Psykers Do Not Die from Gunfire

After reading Chapter 5, I couldn't stand the author anymore and immediately became wet. The author has adjusted the setting. The first three chapters or even the first chapter are enough, but the reality is that it has reached a climax of almost escaping from the experiment. The author is still playing with the setting, especially the kind of thing that I am thinking about. If the protagonist wants better talents, just give them to him. It is not the kind of routine that has already been set up, but the author does not know what is wrong. He has to come up with rubbish talents first, and then add a protagonist with special skills that I can think about. There is also the setting of the escort. Faced with two test subjects who are bound to die, what is wrong with the security guard? He insists on showing his superiority to the mice in front of the experimenter, especially his vulgar words and ridiculous behavior, just to deepen the hatred between the two people who are about to die?

I just want to ask. What is the purpose of the protagonist, an orphan, asking for money to die? Do you want those 150,000 credits to be donated to the orphanage that takes you in? Or do you just want to experience the feeling of having 150,000 credits? Yes, using one's own body for experiments is also possible in modern times, but it's just a matter of lack of money. For family or something. There are also some pharmaceutical companies that hire drug testers and pay a lot of money, but they also sign voluntary agreements in advance. Naturally, they understand that there will be side effects and even life-threatening consequences. But people think that they can leave money to their families. Who does the protagonist want to leave 150,000 credits to?

It's very poorly written. The author only cares about the settings in his head, so that after reading the first 30 chapters, it feels like he has not read it. The protagonist is almost offline, the process of explaining psychic powers is like boiled water, and explaining the background of the world is even more disastrous. The beginning of the article talks about these world backgrounds, but in fact no one cares at all. The main protagonist's story setting is minimal, and it's even less exciting. Given psychic skills, even if the effects are not explained on the spot and the protagonist is not allowed to use them, how can you just become the Riddler? I just talked about its function when facing the enemy, and then it went offline again. Let's just say that we are here to read novels, not to guess riddles. If you have anything to say, why are you so secretive? Let's talk about Thousand Stars City. If you're having fun with others, why are you inserting an inexplicable extra story? I finally made some progress and pretended to be cool, but then I just suppressed it. I can only say that the author doesn't know how to write novels at all, and his writing is just a mess.

I don't know if the author can see it in QQ reading. Anyway, in one sentence, the author is awesome. There are very few novels in this category, because the so-called cyberpunk is difficult to define and grasp. If the author can make readers understand it, it is very awesome!

The plot is not procrastinating, the pace is fast, and the sense of excitement is well-accompanied. But because of this, the kernel is too simple Just interacting with readers through coolness does not achieve a deeper emotional interaction To put it simply, there is no combination of coolness and knife I wonder how the subsequent main line will develop? Now the main line is, rebirth, killing people

As title I felt something was wrong from the very beginning when I said that I had a good relationship with the Free Army but was not a member of it. When I saw it later, I was actually silenced. The protagonist kills people from the company, fights against the company, and at the same time saves the people of the Free Army, and cuts off the Free Army's back. When it's over, when the Human Rights Council asks, he says, "You know, I'm not a member of the Free Army." Don't you really feel disgusted? I won't even talk about double standards, because double standards are essentially villains, but what is the character of the protagonist you created? From the beginning of the assassination, it showed that he was essentially a good person and a saint. What did he do? Assassinate the crown prince and overthrow the company. What is the result? "I am a free bounty hunter and the Free Army has nothing to do with me" and so on, even repeated many times, don't you really feel disgusted? If the company offers you a reward, will you do it? Will the Empire put a bounty on the Free Army to kill? Or is it because you said you are not a member of the Free Army? So the biggest shortcoming of this book is the freedom of interpretation, including the battle. I just remember what it is, the combat power is extremely vague, cross-level challenges are commonplace, basically all the battles are step-by-step, killing the second level and the third level is like farting, and you start laughing when you hit it. The word "laughing" literally means "laughing", but there is no exciting fight. Is there any serious illness? I can only say that the scene creation was a failure. For example, when you were taking the three-phase plan information during a company fight, the commander-in-chief suddenly told you that he had changed his plan, that he was ready to die, and then died suddenly, and then there was nothing? Nothing left? There were no condolences, no sadness, and no personnel changes. Dude, I still remember such a person who cannot be reformed. What about the characters you wrote? The second step is to write a long memoir of the Free Army. Who is my good friend, and who has a good relationship with me. . . It's hard to put it into words, I can only say. There are also a lot of poison spots, big and small. The low-level armor is "just there to block bullets, but knives can't block it." "There is a crisis sensor when bullets hit. You can only hit one shot, but the ones behind it will be dodged by ABAB. Do you understand?" The most ridiculous thing is "high-level psykers can't use guns, only melee weapons" and "this is tradition". I mean, is it possible that you can crush the opponent to death with psionic power? You said that when a magician is an apprentice, it is reasonable to use his staff to strike against each other. Why is it that he is still striking against each other when he is a master magician? As for rebirth, I don't even bother to mention it. I don't see the advantage at all.

There are too many loopholes in the logic, and I don't feel the cruelty of the world at all. It's like playing house. I'm still fighting against the company on the front foot, but I left easily and comfortably on the back foot. I can't stand reading this. As an old bookworm, I really can't accept it. The power system is completely chaotic, and it's all based on the author's random additions. I can only say that it is suitable for those who like brainless fun.

There is no reason to give it five stars. Just tell me the time, place, and who to kill after reading more than 400 chapters. In more than 400 chapters, several suspected heroines died in the whole battle. The one who was suspected to be reborn with the protagonist has not shown her face until now. Renata, the drama is just fighting, it is fun, I I understand the battle scene you want to show to the readers, but it is difficult to express what you are thinking in words using imagination alone. Moreover, the plot is too much, a world view controlled by a capital company, and it is suspected that high-level psychics are hiding something or having some conspiracy. As far as I can see now, The drama is inserted from time to time, and those bad people who are unacceptable to my world view and moral bottom line all tell me that this is a terrible world, with slow progress, and I can't see the red flag being planted on the company's forehead. I am very unhappy, a little high and low, and currently I feel the battle. My power is a bit broken. It's hard to imagine that even if the protagonist is really the most talented person in the world, the gap between the fourth and fifth rings is only reflected in the psychic skills and has nothing to do with the psychic control reserves. Well, my brain is a bit muddled. After talking a lot, I just hope the author can write it well.

Ivan was silent for a while, then grinned: "***." Haha

Very good, but don't stop updating. Come on, come on, come on.