Fahai Wants to Return to Secular Life

As long as the back part doesn't drift, this is a sacred book for fast travel and spiritual practice. It has broken away from the level of novice and cool writing. Even I, a person who has read novels for many years, can't find any fault with it. If you write a few more chapters, I will invest 5,000 for ten minutes and give you a reward of 10,000? How?

A letter to the author! Hello! Author! I have carefully read the book Fa Hai Wants to Return to the World, and I am completely convinced. At the same time, I am also a little cautious. Here I will give you some immature opinions, if you think I am criticizing you or making pretense. I'm here to apologize to you, I'm sorry! First of all, I don't know if you have an outline. Secondly, everyone is familiar with The Legend of White Snake, because the first impression of the characters in the play comes from the TV series, and you can't portray Xu Xian in the play at all. Because of how you write, people will still compare Xu Xian in the TV series. On the contrary, although Fa Hai is a villain, he is a fanatical believer in the TV series, which is relatively monotonous and stereotyped. So the failure of your novel is because Xu Xian's role is too full. It doesn't matter if Fa Hai has Xu Xian or not, right? After all, Fa Hai is more than 60 years older than Xu Xian, and your Xu Xian is so disgusting. In addition, the boundaries are too vague. A three-hundred-year-old little monster can actually be active for 20 chapters? Two thousand years of cultivation cannot be killed in an instant, but 300 years of cultivation can! Can I defeat him with a few tricks? When Fahai wants to return to secular life, the first heroine should also be White Snake, right? This is an imaginary film and television, and you will not have the right to change the film and television no matter what. If you want to survive in the Internet literary world, you have to be a little bit poisonous! But I'm sorry, I only saw the poisonous points, not the refreshing points. If I remember correctly, this monk Fahai is still a time traveler, right? They all say that Ma Laojing is slippery, but where is this monk's brain? Goblins and ghosts that live for thousands of years? Is your brain also burned out? Apart from anything else, there is really something wrong with the centipede spirit's head. If he doesn't take away such an important spiritual treasure like a spiritual pearl, why should he pretend to do it in the hands of others? Based on the above, I am sure that what you wrote is not a cool article, but the size of your book is a shackle that limits it. It cannot have the rights to comics, movies, etc. Because it itself is born out of this system. The title of the book is seriously inconsistent with the work, there are so many chapters. Mea has a bit of a secular meaning. What are you doing if you are confused?

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Isn't it common sense to say that adding water to the fire will make the fire worse? It's neither a high-pressure water gun nor a small fire. It's also unbelievable. The oxygen released by water evaporation has a combustion-supporting effect on fire. In addition, in ancient times, water from barrels was poured very slowly and the water would evaporate faster. In ancient houses, wood and stone were mixed, and heating was all based on burning firewood or charcoal. Not to mention one year, one fire for more than ten years is not too much, right? If they had really put out a fire, they wouldn't say that. Isn't this junior high school knowledge?

After reading it, I feel very good But it's a bit short, I hope the author can continue to work hard Also, I want to ask the author about the heroine, is it a single heroine Xiaoqing?

As soon as I came in, I was a little surprised to see a finished copy. After reading the comment section, I was really surprised that your mistake was outrageous👀

No matter how you say it, I feel that the protagonist is still relatively big-hearted, maybe he is positioned as a refreshing novel, he is not wary, and he feels a bit like a good old man. Let's just say that the green clam was obviously tricked by Lin Qingxuan. He accepted it very easily at the time, and did not think about it later or ask his elders. It may not be an IQ story, but the whole story has a very smooth rhythm and no other obvious bad points. However, I still hope that the protagonist is too heartless and can easily be paced by others.

This Fahai is so weak! Where is my mighty Tianlong momentum? When did I, Fahai, ever become cowardly? When my Fahai comes, do I still need to level up? You have come a few years ago if you want to level up. What level do you need to level up now that the plot of The Legend of White Snake has begun? My great power, Tianlong, is gone.

It is recommended that the author go to the editor to see if the completed version can be revised. Many people will not click in after seeing this word count plus the completed version.

This book is included in many book lists. It should be good. I will start listening to the book officially tomorrow 🤓