Kindling the First Flame in Belobog

Enough with the nonsense. Can't you solve the Star Core problem first? If you can solve the Star Core problem, as long as you have the ability and are willing to protect Beroborg forever, the position of Grand Guardian is yours for the taking. It's not some old-fashioned drama of overthrowing a useless and incompetent ruler.

I think the protagonist's change is acceptable, but the premise is that he changes for his own future and not because he is influenced by the high-ranking pharmacist. What's the point of having some kind of influence? Those who make it to the end are all people of great standing. Intrigue and trickery are beneath them. Besides, the overall atmosphere of Star Iron is idealistic and romantic.

Every time I read this author's book, something new pops into my head. "You can think like that?" That's why I keep reading. Author, you don't need to write too many explanations or lectures; we can all understand and empathize. Although it's as unrealistic as expecting you to write a good romance, I still hope you won't make the protagonist so "tired." Give them some space to relax; otherwise, the cold, impersonal feeling won't last. How about some love and justice? @Chen's Books

The author has a recurring problem: a large portion of the text is filled with useless arguments, and the writing is particularly convoluted, making it tiring to read.

Hey, don't do that! 😭 What attracts me is a protagonist who appears respectable on the surface but secretly does all sorts of bad things, using any means necessary, without moral constraints or the burden of a certain identity. 🥺

Stars Fire can start a prairie fire.

Although this is just my guess, is the author planning to write a third Genshin Impact book?

After this paid chapter begins, could you please avoid the kind of filler content that plagued the first two books? Repeating already explained principles and logic once or twice is fine, but please don't repeat them three or four times. This was especially severe in the first two Genshin Impact books, where principles and logic already discussed were repeatedly used.

Hmph

This isn't a mistake, it's a complete loss of control!