Under One Person: If I Let You Refine Your Qi, Will You Become an Immortal?

Let's not talk about whether this book is good or not. Third-rate fan fiction must copy the plot. The world has not changed because of your arrival. What you have changed is only unimportant details and people who have no impact on the plot. The same plot, the same dialogue, it's like a robot, or a rigid game. When you enter, it seems to trigger the plot and go through the cutscenes. The protagonist is just a plot trigger. A good fan must innovate new plots while respecting the settings of the original work, and use butterfly wings to create new storms. In this book, I only see that the author wants to follow the plot of the original work, not only in general, but also in the details of the dialogue. Lu Jin must be slapped, must say that sentence, your words are like dumplings without fillings, just to express the jealousy of the famous scene in the original work. In a novel like this, the protagonist seems to be killing everyone and stirring up troubles, but in fact it has no impact on the original plot. Back to the novel itself, the author keeps emphasizing over and over again how the protagonist's nature is natural and how he can do whatever he wants. In essence, it's terrible. In order to shape this character, you constantly emphasize and explain it, for fear of reducing the protagonist's quality, but it will be self-defeating. It will be too deliberate and will not follow your heart. It looks very fake and staged. The more a person emphasizes something, the less something will be. Personality is reflected in conversations, choices, and actions. It is not about talking to yourself and emphasizing your personality over and over again. To do one thing, you have to explain four meanings, and then say that the protagonist is the best of the four. This is emphasized all the time. It is like a song whose lyrics are "I love you" in every sentence, and a song that does not have a word for love but expresses love in every sentence. It is a judgment call. I think this novel is suitable for people who have never read Under One Person. Everything is novel and you will not find it to be a pure copy of the original plot. If you really like Under One Person, you shouldn't like this kind of novel without any sincerity. Maybe you just want to revisit the under one person plot.

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Alas, the novel is good because of the plot concept. What can I say about the writing now? How can I explain the lack of exciting plot through various means? It doesn't give people the feeling of being good or bad. It doesn't have the comfortable, calm and realistic feeling in the early stage. The plot with a little passion can be stopped as soon as it is released. The various means obtained in the current writing are so simple to realize. It will collapse in the later stage. There are no perfect people in the first place. The more perfect the protagonist and the more complete the means, the harder it is to write. In the end, it can only be reduced to a cool article that has fun along the way. In the later period, there is really nothing better than specializing in two or three methods but using multi-purpose development to dominate all talents. Designing exciting plots and borrowing the power of various friends to defeat enemies together. If you don't believe the author, look at the original comics. Are there any characters who are proficient in more than five methods? Each character has his own personality and characteristics which is the most exciting

To tell you the truth, I particularly like this book. First, I am a fan of One Man, I admit that. Secondly, I think this book is actually quite good, especially because the main idea is to understand one's own mind and then follow the path on your own. It's that simple, but very exciting. I like it. The third thing is that this is indeed a learned person. As for the methods of moving qi, the author has done a little research on them and has achieved some achievements. What he said is at least quite reasonable. It just makes sense, right? Don't talk about it, this thing is indeed feasible. Even if it is regarded as a novel, the theory is enough. After all, the illusory things can be more refined, and the reality is already great. What's more, dual cultivation of life is what I'm looking forward to.

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In fact, I don't like writing about the Anti-Japanese War. The writing of these fan works is too shallow, especially at the starting point. I neither dare to write nor have any thoughts. The warlords and commanders of old China are meaningless. I really want to read the Republic of China. I recommend Red Dawn, The Fiery Age, Back to the Republic of China as an Editor, Dawn of Civilization, Soviet Lighthouse Authors, etc. Since they are fans, they should specialize in one person. I don't want to read Yan Shuangying.

The Four Realms of Martial Arts: Kindergarten, Elementary School, Junior High School, High School, and High School. The Great Perfection will usher in the catastrophe of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will be promoted to the upper world, and those who fail will be wiped out. There are also a few losers who can survive and become immortals, known as college students. The three realms of the holy way: university, master's degree, and doctorate. In addition to the realm, the strength of these three realms also depends on the number of divine patterns. The divine patterns of the university are called undergraduate thesis. At the master's level, they can be refined into a master's thesis, and at the doctoral level, they can write a doctoral thesis. Legend of Two Realms: Postdoctoral Academician Among them, kindergarten is divided into 3 small areas, elementary school is divided into 6 small areas, junior high school and high school are divided into three small areas each, university is divided into four small areas, graduate students are born in 3 small areas in mainland China, and 2 small areas are outside the territory.

After reading 150 chapters, the summary is: Protagonist: No, no one of you knows your skills better than me. You are practicing all wrong. Then you teach people in a sect that has hundreds or even years ago how to practice their skills. You go to a sect and just pretend like this. The protagonist is the Supreme Emperor, who knows everything. When he sees others peeing, he will say that the peeing method is wrong. I will teach you how to pee. And if you say that you are invincible when writing about such a person, hey, the author doesn't insist on pretending and slapping each sect in the face all the way to upgrade slowly (of course the protagonist may like Tianshi, so he wrote Zhang Tianshi to be as powerful as the protagonist, and the pretense failed directly, but the author's consciousness forcibly intervened and said it was a tie, two awesome ones), if I tell you the real situation, the protagonist would have been beaten to death by all the sects. This book can actually be compressed into a paragraph. The protagonist travels through time, understands the air, understands the super invincible method, and cultivates himself to become an awesome immortal. He can forcibly distort other people's consciousness and make others think that what he said is right. The book ends directly.

Ah, buddy, if you want to change the cover, why don't you update it as soon as possible?

It's not my buddy. Don't end it hastily. If it really doesn't work, you can just pretend to be an expert. If you don't know how to write about Lao Li, just write about Lu Jin. Write about other people. It's okay to let the lead actor abuse people casually. The main thing is to watch the plot advance. If you can't think of a move, just mess it up. If you can't think of a move, just mess it up. If you have an idea, just copy it. Don't realize the Eight Wonders. The more you realize, the harder it becomes to write. Tongtianlu and Fenghouqimen are at least easy to write. Shenji Bailian is useless now. The comics of Qi Ti Origin and Da Luo Dong Guan didn't explain it clearly. There is no need for the Liuku Immortal Thief to have the third level of heaven defying. The function of both hands can be used to the third level of defying the sky. Don't stop trying to understand things. Just follow the existing path and complete it. Most readers come here to realize their dreams and read cool articles. Cool articles won't describe fighting, so just realizing their dreams will do. Don't end it hastily. Please.