Lord of the Deserted Sand

The protagonist's predecessor was treated so unfairly by the clan, but after the protagonist's soul passed through, he still lived cautiously. After gaining strength, he stopped holding grudges after a few words from the family's top brass. What a high virtue this is! The improvement in strength of the second protagonist is extremely slow. After more than 70 chapters, the protagonist's strength is still far from the bottom of the list of geniuses. Not to mention it's cool, it's pretty good if it doesn't piss people off, but with so many good reviews, are all of them masochists?

I feel like the author started to want to write cool articles, and as he wrote, he became more literary again. As a result, the urge to rise is suppressed first, and when it is time to rise, it is like prostatitis and incessant urination. It rises drop by drop without making any waves at all. I have good writing skills, but I can't devote myself to it at all.

The author said that you are depressed. I personally feel that you are too self-centered and out of tune with the public. I feel that it is difficult for people to really understand the depression caused by you. There are really many things in your book that follow the path of a general manager. It seems that the groundwork is completed and you start to be shaken and realize that your heart begins to change. In fact, these are things that you should have understood a long time ago. To sacrifice your life to kill a comrade with whom you have worked together for less than a year and who have never shared any hardships or debts. In Huaiyang Country, you have sympathy for a lower-class people group that you know before and after the time travel. Moreover, it is meaningless anger. It cannot be said that it is useless, but it is of little use. It is something that everyone knows. If you want to seek certain policies, you must first climb to that position and then go there. Otherwise, you are useless? The protagonist looked at the situation in Huaiyang and felt heartbroken for the suffering of the people at the bottom. Then he went back to make trouble and work hard to become stronger. When he climbed to the head of the dragon, no one would feed the common people after the death of the martial saints in the world.

What kind of useless protagonist is this? Someone let their dogs bite you, but you turned around and killed the two dogs but didn't dare to kill the person😐. I made you laugh, either you can endure it now and force yourself later, or you can kill them all together, how can they kill you even if they have a servant who has no evidence? Just killing a dog would make people laugh

In a world where great power belongs to oneself, the three-legged cat kung fu you learned in reality is so awesome. You have never killed anyone. It is a bit ridiculous, especially when it is written in such detail. Even in modern times, if you, a fighting champion, fight a special veteran who has survived in a front-line war zone, can you survive in unrestricted free fighting?

The protagonist is too much of a virgin, and the plot is too coincidental and not enjoyable.

I only read one chapter, and when I saw one sentence in it, I suddenly didn't want to read anymore. "With such a poor background, why shouldn't he be given a top-notch system?" He traveled through time and became a young master, with no finger to touch the spring water, and was provided with food, clothing, housing, and transportation. He was just a commoner, was bullied, and was not given meat, so he was born in a poor family? I barely read the content behind this sentence in the first chapter, and finally left a comment and stopped reading.

The writing is good, but I don't really accept the setting. Although the author tried his best to describe the psychological changes of the protagonist, as a time traveler with rich information, and the previous body system is too mentally retarded, if you do 11,000,000, it is not enough to be slapped by a powerful person, let's talk about the Feng family part, just come up with it The strong man, the rebels sacrificed in vain, the author did not die long ago, if you are not defeated, you have to fight. If the protagonist is defeated, you should read more and listen more. From bottom to top, there will be more and more information and methods. If you can control it, it is not up to you. It is difficult to calm down. In the world of high martial arts, the cry of the weak is not as good as that of the strong.

This fighting is like a joke. When fighting and killing others, they all use modern free fighting moves, and often use modern words. This is fucking in ancient times, this is ancient martial arts, the world of high martial arts, not playing house, look at what you are writing? Is this a killing technique? Just like joking, you thought it was karate? Kickboxing, modern? There are also those who use words to make fun of you. They are careless. If you don't know how to write about fighting, just copy other people's words and see how others describe them. You are so unprofessional and nondescript.

The capital of this treason is too little. I am speechless when I see that the Li family's treason only killed a few high-level people. They colluded with foreign races, which are not human beings. There is also an organization that is human but anti-human. The court does not say that it will kill the nine tribes, but at least send the treasonous family men to the frontier as coolies, and the women into brothels and kill them as a warning. Otherwise, there will be loopholes everywhere. Isn't this going to end sooner or later?