Tantric Family to Divine Dynasty

After reading the author's acceptance speech, I feel that I have a little sense of empathy, but not much. To be honest, the joys and sorrows between people are not the same. Although you said that you are miserable, I feel that if it were me, I would not be like this. Although I don't know my own depth, and I don't have the perseverance to write novels, every time I write a novel, I have my own rewards and my own joy. Sometimes I regard my valuable experience in writing novels as very important. If I write it down in a book, if it is lost, I would rather lose money. But I have my own things to do, so I won't be too obsessed with writing. You, the author, when I read your acceptance speech, the one thing I blurted out was: This is too extreme. Maybe I am the kind of person who has no talent, and I don't have much perseverance. I am not qualified to judge a person who is so persistent. If you can achieve what you are today, who am I qualified to judge you? But if I were to review your book from a reader's perspective, I think it's okay. Although what you said is very sad, after reading the chapters before you put them on the shelves, I feel that they are basically consistent with what you said. Indeed, I think there are some explosive points and rhythm, but There is always a rough feeling, which is about polishing the details. If you read a lot of books, you will easily find that I am not judging your book from the author's perspective. I am simply judging the readers' feelings after reading all the chapters before it is put on the shelves. There is a very concise feeling, that is, the explosive points and the amount of information are well grasped. At least I, an old reader, have read the book for so many years. I at least read this exciting article of yours from the beginning before it was put on the shelves, right? Although the details are very rough (that is, the plot jumps very quickly if it feels useless, which will reduce a lot of the sense of immersion). I think it would be much better if you polished this aspect from a writer's point of view. Although it is easy to say that the plot is watery, this is indeed related to the characterization, such as Byrne's wife before, I know you The foreshadowing was laid, and then the two got married soon. I really wanted to vomit a lot of things at the time, but I thought, anyway, the foreshadowing was written, and the process was there, so that's the result, but I still remembered it. The plot was really too rough, and it didn't look like an old author who had written many books at all.) Overall, the creativity was full, and I thought it was really good. Well, that's it. I just wanted to say it for a while, but I didn't expect that I would say so much at once. I'm just easy-going. Alas, there's nothing I can do about it. Emmm, I went back and read the testimonials again, and I felt that the author knew so many big-name authors, and I was a little afraid to post this book review. I felt like I was just a little brother in front of the author, and I had no confidence at all. But when I saw that there were some critical comments in the comment area, I suddenly felt that I didn't count.

The protagonist should cultivate his own religious order instead of becoming the god of a certain family. He should recruit other people to divide the family's power. Especially the first-generation priest wrote loyalty to the family into the classics and paid too much attention to his own family. The protagonist should let others rise to the decision-making level to balance the family's power.

The name of the extraordinary level in that world is not good and cannot be tolerated. Level 1, this level really loses points. Just change the number, Level 1 and Level 2 are better than this. If it is better, change it to sequence, first sequence, second sequence. The name of this realm is really bad. I hope it can be changed. It's really unbearable to watch. If I don't change, I'm going to give up.

Alas, the first problem is that there are many pitfalls, but I never fill them. There are a lot of pitfalls in the early stages that don't appear until the end of the game is almost over. That crystal dragon was of no use from beginning to end. Might as well have sold it then. You keep it as a pet, the settings written in the beginning are so awesome. Then it becomes useless later on. It is obviously based on the family, and the protagonist is still a god, but the timeline is so short, and it has to be written about such a long growth period. What they did was nondescript and purely used as a backdrop. Then the biggest problem is that the rhythm is slow and blindly increases the enemy's combat effectiveness. Belittle the protagonist's combat effectiveness. The opponent's level is always set very high, and then the protagonist boasts about the long level of ascending to the gods, but in fact, what he writes is simply to drive high and go low. A pile of garbage. Upgrading is extremely slow. It's useless, what an idiot. I have never seen such a weak road to becoming a god, and the price/performance ratio is extremely low. It's just that I over-pressed the level. I only reached the fifth or sixth level after writing the first few hundred chapters. I couldn't write the rest anymore. I finished all the later steps in a few dozen chapters. If you don't look at it yourself, don't you think it's very messy? It's very shocking at first glance. The upgrade system is a mess. First of all, as you get to the later stages, it's counterintuitive that you can upgrade so much faster than you did in the early and middle stages, right? Normally speaking, wouldn't it become more difficult the further you go on a path of cultivation? Why do I feel that what you wrote is so wrong? When did it become faster to become a god in the late stage than to be a soldier in the early stage? This character description is also based on those few people who are supporting it from the beginning to the end. The subsequent family members, no matter how awesome their background settings are, have never appeared before. The critical moments from beginning to end are of little use. It was always Chris, and they were doing it there. There are obviously so many awesome geniuses emerging, but even in the late stages, no one can catch up with Chris. Just that quiet road, I was speechless from beginning to end. It's not that they are all useless, it's just that none of them can bear it. The emotional investment in writing the first-generation characters is too high, making it difficult for other characters to rise to the top. There are just a few people in a big family, alas.

Disadvantages: His followers are not loyal to him and cannot be understood. The protagonist has no use at all except to give him strength. I don't know later. Advantages: However, the character description is okay, there is no Madonna, and there are no disgusting plots.

Suggestions I think the protagonist should take the route of believing in becoming a god, cultivating believers and establishing the Holy See. Finally, he can raise the throne of God, open up the Kingdom of God, and compete with other gods for space and supremacy. The Lost Lord is too dark, but the Lord of the Dawn is not bad.

This book is a group portrait, and the author's writing style is very good. The characterization of each character is very good. [Emot=default,80/]

Although time acceleration is something I have always been quite satisfied with. But when you speed up at the end, you can't say it's accelerated, it can only be said to be outline escape . The contract between gods and humans in the second half was not well written. At the same time, the larger worldview does not unfold. And incorrect names. And the last chapter. I think it's better to start a new book with the last one. The new generation of Fishers travels across the stars and multiverses to find the truth about their origins. And resurrecting their loved ones.

It's okay, there's no big problem. If you're short on books, you can make up for it.

The theme is very new, the writing is good, and the plot is exciting