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Wei Yuan had no great ambitions at first, but in the tide of the times he had to embark on the road of conquering all directions and opening up new territories. He did not grow old until the mountains were exhausted. Unfair Introduction 1: Immortals are also afraid of industrialization! This is a story about the industrial revolution that takes place in a fantasy world.
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Are all those writing about cultivating immortals so disgusting now?
Starting from Jianlai, the high-level martial arts cultivator kept writing temple plans, and the low-level army also used cavalry at every turn. Monsters and aliens also have cavalry, which is really disgusting to see. TM's army numbers have become useless since the third stage of cultivation. Various large-scale AOEs, in addition to the blessing of formations, and high-level monks and low-level monks fight separately on the battlefield. The legend of Mortal Cultivation is very good, and there are descriptions of large-scale wars. The demon race can have something similar to cavalry, but it is impossible to summarize it by just cavalry. Is it because there is no flying type, or do they still need to ride horses because their own racial talents or speed are not good enough? Let's just say it's not like a horse, but your monster mount can't be the same as a human's, right? Can you imagine humans riding horses against a wave of demons that are taller than humans and horses combined? Even if it is a variant of the horse, the human form is limited here and cannot be compared with the original form of the monster. In this book, I have recently begun to write about realistic thinking again. The protagonist either travels through time or creates a time-traveling NCP to inject ideologicalism. If I had known it earlier, what would the hundreds of thousands of years of cultivating society have not experienced? Is there no work repair? The time traveler also needs to come up with a gun. The artillery is also blessed by divine consciousness. Isn't that a flying sword? Then people can also throw them through the air through talismans. Even if they can't be intercepted at the same level, they can explode each other. Not to mention that the Witch Clan, which has always been at the top level in the world, doesn't have this method.
Can it be updated faster?
The first work I read about you was "The King of Night", and the ending was a bit unexpected. Later I went to read "Blasphemy", and after reading about two hundred chapters of "God's Advent", I didn't feel like it was written by you. I haven't seen you write for a long time. I hope this work can be updated a little faster and it can become a hit. Whether it's the work or yourself, you can go to the top of the mountain and take a look. Come on! I also wish all book friends a bright future. In good health. Work went smoothly. Let's go to the top of the mountain to have a look. Come on!
Many of the authors' maps are all about nine states in the world. They already know what the surroundings are like and have no desire to explore. It is a cliché every day that no matter the starting point or QQ reading, it is a pool of stagnant water. Let me set it up: A circular flat continent 10,000 light-years wide, with a continent on the front and deep into the earth. The deeper it goes, the slower the speed of light and the wider the space. It can never reach the deepest underground. There are hundreds of millions of races on earth, and the strongest race only occupies 1/1 million of the mainland. There's carbon, silicon, ions. . . The life forms include the Tentacle Tribe, Cube Tribe, Ball Tribe, Tree Tribe, Spirit Tribe, Stone Tribe, Transparent Tribe, Magma Tribe, Information Tribe, Microscopic Tribe, Inverted Tribe, Polyhead Tribe, Wei Tribe, Ghost Tribe, Funny Tribe, Kun Tribe, Moonlight Tribe, and Hundred Eyes Tribe. . . There are also the small human tribes that traveled through space from the Song Dynasty to the mainland. The protagonist, Li Hao, comes here to cultivate immortality, travel, escape, and investigate the mainland's ecosystem. Or, the protagonist Er Gouzi chooses to die on the day he travels: Chaos beads, add some panels, only space without matter, three times faster farming space, life span of 10,000 years, reincarnation 100 times, world's top talent, world's top luck. . . (Same plot, different protagonist, different plot, you can write 100 books)
After reading more than 80 chapters, I visually judged that it was another masterpiece, and the familiar smell of smoke came back. It's not even a bit better than the previous one, Tian'a. I really suspect that Tian'a is a ghostwriter.
Great tobacco production. It must be a high-quality product, and it is really a few galaxies away from those mouthpieces that coax primary school students.
Wei Yuan, who had personally killed refugees at the age of three, was not afraid of fighting. I didn't want to watch it for a moment, three years old, fighting? Refugees? Are you serious
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Yan Da's writing style is of course nothing to say, so we don't need to mention the update at all, everyone knows it. It's just that the last few books are all bad... Especially the last one, the last dozens of chapters are simply "incomprehensible"😊
"I like to read cool novels and turn left when I go out." 🤣👉 Reading a novel and seeing the spiritual filial piety of a family is really annoying. Not worthy of carrying shoes in Sin City. If you like to lick, continue
The more you write, the farther you go. Don't go the way Jianlai did. Jianlai gave up decisively when he saw Chen Ping'an's clone pretending to be cool.
How should I put it, although the story has always revolved around the realm, it just gives people a sense of disarray. The rhythm and storyline are always a bit awkward, and there are many details but not enough detail. The emotional scenes are even rougher and have no foreshadowing. Being together for a long time does not mean that they will fall in love. There is no need for every woman around the protagonist to fall in love with him. The writing of this book is good, but the plot is a little less interesting, especially after the 500th chapter, it becomes more and more boring, without ups and downs, and lacks a climax.
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Official(169)Scraped 2d ago
Are all those writing about cultivating immortals so disgusting now?
Starting from Jianlai, the high-level martial arts cultivator kept writing temple plans, and the low-level army also used cavalry at every turn. Monsters and aliens also have cavalry, which is really disgusting to see. TM's army numbers have become useless since the third stage of cultivation. Various large-scale AOEs, in addition to the blessing of formations, and high-level monks and low-level monks fight separately on the battlefield. The legend of Mortal Cultivation is very good, and there are descriptions of large-scale wars. The demon race can have something similar to cavalry, but it is impossible to summarize it by just cavalry. Is it because there is no flying type, or do they still need to ride horses because their own racial talents or speed are not good enough? Let's just say it's not like a horse, but your monster mount can't be the same as a human's, right? Can you imagine humans riding horses against a wave of demons that are taller than humans and horses combined? Even if it is a variant of the horse, the human form is limited here and cannot be compared with the original form of the monster. In this book, I have recently begun to write about realistic thinking again. The protagonist either travels through time or creates a time-traveling NCP to inject ideologicalism. If I had known it earlier, what would the hundreds of thousands of years of cultivating society have not experienced? Is there no work repair? The time traveler also needs to come up with a gun. The artillery is also blessed by divine consciousness. Isn't that a flying sword? Then people can also throw them through the air through talismans. Even if they can't be intercepted at the same level, they can explode each other. Not to mention that the Witch Clan, which has always been at the top level in the world, doesn't have this method.
Can it be updated faster?
The first work I read about you was "The King of Night", and the ending was a bit unexpected. Later I went to read "Blasphemy", and after reading about two hundred chapters of "God's Advent", I didn't feel like it was written by you. I haven't seen you write for a long time. I hope this work can be updated a little faster and it can become a hit. Whether it's the work or yourself, you can go to the top of the mountain and take a look. Come on! I also wish all book friends a bright future. In good health. Work went smoothly. Let's go to the top of the mountain to have a look. Come on!
Many of the authors' maps are all about nine states in the world. They already know what the surroundings are like and have no desire to explore. It is a cliché every day that no matter the starting point or QQ reading, it is a pool of stagnant water. Let me set it up: A circular flat continent 10,000 light-years wide, with a continent on the front and deep into the earth. The deeper it goes, the slower the speed of light and the wider the space. It can never reach the deepest underground. There are hundreds of millions of races on earth, and the strongest race only occupies 1/1 million of the mainland. There's carbon, silicon, ions. . . The life forms include the Tentacle Tribe, Cube Tribe, Ball Tribe, Tree Tribe, Spirit Tribe, Stone Tribe, Transparent Tribe, Magma Tribe, Information Tribe, Microscopic Tribe, Inverted Tribe, Polyhead Tribe, Wei Tribe, Ghost Tribe, Funny Tribe, Kun Tribe, Moonlight Tribe, and Hundred Eyes Tribe. . . There are also the small human tribes that traveled through space from the Song Dynasty to the mainland. The protagonist, Li Hao, comes here to cultivate immortality, travel, escape, and investigate the mainland's ecosystem. Or, the protagonist Er Gouzi chooses to die on the day he travels: Chaos beads, add some panels, only space without matter, three times faster farming space, life span of 10,000 years, reincarnation 100 times, world's top talent, world's top luck. . . (Same plot, different protagonist, different plot, you can write 100 books)
After reading more than 80 chapters, I visually judged that it was another masterpiece, and the familiar smell of smoke came back. It's not even a bit better than the previous one, Tian'a. I really suspect that Tian'a is a ghostwriter.
Great tobacco production. It must be a high-quality product, and it is really a few galaxies away from those mouthpieces that coax primary school students.
Wei Yuan, who had personally killed refugees at the age of three, was not afraid of fighting. I didn't want to watch it for a moment, three years old, fighting? Refugees? Are you serious
Support the tobacco industry
Yan Da's writing style is of course nothing to say, so we don't need to mention the update at all, everyone knows it. It's just that the last few books are all bad... Especially the last one, the last dozens of chapters are simply "incomprehensible"😊
"I like to read cool novels and turn left when I go out." 🤣👉 Reading a novel and seeing the spiritual filial piety of a family is really annoying. Not worthy of carrying shoes in Sin City. If you like to lick, continue
The more you write, the farther you go. Don't go the way Jianlai did. Jianlai gave up decisively when he saw Chen Ping'an's clone pretending to be cool.
How should I put it, although the story has always revolved around the realm, it just gives people a sense of disarray. The rhythm and storyline are always a bit awkward, and there are many details but not enough detail. The emotional scenes are even rougher and have no foreshadowing. Being together for a long time does not mean that they will fall in love. There is no need for every woman around the protagonist to fall in love with him. The writing of this book is good, but the plot is a little less interesting, especially after the 500th chapter, it becomes more and more boring, without ups and downs, and lacks a climax.
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-[Misty Rain Jiangnan-]- 🔝 - Pin it to the top for 2000 likes next time! Long Zang is a new work by the great master Yanyu Jiangnan. Yanyu Jiangnan is not only well-known to everyone, but it is also famous. The book Blasphemy has a very high status in the eyes of old bookworms. Ryuzo's book may be a little lower than the standard he used to write Western fantasy, but it's still a good work. First of all, the biggest advantage of Yanyu Jiangnan is its superb writing style. This applies to the Western Fantasy of the past to the immortal heroes of today, and this book is no exception. Whether it is the environment, characters, or the way they practice, many detailed descriptions are added to give readers a complete picture. Especially the battle scenes are not dry descriptions of "telling the names of dishes", but rather immersive. Secondly, in the current fast-paced overall online literary environment, Yanyu Jiangnan has also made corresponding changes, although the progress of the main plot of this book is relatively slow. However, he did not keep the pace of the novel the same as before, but slightly faster pace. For example, in the early stage, there was a plot section that combined small and big points of excitement. However, compared to the usual novels nowadays, this book uses a lot of large paragraphs (which are considered large paragraphs in online articles, seven or eight lines). Some people may not like to read this kind of book, but I personally feel that it is pretty good. Finally, the character creation in this book is also very brilliant. Even the minor characters or villains are designed with their own characteristics. Although the villain who makes things difficult for the protagonist is a minor villain, it can still make people feel angry when looking at it. This is the advantage of the writing style. Of course, the overall pace of this book is slow. For example, this book talks about industrialization, but readers who click in to read it will be confused and fail to see the content of industrialization for a long time. I can only say that if you look at it slowly, there will be some in Xianxia, and there will also be industrialization - because although there are time travelers in this book, the protagonist is not a time traveler, so it is impossible to engage in industrialization at the beginning. In short, not to mention the advantages of writing, world view and characterization, this book is worth reading just for the name Yanyu Jiangnan.




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