyond the superficial recitation of "Multiple Rivets Steamed Steel" at the verbal level. The author shows the industrial shock of the interweaving of steel and steam from a series of process details such as regular inspection, preparation, preheating and start-up. Here is a description from the book: the sense of accomplishment of a complex mechanical creation gradually filling up with flesh and blood in the hand is more lasting than the fast-paced intracranial climax, and the curvature is stable. From the prologue, you can feel the author's true feelings in the story. The subsequent content is relatively closer to the style of online writing, but you can still feel the author's feelings for the railway industry from between the lines. Perhaps the meaning of sentiment and literary youth has been distorted to a certain extent, but when it comes to this book, it can be said that it is still a positive and appropriate evaluation. The author not only depicts the shock and grandeur of the steam industry, but also reflects the social life that reflects the characteristics of the times. People's clothing, food, housing and transportation have undergone tremendous changes due to steel and coal, giving readers an immersive reading experience. 4. Questions ①The pace of the opening chapter is very uncharacteristic of a web novel, and the initial preparation is too slow. The first story only begins in Chapter 10; ② It is so professional that it is difficult to understand. It is recommended to pay more attention to the author's illustrations and popular science at the end of each chapter; ③Goldfinger has the beauty of IMBA. Regardless of whether it is an enemy or a friendly force, as long as the station is deployed, it will be refined instantly...

Summary of discontinuation: Class T2. 240,000 Words, no updates. Tags of the work: Weird rules, suspenseful puzzles, imaginary city, awesome start. Rating: A. A carefully polished beginning of the story and a narrative technique with a good sense of atmosphere; B. It has an amazing start, but is pessimistic about the overall high level of the work; C. Just the right perspective switching, a full immersive reading experience. A brief comment in one sentence: The gold content of the eight-month draft in two months can be seen with the naked eye. 1. Introduction "I'm a very lucky man." "..." "I'm not crazy! I'm serious! This is different from conventional luck. What I mean is that my good luck... Can allow me to avoid death." "For example?" "For example, there was a murder case not long ago." The two policemen looked at each other and silently took out handcuffs and sedatives. "Well, you continue." 2. Plot, characters and writing level It is fair to say that the plot design is above the standard, but there is still a feeling of buying a casket for a pearl: the quality of the plot is good and can be regarded as a "pearl", but the packaging expression method is undoubtedly a superior "casket". The character creation in this book is relatively successful, and the characters with heavy plot weight are vivid, many of which leave room for further expansion. The author's writing level is average to above average, and it has basically achieved the desired effect, but there is still room for improvement. For example, the constant switching of perspectives and the lack of clarity when describing the case through dialogue are relatively unclear. 3. Highlights The atmospheric packaging technique is the most prominent highlight of this book. The author starts the story with the protagonist describing the case in the police station. The protagonist's memories are mainly used, and the police interrogation is supplemented. He constantly alternates the information output method, and combines the incredible supernatural subjective narrative and the inexplicably related but contradictory objective results into a suspenseful and strange puzzle. Since this stage is the recollection of the case that has already occurred, the reader is under psychological pressure. The plot then naturally transitions to the interrogation phase. At this time, both the identity change of the protagonist and the suspect and the environmental changes in the interrogation room will increase the reader's sense of urgency. The supernatural events also turn from memories to reality. The author quietly adds thriller elements to the story through a step-by-step approach. Although the psychological pressure of the reader increases significantly at this time, the author's progressive and step-by-step approach makes people feel more immersive and unable to stop. The writing process of this book has certain reference value for the majority of online article writers. The author and editor worked together to revise the manuscript eight times in two months. The repeated iteration and optimization can be said to have truly improved the reading experience, and the focus is mainly on expression techniques. Perhaps designing an otherworldly story does require talent and inspiration, but through constant polishing and careful packaging of a relatively mediocre story, it may also be possible to turn decay into a magical effect, and the latter is not beyond the reach of ordinary authors. 4. Questions ① Compared with the extremely brilliant presentation technique, the core of the story is slightly inferior; ② The start of repeated refinement is impressive, but it is still unknown whether the level can be maintained in the future; ③The author's writing skills need to be further strengthened, especially when he chooses more complex expression techniques.

"Sail Shadow in the Fog Sea"-T3 level. Work tags: fantasy navigation, treasure hunting adventure, ship development. Rating: A. A fantasy sailing story with a relatively pure flavor, with the elements of ship upgrades that will make management enthusiasts ecstatic; B. It's difficult to evaluate the integrity. If you can't explain it, it means it's related to Poseidon's remains. I hope everyone knows; C. Originally, there was no need to worry too much about the control level of a mature author's work, but the author has both. A brief review in one sentence: "The Autobiography of Poseidon in the Underworld: Who hid my body!" >> 1. Introduction In short, this is a story about fighting a naked butt-hairless sea monster and collecting some treasures to support the family. After the Valkyrie killed Poseidon, she carved the secrets of the world on the reverse scale, thus starting the Age of Discovery. There are six countries in the Star Sea Continent, a lawless pirate city, star-like islands in the boundless sea, and a treasure map that attracts captains. This is not the world of Caribbean, not Robinson's world, and certainly not Wang Lufei's world. This is a... A wild, weird, yet ancient new world! 2. Plot, characters and writing level There isn't much to talk about in the plot. There are a lot of unexpected events and adventures. I hope that the subsequent plot development will focus on the protagonist's selection and planning. The level of character creation is so-so, and it seems that the author has no intention of making it complex, three-dimensional or diversified. The author's writing quality is passable, but it seems to lack some of the flavor of Western fantasy. 3. Highlights There are roughly two points of interest in this book: one is the classic western fantasy sailing style, and the other is the upgrade of extraordinary ships. The former is easy to feel, with classic elements such as activated vine cables, sailboats in glass bottles, and talking magic mirrors emerging in endlessly; the latter has well filled the needs of business readers in this genre. There are not many sailing stories in online articles, and many of them have chosen the plot route of expanding power to conquer the world. Presumably many people still have longing for free adventures, treasure hunts and secret explorations, right? Isn't it a man's romance to own a boat of his own, to continuously upgrade it through hard work, and to gradually move the boat closer to his ideal? Not to mention it's a super cool supernatural Ship of Theseus. 4. Questions ① The author wrote both books, and said that he wrote this book with the intention of changing his mind when he was tired of writing the old book; ② There are too many just-in-time accidents in the plot, which conflicts with the theme of sailing that highlights freedom; ③The role labeling is too thorough, allies and enemies are clearly distinguished and the tool attributes are prominent; ④The setting is too simple and crude, and everything can be Poseidon.

"Mechanical Rhythm of Magic"-T3 level. 650,000 Words, complete. Work tags: steampunk, spiritual practice, magic research, strategic struggle. Rating: A. Integrating the power system of nature and humanity, characters with strong subjective initiative and different positions; B. The author failed to write an important section in the early stage and had to end it hastily; C. The background atmosphere of steampunk and extraordinary wasteland has been successfully created and is quite graphic; A brief review in one sentence: An epic fantasy novel with steampunk style and wasteland setting. 1. Introduction This was an era when steam technology and steam magic exploded, but society was stagnant due to the monopoly of the church. This was an era of increasing corruption within the church and insufficient technological control, which led to the rise of a large amount of new industrial capital against the nobility and the church. People are constantly exploring the limits of steam machinery, exploring the promotion system that steam magic should have, and exploring the space between humans, nature, and gods. This is an era when hundreds of schools of thought are flourishing, and this is an era when the situation in the major sanctuaries of the church's confederations is collapsing. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of this book is generally passable, but some sections are difficult to explain in one sentence. Especially the section about the prayer ceremony for the birth of the gods is messy and awkward, which is really a failure. The characters are one of the features of this book. The important characters all have clear positions and thoughts, but the relatively complex and diverse character creation may not be a likable choice in the field of online literature. The author's writing level is quite acceptable in the field of online writing, but compared to the content of the story, it is still somewhat lagging behind, especially the recurring words "so interesting" and "so interesting"... 3. Highlights The title of the book "The Mechanical Rhythm of Magic" is apt. Magic is the core element of the story. According to the setting, magic is controlled by human self-will, using the natural principles of heaven and earth, and using steam machinery as a connection-driven model. Every link in this process is indispensable, and this creates points. Regardless of the emphasis on different genres such as the accumulation of will, the understanding of nature, and the refinement of machinery, there are no secluded old men working behind closed doors in the mountains and forests in the story. The strong ones are all active practitioners who have self-consistent ideas and use ideas as guidance to promote changes in reality. The collision of ideas between each other can also stimulate the spark of ideas, and we can select the best and eliminate the weak to keep making progress. Regardless of the background of steampunk, the core of this book is very close to the "flow of mind" that some book friends have longed for. The self-will in the technique comes from willpower, knowledge, life experience and insights. Every intangible accumulation is a precious spiritual wealth. Compared with some fantasy chicken soup that is too autistic , the self-will in this book is more majestic and inclusive of all things, and intrigue is not an all-round confrontation that runs through the spiritual and material levels. It is a comprehensive practice of personal qualities such as communication skills, thinking level, and contingency execution. As long as it is not a pure stand-alone game, how can you lack these to improve your xinxing? 4. Questions ① The plot of the prayer ceremony was not well written, leading to a chain collapse; ②The theory of magic is relatively obscure and complicated, and seems somewhat laborious; ③The protagonist's perception effect is strong and high-frequency, and the occult version can be turned on or off.

"I'm in Warhammer, I just want to grow mushrooms" - Level T3. 1.56 Million words, complete. Work tags: Warhammer 30K, mushroom farm, green skin transformation. Rating: A. As a fan work, the collaboration between the Mushroom Farm and the green-skinned orcs is worth looking forward to; B. The overall integrity of Warhammer fan works is... Hard to say; C. As a fan work, there are many prototypes for reference, which can create a certain sense of picture when reading. A brief comment in one sentence: When to breed green skin? 1. Introduction Travel through the world of Warhammer and become a denizen of the Underhive. Poisonous air, filthy water, deadly disease, the corruption of chaos. How does this make a graduate student in applied mycology and a cloud hammer player survive? Fortunately, Li Nuo's plug-in is a mushroom farm that he carries with him. First work to save money to buy mycelium and culture media, then open a farm to grow mushrooms, then use mushrooms to exchange for money, purchase equipment, and expand production. At first, Li Nuo thought he could only grow traditional mushrooms. Until one day, he encountered the spores of the green-skinned orcs, and everything changed! Who says growing mushrooms can't save the human empire? "I wonder if the emperor can stand up!" X999999 Emperor: Huh? Why does my back no longer hurt? 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot at the beginning is quite satisfactory, I hope the author can also give exciting performances in other than Goldfinger. The characters in this book are mainly functional, especially the female characters, who are basically pillows given to the protagonist when he falls asleep. The author's writing skills are up to standard and he deserves no credit. 3. Highlights The biggest highlight of this book is the golden finger with its vast space: the mushroom farm. As a management and development plug-in, the ability to cultivate mushrooms is moderate in the early stage and has great potential for functional development. In the middle and late stages, combining it with the green-skinned orcs, who are essentially spore plants, is an excellent idea. It can be said that the author is most looking forward to the episode. 4. Questions ①The plot lacks explosive points and has many conflicts and crises, but the overall reading experience lacks unexpected surprises; ②Some plots are slightly abrupt and lack of foreshadowing, such as the emperor's concern.

Final acceptance: T2 level. 1.95 Million words, complete. Work tags: fantasy city, invincible flow, light novel. Rating: A. Interesting and charming background settings, and a story atmosphere full of the author's personal style; B. As a light novel, it can place less emphasis on integrity; C. The author is a genius at naming. In addition, as a board game enthusiast, I should support my colleagues. One-sentence review: An invincible light novel with an old two-dimensional flavor 1. Introduction "You mean you have a girlfriend that only you can see, wealth and money that no one else admits, and everything you want is at your fingertips, but there are often war airships flying in the sky around you, giant beasts wandering around the metropolis when the fog is shrouded, and handsome guys dressed in black who change sizes everywhere, and there is even a perfect piece of toast chasing people on the street and biting it, but your non-existent friends don't believe you and often laugh at you and say you are dreaming. All this makes you a little uneasy?" "Yes, doctor, so is there really something wrong with me?" "Of course there is a problem sir, you can even see me." 2. Plot, characters and writing level The beginning of the plot reminds me of the classic comic "Demon Detective Brain Nero". This is why I personally feel that this book has a bit of an old two-dimensional flavor. Mentioning these is not to say that there are similar contents in the book. In fact, the characteristics of this book are very outstanding, and the plot can even be regarded as the most conventional part. Benefiting from the special character of the protagonist, the roles and plot weight of the supporting characters far exceed those of traditional online novels, and the author also has a broader space for character creation. The author's writing skills are quite solid, but the polishing is not meticulous, but it is not a big problem when it comes to the scope of online writing. The author's writing has an obvious personal style and is quite recognizable. 3. Highlights The setting of this book gives people a strange feeling that is both directly interesting and absurd. On the one hand, the settings such as heterochromatic areas, overlapping worlds, and violence index unabashedly show the simple and crude beauty. On the other hand, the related concepts of alien invasion, hallucinations, phantoms, fantasy objects, and distortion of events. , The specific settings such as violence index classification chickens, weapon fighting, clusters, gangs, etc. Are quite detailed and realistic. The combination of the two aspects makes the world in the story have an inexplicable internal logic and rationality, like a kneaded product with a rough surface but showing a magical inner aura and atmosphere. I am tired of seeing many contestants with useless names. The author of this book is a breath of fresh air. For example, the protagonist can only interact with the material world through possession and is like an illusion of reflection. He comes from the black world and mainly operates in the gray area. The name "Zheng Fan" given by the author is very interesting and worth pondering. 4. Questions ① Compared with the unique background setting and atmosphere, the plot of this book seems a bit too relaxed and gentle; ② Compared with ordinary online novels, the protagonist's independence will be lacking; ③A common problem in light novels is that the protagonist is basically surrounded by women.

"Who Stole My Brain?" >>-T3 level. Work tags: science fiction, suspense and puzzle solving, humor and curiosity, and imagination. Rating: A. It's full of gimmicks starting from the title, and it's true that there's no pretense. Four of the first five characters online are brain tissue; B. The integrity is currently difficult to evaluate. Generally speaking, readers have relatively strict requirements on the rationality of science fiction works; C. The author's descriptions of various brain tissues and covering structures are quite vivid and picturesque. One-sentence review: This chapter is very interesting, except for the discussion of rationality. 1. Introduction Zhou Mo sat on a park bench with a cup of milk tea, his head empty and thinking about important things for a person who had just traveled through time. When will he die? And... Who stole his brain? This murderer is very unscrupulous. It is understandable to take away his brain, but taking away his eyes is too much. So Zhou Mo planned to get his brain back before he was dead. 2. Plot, characters and writing level So far, no fundamental bugs in the plot have been found, and there is no shortage of foreshadowing and reversals. However, from a plot perspective, there is a lack of sufficiently attractive breaking points. In terms of character creation, the author does a pretty good job. The characters he writes are both lively and lovable as well as disgusting. But I have to say that the performance of the official NPC in the early stage was still a bit too far. The author's writing skills are passable, and the description of brain-related content can be considered excellent. 3. Highlights The most eye-catching thing about this book is the author's work on the brain. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into preparation. For example, the description of biological tissues such as the skull, brain, eyeball, optic nerve, etc., On the one hand, vividly demonstrates the novelty of their structural features to attract readers, and on the other hand, it creates quite interesting characters through the description of anthropomorphic behaviors. 4. Questions ①As a science fiction/fantasy/suspense novel, this book seems a bit too "humorous"; ②Despite the plot arrangement, the performance of the official organization is still a bit too unrestricted; ③The details are rough, and the rationality of some plots cannot withstand scrutiny.