There's a Dungeon in My Living Room

The writing and creativity are good at the beginning, but the protagonist keeps selling gold nuggets in the same gold shop, which is too cliché! It's a big poisonous point! The second most poisonous point is being seduced by beauty and kidnapped in a remote place! Very updated and routine! The protagonist seems to be mentally retarded! It feels like the protagonist doesn't look like an adult at all and lacks the due vigilance! It's really stupid and suicidal to still be so wasteful after getting a chance! It looks very uncomfortable! The sense of immersion is greatly reduced! If you, the author, put yourself into the perspective of the protagonist, would you make the same choice? I guess not? But are readers stupider than you? Don't treat readers as if they are mentally retarded! And don't create drama for plot's sake!

Being a magician and martial artist is an extremely idiotic profession. If you don't succeed at a high level, you won't be able to do it at a low level. Even if you reach the end, you won't fall to the sky. In the future, martial arts will still fly into the sky and escape from the earth with all kinds of magical powers to destroy the sky and the earth. Magic doesn't just add status, people can also refine various potions, magic props, and magic puppets. Fighting a magician is like fighting an army. The two specialties of magic and martial arts are gone, only the most rubbish ones.

The protagonist's IQ is only 5, so I don't recommend watching it. He couldn't walk when he saw a woman, as if he had never seen a woman in his life.

The plot is not as protracted as the infinite dungeon. The dungeon is equivalent to upgrading and practicing. The plot is based on reality. This idea is very good.

When will a character card for the protagonist be issued? What are the attributes of the protagonist now?

Damn it, where is the new book? I want to read it.

I don't know whether it's because the protagonist's IQ is not online or because the author is a newbie. I've already seen the third dungeon, but I found that the protagonist still has no plan at all. He relies entirely on waves. After one wave, he waves to the next. He rushes in without preparation or plan. It's true that he is a passerby-level dungeon. If you wait for the end of the wave, you will die! There is also reality. Knowing that the large number of gold nuggets represents gold veins, you actually designate a store to collect wool. If not, who will you tie? You just passed the second dungeon and went out to hang out. How horny are you? Forget it, just put it there and look at it when you have time. Disinfect it first to avoid excessive accumulation of toxins and death.

You said it was a dungeon setting when the monsters fell out of control at the beginning, but I could bear it. But later on, the reality of the earth, the dialogue, and the characters being turned down were too serious, and I really couldn't bear it.

Is this book really written by the author? Isn't the gap with the full-time boss too big? The first few dozen pictures look like they were written by a newbie with a lot of bad points...

Your book was edited, and a book called My Computer Leads to a Copy Life was found to be in the same vein as yours 🙂