The Holy Church Begins with Blessing

The Holy Church Begins with Blessing

by Buster's Ballad

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Ch. 450The Iron Heel of the Empire
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About This Novel

People cannot live without faith. But here, faith has become a way for the nobles to exploit the common people, and the church has become a place for the nobles to seize power. The nameless existence cuts off the past history, the unexplorable mystery devours the soul, and the unknown will distorts the will of all living beings. Corleone came to this world, accompanied by only a group of light that can give birth to commandments. His enemies say he is a demon who harvests souls in the name of faith. His followers say he is hope, brings truth and liberates souls. He allows history to continue, lets the mystery go away, and guides all living beings towards the future. Initially, Corleone just wanted to build a familiar home in this turbulent and dangerous world. [Demining: Group portrait, no female protagonist]

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Queennie9mo ago

The subject matter is okay, but the content is practical

There are currently 38 chapters, and I really can't stand it. I can feel that the subject matter is good, but the depth is not enough, and the combat power is unclear. Since you want to involve mystery, you might as well set levels. You can also imitate the Lord of Mysteries and write a kingdom of God for meetings. The characters should be portrayed more deeply according to the serial number and title like FGO. The characters do not need to be too perfect. Each character's ideal is written separately. There is a regret if there is differentiation. The protagonist is too dull and the content is bland and watery. . .

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Tianchi.@9mo ago

The author's writing isn't bad, but it's too awkward. It has to be two-faced and the protagonist is written too hard.

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shimy_dC9mo ago

I saw the latest chapter 79, and the portrayal of the protagonist is really not good. It is obviously based on the theme of faith. Since it is faith, it must take people very seriously, especially those who believe in him, because the power of the protagonist's golden finger comes from this.

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Left-handed Master9mo ago

The concept of the novel is perfect and the plot is smooth. The shortcomings of the novel are that it is too bland, lacks ups and downs, and the theme is not prominent. That is, there are too many characterizations of supporting characters, which cover up the aura of the protagonist. This writing method is relatively ancient, a bit like "Arabian Nights" and other old-fashioned narrative writing methods are not like modern online novels that rely on refreshing points as their attraction, so they are not attractive enough and seem very boring. The novel is more provocative and can attract a large number of readers based on its freshness at first. However, it will gradually drive away many readers due to the lack of refreshing points.

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Big Sunflower 110mo ago

Please support the new book and give some comments. Otherwise the author should give up. The beginning of this book is well written.

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Hey Bear10mo ago

Come on, the author, keep it up and don't go high and go low.

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Foodie 6910mo ago

At first glance, it seems that it was written with care. The line-sweeping Lundaoliu is not a mass product on the market.

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书友20231214508_aA3mo ago

I feel like it's generally well written. It is this church that, apart from its name and its oaths whose presence is increasingly diminished, is completely Christian. I don't know if the author originally wanted to write about Christianity or what happened.

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Book Friends 202412242512724mo ago

There has been no update for a week. It seems that he is about to enter the palace!

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In the Night Court8mo ago

Pretty good, keep up the good work

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"Temple Church Begins with Blessing" - Level T3. Tags of works: development of faith, church management, commandments, group portraits, western fantasy. Rating: A. Compared with the traditional upgrade mode Western fantasy novels that have been rolled into the Red Sea, faith and church are undoubtedly a new track with great potential; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. The setting of commandments is quite clever, which is very helpful for character creation and control of strength expansion. A brief comment: In most works, the church is the top force, so building a church from scratch will definitely be a wonderful story. 1. Introduction People cannot live without faith. But here, faith has become a tool for the nobles to exploit the common people. Corleone came to this world, accompanied by only a group of light that can give birth to commandments. His enemies say he is a demon who harvests souls in the name of faith. His followers say he is the Father who brings truth and liberates souls. Initially, Corleone just wanted a safe and free home in this turbulent and dangerous world. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The general plot of the story takes place in the extraordinary historical background of the Middle Ages. The nobility is the ruling class with extraordinary power. The church's existence is only reflected in burials and comforting the common people. The protagonist spreads faith and develops the church with the golden finger that breeds commandments, and reshapes the social structure of the entire world by taking the path of the lower class. The author has made some achievements in character creation. The protagonist's personality is comfortable, and there is considerable room for development according to the setting of supporting characters. It is foreseeable that there is the possibility of group portrait writing. The author's writing skills are up to standard and can be regarded as meritless. 3. Highlights The author is quite courageous in making choices. For example, the status of the church is set as a dispensable marginalized organization. Although it will leave the protagonist with no shadow to rely on at the beginning, it also gives the protagonist the opportunity to go into battle lightly without historical baggage, which can better reflect the thorny road and sense of achievement of starting from scratch; The setting of the law transfers many functions to the supporting characters. You must know that scenes such as fighting have always been the standard for the protagonist. After all, it is most intuitive to show the saint in front of others. However, directly participating in the conflict does not meet the role of the protagonist as a trader. Just like the prototype of the protagonist's name, it would be too shameful for the godfather to do it himself. The protagonist's personality and behavior match the role's positioning. He has clear self-awareness and is flexible and flexible. He does not have the frivolity of ordinary time traveler protagonists who are too jumping off. The look and feel is more in line with the impression of a calm and important character; the plot operation mode is somewhat like an auto-chess game. The protagonist ( The chess player) grasps key aspects such as management and upgrades, and leaves the specific execution to the supporting characters (chess pieces). In addition, the setting that the commandments given can be withdrawn and redistributed by the protagonist also enhances the reader's sense of security. After all, the power of life and death cannot be left in the hands of others. 4. Questions ① The mysterious and powerful lords and mages appear prematurely and slightly abruptly; ②This is not a novel where the protagonist is purely responsible for the plot. Characters from different social classes will plan actions based on their own interests; ③The content of the early Bible debate may not meet the taste of some readers.

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Reading progress: Chapter 220, evaluation: Liangcao+ Group portrait, behind-the-scenes flow Advantages: 1. Good writing style 2. The protagonist is relatively stylish (there is some controversy when he is weak in the early stage, but at least it disappears later), unlike some poorly written behind-the-scenes mafia stories where the protagonist has a bad mouth and dirty tricks, and there is no sense of a behind-the-scenes boss at all. 3. The supporting characters are well written. Disadvantages: 1. When I was still very weak in the early stage, I made a relatively unsound operation, but after enduring it, it disappeared later and I can still tolerate it. 2. Too many settings from other works have been incorporated (especially Xingyue). As an "original" work, you should at least change the "borrowed" settings and apply them to your own worldview. It's too lazy. 3. The church power develops too smoothly. In the early stage, two big daddies suddenly appear. In the middle stage, the one who is clearly causing trouble is killed immediately. Then the protagonist suddenly becomes invincible and close to omniscience and omnipotence. It is very refreshing, but it becomes stronger too quickly and abruptly. There is no process, which makes the early operation even more clownish. ---- Although I complained a lot, it is actually quite good to watch. Just endure the eye-rolling plot in the early stages. Thanks to book friend vvvvvvvv for recommending

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