Small Excerpts from Online Articles, Non-novice, Non-mainstream List Works

Rating: 8.0 Points. It is similar to the Western fantasy of "Xuan Jian Xian Clan", but the protagonist is a higher status boss behind the scenes and is not so cautious. It can be regarded as a smooth push all the way without any sense of crisis. The highlight lies in the group portraits, where the various characters in the family are portrayed with some unique characteristics. The other one is to create your own sequential path skills in the world of swords and magic, which can be regarded as a fusion with mystery. However, the author's writing style is not top-notch, and the plot is relatively similar in the end, with little ups and downs overall, and there is always a sense of déjà vu. Overall, this is a meal replacement book with neither a high upper limit nor a low lower limit. It's edible, a little bland, but not unappetizing.

Rating: 7.5 Points. Travel through the medieval Arab world to be a prophet and implement the story of the Taiping Rebellion. I like the subject matter very much, but I don't like the writing style very much. The advantage is that the text quotes scriptures and contains a lot of content from the Bible, the Quran, etc. However, I am not religious either. For me, I am not convinced by quoting scriptures to discuss the sanctity of the protagonist. Of course this is off topic. The shortcoming is that it is a bit watery. Chapter 60 of the first volume roughly talks about two things, but it is not detailed and profound. After being resurrected, the protagonist has superpowers and maxes out his military power. The plot before it was released was basically that the protagonist was unparalleled, and passers-by were amazed; the protagonist preached and preached, and passers-by were convinced. It was a bit repetitive. There are still a lot of psychological activities in the facial makeup of the supporting characters, which is not interesting. There are only three or five chapters on organization building, and the rest are devoted to evangelism. In short, historical novels are more objective and heavier. To subjectively portray the image of a certain character, firstly, the character must have characteristics, and secondly, there must be considerable writing power. As for writing, as a new author, I still have a long way to go.

Rating: 9.0 Points. The story of the peasant uprising in the late Ming Dynasty. The protagonist traveled through time and became a Taoist priest in the mountains. According to the author, he referred to the methods used by Zhang Jiao, Hong Xiuquan and others to start the uprising, which are detailed and well-founded. It also combines the three magic weapons of the founder of the Republic to transform thoughts. The author's writing is delicate and humorous, and the characters are especially realistic. However, it is also a little too detailed and the pace is slow. Especially in the thirty or forty chapters after it was released, it seemed that five chapters a day were bursting out. As a result, I kept writing about trivial things in the countryside. The water was flying, which made it difficult for me to keep up with the updates. But now it has finally returned to the main line, and the pace has become faster, but it is still secretly developing and accumulating strength in several counties down the mountain. I really don't know if the situation can be controlled after the official uprising unfolds. The general outline is still clear and the details are clear. As it is currently written, this is where I worry. If the quality can be maintained in the future, it will be a masterpiece. Another question that puzzles me is that the writing of this book likes to cut back and forth between different scenes, especially the part about water after it is put on the shelves. The previous chapter was about Li Si, and the next chapter suddenly cut to Zhang San. The narrative switching back and forth between two or even multiple plots seems very incoherent, and I personally feel that it is very unpleasant to the senses. There are so many clues that it is difficult to deal with, but if you want to switch, you have to wait for three or five chapters, otherwise it will be very unfriendly to follow up. This is my humble opinion. Generally speaking, this kind of writing method of this book is extremely rare in online writing, and it is rare to find it. The author's writing has great potential, and the above-mentioned issues are considered immature in dealing with complex plots. However, this kind of shortcoming only appears in the process of innovation and pursuit, and is far from comparable to those who are stubborn and self-proclaimed. I'm very optimistic about it, but I think it's a bit exaggerated. I hope you don't slap me in the face🤣

Rating: 8.0 Points. Travel through time to rise up for Wu Guang and change his fate of death. The first volume is basically a rewrite of historical facts, well-founded and interesting to watch. After the second volume, it becomes more effective. It seems to be quite satisfactory, covering war and military affairs, internal affairs, and personnel affairs, but it is not profound, and the characters are relatively straightforward, with nothing outstanding about it. I read a lot of historical novels, and generally speaking, they are neither merit nor fault, above average. The advantage is that the subject matter and entry point are relatively new. There has been a shortage of books lately, and I really can't find anything better for a while.

Rating: 8.5 Points. Shushan fanfiction is a bit interesting, but also a bit boring. I had never known what Shushan was before, but now I realized that it was a novel from the Republic of China, which can be regarded as the ancestor of fairy novels. It seems that the cultivation of immortals in the underworld is indeed the orthodoxy of immortals and warriors, and it is in the same line. It can only be said that literature is a manifestation of ideology. The worldview of the immortals created by the literati of the Republic of China was naturally the crystallization of the feudal classical thought at that time.

Rating: 9.5 Points. The best orthodox historical article I have seen in the past year. I usually don't comment on works of less than a hundred chapters, but this book is so amazingly written that I can't help but take the initiative to promote it. The protagonist is an indigenous person and the grandson of Liu Chan. The story is very delicately written and the characters are vividly portrayed, especially the protagonist's growth and transformation, which is meticulous and not obtrusive. The emotional foreshadowing and expression techniques are extremely sophisticated and have a strong sense of substitution. There is also ingenuity in the structure, and the narrative techniques are changeable and flexible. I can't fault it so far, and the reason it's not a 10 is because it's still very early in the story. If subsequent releases can maintain this quality, it will definitely be a masterpiece!

Rating: 8.0 Points. The story of the rebels fighting against the Qing Dynasty in the late Ming Dynasty. The identity of the time traveler is a political commissar, and his intention is to arm the army with the red ideology of seeking truth from facts, which is quite interesting. It's a pity that the writing style is rather dry and hard, and what's outstanding is that the dialogue in Sichuan dialect is more authentic. Maybe the author is from Sichuan. Structurally, it also feels like there is no design. It is basically straightforward, without any outstanding highlights, and it is very scattered. There is a lot of effort in character creation, and several supporting characters are relatively distinct, but the female prince of the Shu Prince's Palace has too many scenes, I don't know why it is necessary, and the protagonist is always frustrated, and there seems to be no targeted strategy, which makes me feel uncomfortable after watching too much. Personal evaluation: There is more than enough ambition but not enough energy.

Rating: 7.5 Points. It's an old story about hungry people selling themselves, joining the Demon Cult, resisting and defecting. I have read the author's last book, and the subject matter was new, so I read this one. However, it seems to be a completely cool book. 90% Of the top 100 books on the list are like this, so I usually don't read the books on the list. There is nothing new. The direct sensationalism and preaching will cover you up, and then the protagonist will be nakedly boastful, and that's basically it. It's Zhutianliu, which is also a setting I dislike very much. I don't know what use traveling to other worlds has for the plot and character creation? Basically just copy and paste.

Rating: 7.0 Points. Yan Nan's latest work, as an ancient great god, I have read his works such as Notes of a Demon Hunter, Sin City, and Lord of the Night, etc. I can only say that it seems to be getting more and more mediocre. The first few chapters of this book are a bit interesting. Based on the introduction, I thought it would be a farming war novel in the world of Xianxia. This direction is quite new. As a result, after chapters 7 and 8, it becomes the registration of the immortal sect. It is still the most clichéd underworld cultivator. After seventy or eighty chapters, the sect is still here to practice before it is released. I am really speechless. It has nothing to do with the introduction! More than ten years ago, Smoker was famous for his novel themes and delicate writing style, but now he has adopted the most vulgar route. It really makes people wonder whether he hired someone to write for him or because he made too much money? I gave it 7 points for the sake of the title.

Rating: 9.0 Points->8.5 Points. Western Fantasy Magic Knights, a relatively retro style of writing, tells the adventure story of a group of young people within the framework of the Lord's War. Currently, the protagonist group has become knights and is about to fight. There are no cliche plots, the pace is very steady, and the writing style is fresh and sophisticated. It is very comfortable to read, and it is a very good work today when Western fantasy is in decline. However, one has just updated more than a hundred chapters, which is relatively small; the other has no particularly climax section yet, so we have to keep an eye on it. The work has made a good start. The foundation has been laid, and it depends on what kind of house can be built on the foundation. ---------------- Second comment: After reading another forty or fifty chapters, I feel that the supporting characters are becoming more and more flat. The heroine is completely silly and sweet, which makes people tired of watching. The scenes of the brothers in the beginning are getting less and less, and they are almost completely turning into tool people. From the beginning, it was supposed to be a group portrait, but now it's a bit monotonous. Looking further, there is no convincing plot so far. The author's writing skills seem to be capable of writing a good story.

Rating: 9.5 Points. The almost extinct traditional martial arts literature can be said to be the masterpiece of contemporary martial arts. There is nothing wrong with the work. It is pure martial arts and righteousness, rather than the glamorous stuff such as martial arts system texts or astronomical texts that are prevalent nowadays. As for why it's not 10.0, Maybe it's because I'm not from the generation that lived in the heyday of martial arts. What's more, this book seems to be published as a physical book, updated monthly, and it's another lifetime.

Rating: 10.0 Points. The magical version of the Western war epic is the only novel I have read for the second time. Generally speaking, I only read novels once. The second time I read it, it feels like it has been spoiled and I lose interest. However, this book is still fascinating the second time I read it. When you read this book, what comes to mind is the grand epic feeling, the delicate characters, and the ups and downs of the plot. You feel that this is not a serial work. The vision of the whole book is never a partial one, but an overall view. If you didn't tell me this was an online novel, then I would totally think it was a magnificent Western masterpiece. If there is any downside, it might be the updates. One is that the author is not a full-time employee, and the other feels that the author's requirements for the work are too high, resulting in unstable updates. (It's really distressing and worrying!) This also led to the pacing of some plots being a bit slow.

Rating: 9.0 Points. The story is more traditional, a variant of Eastern fantasy, but there are also many settings carefully designed by the author. The plot is relatively classic, but the description techniques are varied, the structure is exquisite, and there are many foreshadowings. It reads with a sense of high-end. As the author himself said, "No matter how old the routine is, it is enough to write it well enough." The protagonist develops magic-modified technology under a fantasy power system. Generally speaking, I don't like time travelers copying technology and spiraling to the sky, defeating invincible opponents all over the world. I call this kind of "technological brainless cool article", which either insults the IQ of the natives or insults my IQ. But this book is relatively restrained. It combines technology with its own fantasy power well, and has some interesting innovations. The work also has a certain depth of thinking and good lyrical passages. What I don't like personally is that there are too many profile descriptions of others to highlight the protagonist's nb, which is a bit too deliberate and uncomfortable. I feel that using this method to create a character needs to be very restrained. It is better to shape the character through the storyline and the character's own choices. Generally, this naked method is used in mindless and cool novels, which is relatively low. The other is that the story doesn't have too many novelties. No matter how well you write the pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine, it's still a good story, but this seems to be the author's wish. In short, the mixture of exquisite writing style and clichéd plot seems a bit strange to me, but maybe it is suitable for advanced readers of Shuangwen?

Rating: 9.5 Points. It mainly tells the story of communism in the Western world. The protagonist is a low-level person who has gone through hardships and gradually transformed from a simple self-interested person to a proletarian leader. Despicableness is the pass for the despicable, and nobility is the epitaph for the noble. In a dark age, there are still moths constantly fluttering into the flame. As time goes by, thousands of palaces and palaces have been turned into dust, but only the great spirit will be forever engraved. The plot of the book has ups and downs, the sacrifice and courage of the revolutionaries are touching, and the characters are vivid. In this era of selfish capital, interests come first, but I believe there are still idealists like me.

Rating: 9.5 Points. The story of King Chuang's uprising in the context of a Western fantasy wizard. When I first saw the title and the first few chapters of the work, I thought it was a harem story about the witch YY, but gradually the article got better and better, using many classic characters from Western masterpieces, with a skillful lyrical narrative technique, and depicting several lifelike characters and plots. It made me cry when I read it (the single author cried shamefully 😭). It was hard to believe that this was written by a newcomer. Sure enough, the waves behind the Yangtze River push the waves ahead. Many veterans always rest on their laurels and write worse than each other. You still need passion and original intention to write good works! There are some jokes in the work, and I personally think the heat is very good, making people smile without causing embarrassment. The internal affairs and war scenes after the uprising are also detailed and above the standard. I caught up to the latest chapter in one breath. I didn't feel uncomfortable at all, but there were many surprises. Of course, if I'm going to be picky, the internal affairs are a bit bland, and the battles are a bit less changeable. Generally speaking, it focuses on the depiction of characters and the rendering of lyrical plots, but is slightly weaker than the creation of a grand epic feeling.

Rating: 8.0 Points. A combination of cyberpunk and traditional cool writing, the original six psychic upgrade system is not so hard-core, but easier for the public to understand and accept. Personally, I think this creative idea is good. As a power independent of corporate technology, psychic energy can facilitate the development of anti-corporate forces and the unfolding of the plot. However, this work still leans towards personal heroism. What I prefer is war writing about forming a force to rebel. After all, group war is the most extreme violence of mankind and the most thorough display of human nature. Of course, it is difficult to write many group portraits. Overall, it's good. The description of the battle scenes is still very gorgeous. As an upgraded novel, it is still much more attractive than the traditional routine. However, as the protagonist is a reborn person, the smooth journey does indeed reduce people's expectations and surprises. If you taste it carefully, the logic of victory and defeat in the battle is not particularly convincing. Psykers have many skills, and who wins and who loses all depends on the author's writing. There is no standard. It's exciting when fighting, but confusing when winning. One of the characteristics of the protagonist is that he is a bit of a middle-class character. The author seems to like Japanese hot-blooded comics very much. A problem that affects the viewing experience is that the setting narrative is repeated many times, which is very wordy and seems to have a low word count.

Rating: 8.5 Points. The history of the Southern and Northern Dynasties is still fresh for the minority. The narrative method is unique, with a lot of classical Chinese and a lot of historical facts. Reading it is like reading a history book, very rigorous. This way of writing is indeed difficult to read, and the content is too rich and difficult to digest. Generally speaking, there is no sense of immersion when reading history books. To address this issue, the author combines the language of classical Chinese and Internet culture. But I personally feel that there are still some flaws. The plot is basically driven by semi-literary Chinese, while the vernacular parts are mostly weird psychological descriptions and explanations. The atmosphere between the two parts is not harmonious. The author's writing style is very good, but the emotional handling is unsatisfactory and unnatural, which is a pity.

Rating: 7.5 Points. The plot design of the story is very dramatic. Although it is a bit classic, it can still be regarded as a masterpiece once it is written. Unfortunately, the logic didn't quite convince me. The protagonist was pretentious and the supporting characters seemed imbecile from time to time. For me, if a book makes me feel that it has old-fashioned techniques and plots to make people feel happy, and it has very earthy and mindless dialogue narration, I will not be able to muster the motivation to read it. After all, I have read at least thousands of online novels, and I have seen a lot of various routines. Moreover, I am not a very patient person, so I basically read novels. In short, the early plot of this book allowed me to see some possibilities and gain some interest. However, as the plot progressed, the interest disappeared.

Rating: 6.0 Points. I was fooled into it by comments from some book friends who said, "Although the title of the book is very studio-style, I didn't want to read it at first, but after reading it, I unexpectedly found it to be very good." I also believed in evil. Whether the book title was chosen voluntarily or at the request of the editor, it essentially means that the author is targeting the mainstream system-friendly writing. Not one book out of a hundred may meet my taste. Sure enough, as expected. The early farming routines are mediocre and the text is generally readable. Goldfinger is a game system. I personally don't like game articles. There are usually large sections of data. Apart from showing the protagonist's numerical improvement, I don't see any role in serving the plot itself. Moreover, it greatly affects the sense of immersion brought about by the storyline that the novel is good at, making people very excited. To be honest, it would be better for me to read the game articles and play the games directly. The image of a tyrant created by the protagonist is unhealthy in terms of current values. He regards everything as ants. The supporting characters and enemies easily succumbed to the pressure of the protagonist's halo. The reality is really that simple, everyone has a bright future!

Rating: 6.5 Points. Bai Shuang's ancient fantasy cultivating immortality contains a world view below one person's level. We are not that familiar with each other, so it feels a bit novel. The other cool trick is what others say: "This kid is so terrifying, he really is a monster." It has been re-released dozens of times in just a dozen chapters. There are a lot of straightforward psychological descriptions, which I personally think are too wordy. It still has a familiar taste and a familiar formula, suitable for those who like mindless and refreshing writing.