A Certain Hogwarts Forbidden Magic Legend

Final acceptance: T3 level. 440,000 Words, complete. Work tags: Harry Potter, fantasy magic, fan fiction. Rating: A. A journey of magic based on fantasy and emotion, a pure Hogwarts fan journey; B. According to the author's resume, the overall quality is relatively optimistic; C. The author's writing quality is trustworthy and the future is promising. One-sentence review: Harry Potter fan fiction from top Harry Potter fan authors. 1. Introduction Hodge, who unexpectedly awakened his spellcasting ability due to a magical accident, finally entered Hogwarts, the school of magic, two full months after the start of school. Extraordinary spiritual awareness, a visitor from outside the destiny. "Those words are not what I said, but Mr. Ollivander's exact words." Many years later, he calmly told reporters, playing with a cursed ring in his hand, "a souvenir of the incident." The world has deviated from its planned trajectory. Keywords: memory, prophecy, dreams, forbidden magic, becoming a legend step by step, fighting against gods! 2. Plot, characters and writing level Judging from the character of the protagonist and the background of the story, the main plot should be consistent with the original work. As a mature author who has proven himself, there should be no big problems in plot design. Characters are an advantage of fan works. In this aspect, the author is also one of the top players in the national server with recordable records. The author's writing is considered first-rate in the field of online writing, and the atmosphere is well created, which adds a lot to the story itself. 3. Highlights There is no doubt about the author's accomplishments and achievements in Harry Potter fandom. The previous book may be the best work on the same subject in the minds of many people, including me. Although the author still chooses comfort zone themes, it can be foreseen that this book is not a Chinese-Chinese remake of the previous book. First of all, the protagonist of this book is set to be a new student at the same time as the original trio, which is very different from the reserve white devil protagonist of the previous invincible style. Secondly, compared to the previous book that focused on the background plot, this book will pay more attention to the exploration and analysis of magic. The protagonist through fantasy childhood picture books The section where the heroic giant assists in casting spells is the first highlight of this book. Emotions and imagery may be the key core of the study of magic in this book. Finally, although the plot has not yet been fully developed, the title of the book already reflects the author's new ideas in plot entry. We look forward to the author's future performance. 4. Questions ① The opening part is like a fast-forward CG animation. It can be understood that the author wants to get to the main content as soon as possible, but the method and method should also be considered; ②The identity of the protagonist makes the game relatively weak at the beginning, and the level of excitement is not as good as that of the previous game; ③High emotional intelligence: the protagonist is fully integrated into the background of the story; low emotional intelligence: the protagonist is like a native who understands the plot.

Reading progress: Chapter 21, evaluation: Liangcao-~Liangcao (no big poison, minor poison constantly, but some bright spots) Advantages: 1. The writing is as excellent as ever 2. The entry point of the second design of Transfiguration is more in line with HP's world view and is not so obtrusive. 3. The pace of the early stage is fast enough. Instead of going through the poorly written parts of shopping for wands, choosing pets, hitting the platform, and taking the train, it is almost a chapter and goes straight to school. Disadvantages: 1. The character of the protagonist is very unlikable, and he becomes all kinds of tough before his strength is even up: You forced yourself to join the mountain monster group when you were not sure of victory (you even took your senior sister with you, so you didn't consider the possibility of killing people?) You don't know how to open a club, but you also start teaching people something? (Have you never thought that if you roll over, you will look like a clown?) Drugging a classmate (he even swore that nothing would happen to him before he even finished his first-year remedial classes... Snape did not accuse you wrongly at all) 2. Some of the secondary designs seem to have been added on the fly and cannot withstand scrutiny at all: For example, Ravenclaw students do not keep their own books but put them on public bookshelves. (Have you ever thought about what to do if your reference books are taken away when you are doing homework? What should you do if your borrowed books are stolen by others? Ravenclaw is not an academic paradise where dark wizards have never appeared) 3. I don't see the need to follow the story of the mountain monster at all. The protagonist and the three little ones don't even know each other. Why do they insist on following the original plot like this? 4. At present, there is no detective element in this book at all. ---- Frankly speaking, as a new book by the author of Professor Rune, I am very disappointed. The protagonist is obviously still new, but he is completely written by Professor Hep. The result is a protagonist who is so powerful that Lockhart is not overturned. Giving food and grass is basically a respect for the author's previous book, and (for the time being) I believe that the author just hasn't written a book for too long and has not entered the state. I hope that there will be improvements in the future.

The new book by the author of HP's top fan fiction professor, there were some problems with the rhythm and so on before. It is currently being revised from scratch. If you are interested, you can start it.

The author's evaluation after the overhaul... Is still food- Most of the comments in the book reading circle were that it was much better after the overhaul, so I re-read the beginning... I can only say that the character of the protagonist has become more fleshed out, but the real poisonous points, such as the second design that makes people laugh and the inexplicable connection with the main plot of fighting mountain monsters, have not changed at all. If you couldn't stand the last version because of these reasons, I suggest you don't waste any more time. ---- Reading progress: Chapter 21, evaluation: Liangcao-~Liangcao (no big poison, minor poison constantly, but some bright spots) Advantages: 1. The writing is as excellent as ever 2. The entry point of the second design of Transfiguration is more in line with HP's world view and is not so obtrusive. 3. The pace of the early stage is fast enough. Instead of going through the poorly written parts of shopping for wands, choosing pets, hitting the platform, and taking the train, it is almost a chapter and goes straight to school. Disadvantages: 1. The character of the protagonist is very unlikable, and he becomes all kinds of tough before his strength is even up: You forced yourself to join the mountain monster group when you were not sure of victory (you even took your senior sister with you, so you didn't consider the possibility of killing people?) You don't know how to open a club, but you also start teaching people something? (Have you never thought that if you roll over, you will look like a clown?) Drugging a classmate (he even swore that nothing would happen to him before he even finished his first-year remedial classes... Snape did not accuse you wrongly at all) 2. Some of the secondary designs seem to have been added on the fly and cannot withstand scrutiny at all: For example, Ravenclaw students do not keep their own books but put them on public bookshelves. (Have you ever thought about what to do if your reference books are taken away when you are doing homework? What should you do if your borrowed books are stolen by others? Ravenclaw is not an academic paradise where dark wizards have never appeared) 3. I don't see the need to follow the story of the mountain monster at all. The protagonist and the three little ones don't even know each other. Why do they insist on following the original plot like this? 4. At present, there is no detective element in this book at all. ---- Frankly speaking, as a new book by the author of Professor Rune, I am very disappointed. The protagonist is obviously still new, but he is completely written by Professor Hep. The result is a protagonist who is so powerful that Lockhart is not overturned. Giving food and grass is basically a respect for the author's previous book, and (for the time being) I believe that the author just hasn't written a book for too long and has not entered the state. I hope that there will be improvements in the future.