Genshin Impact, but in the Real World

This book was a bit interesting when I first read it, with a routine of suppressing first and then rising. But when I look at it, it feels wrong. Not to mention whether the author has changed the character of the Genshin Impact. Just amplifying the conspiracy theory without writing the shining points of the original character makes people feel that they are another character written in the skin of Genshin Impact. Moreover, the protagonist is still "suppressed" and has no "yang" at all. He has not yet obtained his power and is still talking nonsense. It makes people feel visually tired. It is better to simply change the title of the book to "My Political Career in Teyvat" so that some readers can be screened out and a loyal audience can remain.

The first premise that needs to be explained is that except for a few super-powerful holders of the Eye of God, it is basically impossible to ignore the ordinary army.        ，， The Eye of God only gives a shortcut that allows people to manipulate elemental power. Various martial arts and techniques are the result of learning, training and continuous development of the application of elemental power.

Tsk, the story behind the 12+ plot has been expanded to be self-explanatory, and the character control of the characters has not collapsed for the time being. I can only say that the author's writing is very good, but it is indeed a bit watery. Please listen to me: Writing a novel is writing a story, not a plot analysis post by Miyoushe. Some of the analysis behind it can be hinted through detailed scene descriptions, rather than written dryly in the form of third-party narration, or written repeatedly. In addition, the goals of the protagonist of this book are relatively practical at present (pay off debts, revitalize the family, pursue revenge, and gain strength), which means that if there are no emergencies, the content of this book will not be too much. To me, it is a tasteless thing and a pity to abandon. But I also know that with the current rhythm and the author's writing power, it is impossible for the protagonist to suddenly have a big personality change. This is very uncomfortable and a bit tangled. In my humble opinion, I still hope Haihan.

Generally speaking, it's just a plot book covered in the skin of Genshin Impact. For people who only know the general story of Genshin Impact, the author's writing is basically good, but upon closer inspection, everything written by the author is full of poisonous points.

What should I say about this book? If you come in with the mentality of writing about games and having fun, you can leave directly. If you want to know more about the plot of the game, the author of this book has patched MiHoYo, but in terms of writing ideas, it is more like a political article. The thoughts of many original characters are purposeful, which inevitably gives people a feeling that the characters have collapsed and there is no good person in the world. Of course, there are still some true, kind and beautiful people in it, such as Xiao Gong and Amber. There are advantages and disadvantages to writing this way. The advantage is that everyone's IQ is online and things develop logically; the disadvantage is that it makes the world feel dark and everyone is bad. It deviates a bit from the original 12+ setting (although the plot missions in this game are not considered 12+ at all 😂) There is another disadvantage. One thing is emphasized repeatedly, and one idea is written several times in a different way. Often a chapter seems to have a lot of words, but it only wants to express one thing, and then it is written again using the same thing that has been said before, with repeated emphasis. It is a bit uncomfortable to watch, it is really water. . .

I owe 10 billion molas at the beginning... Yaoshou, what kind of strange currency concept is this? ? The reconstruction of Qun Jade Pavilion will cost less than 1 billion mola You just write that you owe ten Qun Jade Pavilion at the beginning This is not a small number even at the national level.

I kept saying the same thing over and over again, "Why don't I spend money to watch you write a paper?" The plot is indeed very interesting, but who would feel comfortable giving you money like this? What if you write about Xumi? Even if it's just about bullying Paimon? Isn't it better than you scolding people for more than 20 points a day? ? ? I know you are thinking about how to write the next plot, which is good, I like it very much, but if you click on a chapter that costs more than 20 points a day, it is a pure fraud. If you do this again, I will scold you.

How to say it? I hope that the current protagonist can be beautiful alone and just strive for herself! Because none of the characters currently appearing are suitable for the female protagonist! At least in the current situation the protagonist is in, none of them are suitable! Yura is currently the most unsuitable! If you have a female protagonist at this stage, you can either turn on the protagonist's halo and enter the fairy tale world. Hello, me, hello everyone! Otherwise, the heroine should be faded out of the plot and no longer become one of the variables in the plot changes! Of course, having said all that, I hope there will be no female protagonist! Because as of now, the protagonist is not a love brain! Then that's it, there's no need to write a sweet love story! Of course, there must be a story about love without royal laws! It's not impossible! I just say what I think, how do I write it? It depends on the author! Come on!

It's a bit interesting, but very watery, very watery. If it ends like this, I can only say that the author deserves it and I wish him the best in his life.

The world view of Genshin Impact is still a long way from the end, such as why the Queen, who has not yet appeared, and Kanreia, who has not yet learned the truth, became the Kong brother of the Teyvat people. These pitfalls can only be seen when the plot appears in the future, but now it is version 3.6, And there seems to be 3.7. It will take a year or two until the pitfalls are filled, and it is really unbearable. It's not that I can't continue to make things up. For example, I can take out the Flower God Book and the Desert Book and continue writing. If that doesn't work, I can go back and celebrate a festival. This way I can still get to 3.7, And maybe I can get another wave of lives. Strictly speaking, this is the happiest period since I wrote a novel. In fact, I am quite reluctant to part with everyone's subscription money. After all, I have to rely on this to make a living... But it is really unnecessary. At this point in the story, my ability has reached the top. In fact, I can reach the top at one million words. It's just that Apep appeared at that time, so I can hold on a little longer. The writing of this book is not considered a stumbling block, because there is a general plot to rely on, and it is relatively easy to write. At one point, I wanted to get the 30-day, 10,000-update badge, but I was knocked down by the epidemic after persisting for almost 20 days, and then I never recovered... Tsk, you are not determined. The signing and listing were a bit strange, because the data at the time was average, and I was very happy to be signed. The listing was a bit shabby, but I also think the subsequent results were very good. After all, these were the months in which I earned the most money for writing. That's okay. I feel deeply ashamed for the rushed ending, and I feel sorry for everyone's subscription money, but my ability is limited and there are too many pitfalls, so I really can't write a better ending. Above, I just wrote my closing remarks after two days of rest. As a result, the system prompts that it cannot be published, so say goodbye in the comment area! Goodbye, book friends!