Small Excerpts from Online Articles, Non-novice, Non-mainstream List Works

Rating: 9.0 Points. It's a very mature online novel, everything is good. The subject matter is original, the plot is complete, the writing is very good and has some humor, and many places make people smile when reading it. There are no flaws or cliche stories, and it is suitable for all general Internet readers. There are a lot of daily updates, the rhythm is very stable, and there is no substandard performance. But maybe it's too perfect as a web article, so for me it lacks some passion and youthful growth story. It's very comfortable and relaxing to read, but I still want a moving story with ups and downs that can make people tear up. Maybe I'm too greedy!

Rating: 8.0 Points. Personally, I am not familiar with Western fantasy works such as Warhammer and The Witcher. As far as this work is concerned, I think the writing is good and the plot is smooth. It should be regarded as a superior work among similar fans. It is also friendly to newcomers who are not familiar with the original work and basically has no reading difficulties. At the beginning, I opened a modified version of the Confucian academy in the village, and the mutual understanding of the teachings of many of my disciples deeply attracted me. I can't wait to see the story of three thousand disciples of Confucius from another world transforming the world. It is so exciting and has infinite possibilities. The Confucian career created by the protagonist also makes people full of curiosity. But it is a pity that after a hundred chapters, the focus of the ink seems to be no longer here, and it has returned to the traditional lord farming. There are so many students of the protagonist, but some impressions are only three or two, and they have slowly become tools of the power. In my opinion the brightest parts of the book were abandoned. The same goes for the portrayal of the Confucian profession. It has become a mixture of professions such as mages and warriors, falling under the so-called magic net, losing its independence and characteristics. Moreover, the protagonist's strength expands sharply after two hundred chapters. He becomes unique and becomes a god. It seems that the strength of the team that has been cultivated with so much painstaking efforts is of little use. The following is a possible personal bias: I feel that the structure of the world of Faerûn is not that reasonable. There are so many messy gods, the near-immortality of the abyss demons, various inexpensive resurrection techniques, thousands of worlds, and the source of all abilities is actually a foreign object "Magic Network". In such a world of solidified despair, I wonder what the meaning of mortal existence is? In particular, this book seems to claim to create a better future for the people at the bottom, but in the end it does not rely on the power of the people at all, but instead turns around and becomes a god? Doesn't this mean that the boy who slays the dragon becomes a dragon before he slays the dragon? In short, I don't like this world view very much. There is a high probability that I will read fan works of Western Fantasy again in the future!

Rating: 9.0 Points. The overall framework is very novel, and the original cultivation path and world view give people a refreshing feeling. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. The writing style is very delicate, the foreshadowing of the story is very deep, and the grand background is generally the seed of a masterpiece. The first part is very amazing. The plot unfolds in a whirlwind manner, exciting and thrilling at every step. It makes people completely immersed in it, as exquisite as a work of art. After the second part, as the map expanded, the rhythm was not so smooth in some places. It also spent a lot of space writing clichéd plots such as Armed Forces. I almost vomited when I saw the third young master of the Tang family, Douluo, competing in a martial arts competition on the mainland. Although the author's writing is very detailed, I personally can't arouse much interest in it. In addition, the plot progressed a bit slowly, and I was confused by many of the foreshadowing things (of course this may be due to my lack of skills). In short, it was not so compact and refreshing. However, this should be the author's debut work, and the quality is already amazing. The flaws do not hide the flaws!

Rating: 7.0 Points. I admire a strong sense of history in historical writing, like authenticity and in-depth thinking, and do not agree with the mainstream view that there are many nbs among time-travelers. Readers who like Shuangwen's traditional show-off routines should find it suitable. After roughly reading about ten chapters, I found it to be a cool historical novel with a certain amount of historical knowledge, but the writing style reads like fantasy, with the time traveler's sense of superiority overflowing, a lot of preaching, a lot of daddy flavor, and the core of the villain's pretentiousness and slap in the face. In addition, the chapter reviews are full of praises such as "Well written, where is the author from? Please recommend this book." The rhetoric is also highly similar. I personally suspect that it is an industrial product operated by a commercial company, maybe?