Anime Crossover: I'm Making History

This book has a very serious flaw: it contains too much nonsense and inner thoughts. To be honest, we readers are here to see you, the author, write stories. Instead of looking at the author's inner thoughts when writing about the protagonist. What matters is the advancement of the story and the wonderful plot, not the psychological activities of the protagonist in the article. To put it bluntly, we readers don't actually care much about the psychological activities of the protagonist in the article. After all, this is just an online novel, not traditional literature. We can use large blocks of writing to describe the thoughts and feelings of the characters, but we don't have the patience to understand the characters' thoughts in detail. We readers prefer to watch the plot rather than the psychological activities of the protagonist.

Investigation report: "Number" - 592 Investigation target: "Complex: I'm Making History" - Male Protagonist - [Kushi Yuichi] Investigation Result: [Borrowed Corpse Resurrection] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on March 24, 2026

After thinking about the setting, the author can take a look Izanami's curse is: "My dear brother, because you behave like this, I will strangle a thousand of your countrymen to death every day!" Izanagi responded: "My dear sister, if you are like this, I will build thousands of five hundred delivery rooms every day!" Therefore, a thousand people must die in a day, and a thousand and five hundred people must be born in a day. Izanami is the lord of the underworld, and the appearance of the ghost king Muzan can be her revenge (perhaps also Tsukuyomi Ming, who broke with Amaterasu because of the killing of the god of food, Twelve Ghost Moons, Breath of the Moon) The meaning of the country is that Amaterasu gives power in order to maintain the order of life and death and its own Shinto orthodoxy. It is inheritance of land or inheritance (bushido), so the most likely combination of the Breath of the Sun is that the Tsukuni clan is a branch of the royal family (perhaps also the power of Susanoo, the Demon Slayer Corps, and the village where the Nichirin Sword is made are all named after steel or iron) The Usanyashiki (meaning delivery room) clan is the descendant of Tsukuyomi, which means calendar, and was later corroded by the underworld and cursed by the sun due to the appearance of Muzan. And protection (the strange thing is that a girl does not have to die when she marries and changes her surname at the age of thirteen, so there must be protection), thus stimulating the power of the moon god in the blood to obtain unstable predictions of the future and the support of the priest family (otherwise, why would a group of short-lived ghosts allow the priest family to marry?) The priest family is the blood and power of the gods who have been worshiped by the gods in the past, so they can neutralize the erosion of the underworld and the curse of the sun br> The blue Higan flower is the opposite of the red Higan flower. The red Higan flower is the flower of death, so the blue one is the opposite flower of life, the miracle flower of resurrection from the dead, so it can solve the shortcomings of ghosts The failure of the breathing method is because with the tragic death, the gods withdrew the power to maintain the extraordinary. As for why the transcendent disappears, it is because Liu Bowen cut the dragon vein and caused the second Jue Tian Di Tong.

After reading Chapter 8, I have a lot of things on my mind. I don't even understand why the protagonist committed suicide. He saw the sun and was affected by it? And what's the situation between the protagonist's sister and him? Why is one named Zhou Fang and the other Kuze? There is no main description that should be mainly described, and there are too many unimportant psychological activities.

Che Zhuluan talked about it in a roundabout way, let's just talk about the part where the protagonist goes to the shrine. Chapter 50 to 60, ten chapters. How much of the plot did you advance? What character was created? It only makes people think that the protagonist and Yuzhen's mother-in-law. I wonder if you simply gave AI an outline and asked AI to expand the number of words into ten chapters.

It's not interesting. Daluolu keeps talking about it, but he just doesn't push the plot forward.

After reading a few chapters, the psychological activities and plot descriptions are just like the AI ​​I play. AI can push plots faster than you

💩, A bunch of meaningless nonsense and psychological description, which is inexplicable and causes the rhythm to be extremely strange and abrupt.

I originally thought that the AI ​​used by the author was the only one that could write this kind of full story about the wheel, so I couldn't get it right in detail. As a result, I checked the comment area today and realized that this is an old problem. It is better to use AI to streamline the text after finishing writing. How far has AI developed? Does the author not even know how to use AI? Don't you know how to use it?

I don't know what the author is thinking. If something like "Jiguo Yuanyi" is unreasonable comes up again, you should consider whether you have an outline or a detailed outline. If you are unable to promote the plot, you have to keep repeating nonsense to deal with updates. If you treat updates as a burden, you will probably have a day off one day and let go of the idea of ​​hydrology, and then you will never want to write again. Unless the author thinks carefully about the story he wants to write, and reduces the nonsense part. If he wants to write nonsense, don't write it over and over again. Every few chapters, he writes Jiguoyuanyi. How awesome and inhuman it is. I'm tired of reading it even if you write it. Nowadays, I feel like I write whatever comes to mind, and there are not many words that come to my mind every day, so I can only fill them up with settings, explanations and mental activities.