Cultivation Means Accepting Your Fate, But What If My Fate Is Worth More?

The author transitioned from fan fiction to fantasy cultivation, but that's not the problem. The problem lies in the protagonist's constant overly cautiousness. Even when he does something perfectly well in certain details and finally wins, he starts self-destructing, ruining the situation and making it impossible to break the deadlock, which is when you cut him off. The same applies to this book.

This book is hopeless. The cultivation sects are cannibalistic, the kind that devour people cleanly. The protagonist is of Gu family blood, but it's practically like he isn't! The protagonist has a cheat ability, but it's useless! Because there exists a cultivation world that doesn't believe in cause and effect, luck, sudden enlightenment, comprehension, or the possibility of immortality through…

The author's design is like forcibly dragging a highly talented person into a life-or-death situation within a small radius, rendering the protagonist's abilities useless. It's one thing if it's within the sect—so many people happen to encounter two fortunate cultivators; at most, it's just bad luck.

First, the writing is extremely verbose and tedious. It explains the same thing over and over again, ten or eight times. You can tolerate reading it once or twice, but it's unbearable after the third time. Second, their worldview is incredibly naive. Every sect is adept at statistical analysis, and even the patriarch is said to possess the lowest level of talent.

I don't usually give bad reviews, and this author's work is acceptable. It's a purely protagonist-torture story, and the beginning is alright. Although the start is difficult, the protagonist's cheat ability is very strong, so it's still acceptable. But what's with this family and sect? They're all newborns, right?!

You've been rambling on for seven chapters, and you still haven't started? You've just been babbling on and on with all this nonsense. Or I'll give you a suggestion that's guaranteed to go viral: Just live a day in the protagonist's world, and then spout a million-word sermon. It'll be an absolute sensation online. That's only seven chapters of nonsense; you could write a million words of nonsense right from the start, 300 chapters. It'll definitely be a hit! Want to give it a try?

I'd guess two million words. I'm begging you, author, can't you just finish writing a book properly? 😭

Has the author actually studied data statistics or just made assumptions? Did they learn about controlled variables in mathematics? To truly statistically analyze the cultivation time for each talent, one must control for variables. All cultivation worlds involve the compatibility of cultivation techniques and comprehension.

I couldn't stand it anymore. So much trouble for a mere Qi Refining cultivator. I ran away.

Damn it, every time we enter a market, we fall into another trap. Author, your attempts to suppress the characters are too obvious. Why don't you write a story where the protagonist gets bullied as soon as he goes out?