The Taiping Army in the Late Ming Dynasty

Rating: 9.0 Points. The story of the peasant uprising in the late Ming Dynasty. The protagonist traveled through time and became a Taoist priest in the mountains. According to the author, he referred to the methods used by Zhang Jiao, Hong Xiuquan and others to start the uprising, which are detailed and well-founded. It also combines the three magic weapons of the founder of the Republic to transform thoughts. The author's writing is delicate and humorous, and the characters are especially realistic. However, it is also a little too detailed and the pace is slow. Especially in the thirty or forty chapters after it was released, it seemed that five chapters a day were bursting out. As a result, I kept writing about trivial things in the countryside. The water was flying, which made it difficult for me to keep up with the updates. But now it has finally returned to the main line, and the pace has become faster, but it is still secretly developing and accumulating strength in several counties down the mountain. I really don't know if the situation can be controlled after the official uprising unfolds. The general outline is still clear and the details are clear. As it is currently written, this is where I worry. If the quality can be maintained in the future, it will be a masterpiece. Another question that puzzles me is that the writing of this book likes to cut back and forth between different scenes, especially the part about water after it is put on the shelves. The previous chapter was about Li Si, and the next chapter suddenly cut to Zhang San. The narrative switching back and forth between two or even multiple plots seems very incoherent, and I personally feel that it is very unpleasant to the senses. There are so many clues that it is difficult to deal with, but if you want to switch, you have to wait for three or five chapters, otherwise it will be very unfriendly to follow up. This is my humble opinion. Generally speaking, this kind of writing method of this book is extremely rare in online writing, and it is rare to find it. The author's writing has great potential, and the above-mentioned issues are considered immature in dealing with complex plots. However, this kind of shortcoming only appears in the process of innovation and pursuit, and is far from comparable to those who are stubborn and self-proclaimed. I'm very optimistic about it, but I think it's a bit exaggerated. I hope you don't slap me in the face🤣

Inheriting the legacy of the wise master Daliang who advocated fairness and harmony in the world thousands of years ago, starting from rural life in the late Ming Dynasty, he meticulously described the social scene of that prosperous age that was far away from the chaos, and used the science and technology he mastered to build organizations step by step from farming to transform the entire world.