Genshin Impact: From the Start in the Sea of Sand, Straight to the Divine Throne

As the comments section has pointed out, this book is too subjective; 80% of a chapter might be filled with personal opinions. The author has fallen into a common pitfall for newcomers, even though he's already written a book. Everyone likes to talk about principles, but not everyone likes to hear them, especially superficial ones. Too much talk just feels like a rambling account.

As someone who reads Genshin Impact fanfiction, I have absolutely no interest in what the protagonist thinks or any other kind of spiritual or moral development. I just want to see what he does. From the very first chapter, it's just rambling, pretentious nonsense that gives me a headache. Get this straight, this is just fanfiction.

You've spent 40 chapters explaining grand principles, and you've only conquered one tribe. I bet you could write another 1000 chapters and still not unify the desert.

I don't know why there are so many novels about Genshin Impact. Genshin Impact is not suitable for writing novels. The world view of Genshin Impact is incomplete. If you add your own settings, you will need to compare it with the settings that miHoYo will release in the future if you want to become popular. But that is obviously suicidal. Can you write a story that surpasses miHoYo's?

Genshin Impact, but the real world Second playthrough, Chapter 3: Fireworks Fade Easily, Human Hearts Change Easily "The fireworks were beautiful." (She's also very good-looking.) For Jiang Qing, no matter how beautiful the fireworks were, they couldn't compare to the possibility of escaping Inazuma. Actually, I didn't pay much attention to this fireworks display.

Genshin Impact, but the real world Second playthrough, Chapter 1 "Hey, wake up!" Someone patted him on the shoulder, "You didn't kill this foreign businessman, did you?" In short, Jiang Qing was reborn and successfully broke free from the system's control. Whether Tianli intervened behind the scenes is hard to say, but in any case, he has temporarily escaped his status as a pawn of the system.

Genshin Impact, but the real world Second playthrough, Chapter 2: First Encounter with Yoshimiya in Naganohara. Having a divine eye and not having one are two different things. With a divine eye, one can filter and purify elemental power, and the growth rate of a Genshin Impact far exceeds that of an ordinary person.

The protagonist is always being too clever for his own good. He doesn't have god-level martial arts, yet he wants to conquer the desert. Do you know why the Inazuma Tenryo Magistrate dares to be so reckless? Because they know that the Thunder General is there to back them up.

A chapter or two of rambling on about profound truths is enough. At first, I was intimidated by the author's sophisticated language, but then a wise person in the comments section enlightened me. "They talk such lofty and noble things, but they're just stuck in a small village playing boring political games." Outrageous! Are you writing a novel or a psychological description of the protagonist?

Expository writing is a very annoying style and a sign of the author's incompetence; it's similar to writing an instruction manual.