Cultivation Means Accepting Your Fate, But What If My Fate Is Worth More?

There is no hope for this book. The Immortal Cultivation Sect cannibalizes people, like Qian Jing. The protagonist is of the Gu family blood, but it is not the Gu family blood! The protagonist has a golden finger, but it's useless! Because there is a world of immortality that does not believe in cause and effect, luck, enlightenment, understanding, and immortality! ! ! As mentioned at the beginning, this sect only believes in spiritual roots and previous experiences, and it goes to the extreme to deceive people. Any opportunity given to its disciples will be taken away. The world set by the author is so hopeless!

The author changed from a fan to fantasy and immortality. Your problem is not here. Your problem lies in the fact that the protagonist is cautious every time and does a good job in some details. In the end, he finally wins, and then the protagonist starts to self-destruct. Through self-destruction, the situation is so bad that the game cannot be broken, and then you are cut off. This book is also like this. The protagonist's world line changes, and no matter how much others guess, it is impossible for others to guess it. The protagonist suddenly reveals this information for no reason or reason.

The author's design is like dragging a highly talented person into a situation where life and death are within three feet, making the protagonist's abilities useless. That's all in the sect. There are so many people but you meet two monks who have a chance. At best, you are unlucky. But when you get to Fangshi, you don't ask for information first and you insist on admitting your defeat. In the end, you make a big fuss. But entering the black shop is avoidable. Can you let Lu Tong wait for you to settle down for a few days before leaving? Why don't you ask for information first when entering a store? After entering a black shop, as long as you can make a big fuss, the other party won't be able to force you to sign a contract.

I guess two million words. I really beg you, author, can you finish writing a book seriously?😭

It's not that you've been talking nonsense for seven chapters and you haven't even started yet. Otherwise, I will give you a suggestion that is guaranteed to be popular. You can simply spend a day in the protagonist's world and you can say a million words of great truth. It's absolutely popular all over the Internet. It's only 7 chapters of nonsense. You just write a million words of nonsense and start with 300 chapters. It's sure to be popular! Do you want to try it?

It's so damn obvious that you fall into another trap as soon as you enter a market. Author, it's too obvious that you want to oppress others. Why don't you write that the protagonist gets bullied every time he goes out?

There is no serious ending, so I will leave first because of the reputation.

As mentioned above, there are more than 100 pictures and I am still feeling aggrieved. Even if I know that I will be aggrieved by the next revision, I won't be unable to survive, right?

Let's write a Western fantasy next book. The DND (Dungeons and Dragons) genre is on the rise, and there is an audience at the beginning. Compared with traditional fantasy and fairy tales, I feel that the author can definitely study this aspect. If we only draw on similar settings, I don't know if it counts as fanfic, but I think it should be considered original. I have been paying attention to the author since "Genshin Impact But the Real World", and it can be seen that the author does have many ideas about settings. If you don't delve deeply into exploring your own talents and ideas, writing them down is a waste of time. You can pay attention to some western fantasy themes on the monthly ticket list. Those more famous western fantasy ones. To be honest, strictly speaking, there are not many that can be read (it should be said that the overall level of online literature now feels average), but they can still get close to 10,000 subscriptions. Last year's Twelve Heavenly Kings are now in trouble. The author should stop thinking about fantasy innovation. To be honest, there are too many micro-innovations now and it's not interesting. The trend is reincarnation, just attack Xihuan and it will be over. [Of course, the above is a personal opinion. It's hard to say how good the author's results are. After all, the author has put so much effort into it. To be honest, I feel like there hasn't been much progress in the past few years. 26.9.17 Thursday 10:23

The author can't just suppress it, he has to relax it in a moderate way. Why should it be done like this directly in the market? You can let the protagonist stay in the market for a while and upgrade a few levels.