Anime Crossover: I'm Making History

This book has a serious flaw: it contains too much unnecessary talk and inner monologues. Frankly, we readers are here to read the story, not to read the protagonist's inner thoughts. What matters is the plot's progression and exciting storyline, not the protagonist's psychological activities. To put it bluntly, we readers don't really care about the protagonist's inner thoughts.

Investigation Report: "Number"-592 Survey subject: Main character of "Anime Crossover: I'm Making History" - [Kuse Yoriichi] Investigation results: [Resurrection through a corpse] Criteria for judgment: Abnormal traits: Transmigration Investigators, as the name suggests, are professionals who investigate and record the transmigration situations of transmigrators.

I've thought about the concept; the author might want to take a look. Izanami's curse was: "My dear brother, because of your deeds, I shall strangle a thousand of your people every day!" Izanagi responded, "My dear sister, if you do this, I will build 1,500 birthing rooms every day! Therefore, 1,500 people will die in a day, and 1,500 people will be born in a day."

After reading eight chapters, I have so many thoughts. I still don't quite understand why the protagonist committed suicide. Was he influenced by seeing the sun? What's the relationship between the protagonist's sister and him? Why are one named Suoh and the other Kuze? The important parts aren't properly developed, while there's a ton of unimportant inner monologues.

To get back to the point, take the part where the protagonist goes to the shrine. From chapters 50 to 60, that's ten chapters. How much plot did you advance? What characters did you develop? It just made the protagonist and Yuuma seem like such a nagging couple. I suspect you simply gave the AI ​​an outline and had it expand it into ten chapters.

It's pointless; they just keep repeating the same old lines and refuse to move on to the plot.

After reading a few chapters, the psychological descriptions and plot points are just like the AI ​​I play. Even the AI ​​can drive the plot faster than you.

💩, A bunch of meaningless nonsense and psychological descriptions, inexplicable and causing an abnormally strange rhythm, and extremely abrupt.

I initially thought the author used AI, which resulted in such a rambling and repetitive style, making it difficult to maintain a proper balance between detail and summary. But after browsing the comments today, I realized this is a recurring problem. In that case, it would have been better to simply use AI to streamline the text after writing it. AI has advanced to such an extent that the author doesn't even know how to use it? Or is it that they don't know how?

I don't know what the author is thinking. If there's another instance of Yoriichi Tsugikuni being so illogical, you should really consider whether you even have a proper outline. If you can't drive the plot forward and rely on constantly repeating nonsense to keep updating, treating updates as a burden, you'll probably give up writing altogether after a day of rest and letting go of the idea of…