After Ascension, I Connect to All Worlds

A good hand of cards was played badly. After reading and reviewing the book Genshin Impact for the second week, I even felt a little excited. The result told me that it was over. You don't know how to write a cool article, right Jiang Shikiri? If you keep writing this book or that book, you can write a hundred traditional fantasy books, and this kind of book will be ruined long ago.

Too watery! Narrate a point of view repeatedly! Even use two or three chapters to talk about it! ! There is nothing serious about the plot! After reading more than 40 chapters, there is no climax! Throughout the article, one point of view is repeatedly stated! (For example! Guo Jia's attitude towards people from other worlds is all about this from Chapter 1 to Chapter 5!) The appraisal result is useless! (Only represents my own opinion!)

If it sounds good, it sounds like a lot of talking to oneself, but if it sounds bad, it sounds like all kinds of water.

All in all, I want to watch a battle of wits, but not too boring.

Strategy and wit are the author's strengths But the text may need to be refined a little more Although the Genshin Impact book is more polished, it has a reputation for writing, so it doesn't matter But these original books are too watery in the early stages, so it is not easy to retain people The Genshin Impact book writes strategies in the direction of true logic. Very distinctive So it is easier to attract readers Compared to the same category, these recent original books are not that special Of course, it is understandable that Genshin Impact ended hastily After all, the original plot is finished, no matter how much it is done, there is no way to delay the completion of Fontaine. Even if it does survive, there will be no branch line for the next one.

The second episode of Genshin Impact. Really. Just subscribe and support it once it's released.

This is what the Dragon of Utopia does

The author is probably not good at writing fighting scenes or war scenes, and has been avoiding such descriptions.

Too much nonsense! Skipping after three or four chapters does not affect reading.

Author, this book you wrote is best not to be read by people named Kong.