Douluo Dalu: The AFK System, Spreading My Teachings to the World
斗罗：挂机系统，授法天下
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 880k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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247Chapters
2.8kRecommendations
5.1kFans
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After reading five chapters, I realized I haven't written a single thing clearly about myself; instead, I've written a huge amount of narration about the original plot...
This book gives me the feeling that it's telling a story rather than writing one.
There's too much narration, talking about various things from the original story, while the main character is described too little.
I feel that in several of your books, there is too much narration and explanation, and too little description of actual objects and events. For example, in this book, the protagonist is taken to kill soul beasts, and there are only a few sentences about it, followed by long passages of narration and explanation.
Ugh, all the writers of these Douluo Continent novels have one problem: they like to increase the intelligence of the Tang Dynasty and pile endless obstacles into the protagonist's path. Seriously, I didn't read this book to see endless obstacles crushing me; I came for the thrill!
This is so damn watery! It's like writing an outline and then expanding it with AI, rambling on and on, as if looking at the sun would explain the solar system, and taking a breath would explain the composition of air.
Not bad... It's been almost a hundred pages, and it still feels like there's absolutely no content. Impressive. The protagonist has been incredibly stupid and constantly courting death from the start, yet he's self-righteous and inexplicably arrogant. He doesn't even know how to use his cheat codes. To write something like this... Truly talented.
This is rubbish, seriously. Is the protagonist just bored, or is he playing with his life? He's risking his life to keep Xiao Wu from being exposed. Please, 100,000 years! Pigs have lived for that long, they wouldn't be stupid. In that time, how many people have they killed, how many beasts have they eaten? Their hearts are utterly cold.
I don't even know how to comment anymore. At first, they said they were going to steal Tang San's godhood, and now they're saying I'm not aligned with the God Realm and I want to be a traitor. 🤔
Have you considered creating a group for Chen's book? I feel like your writing is getting worse and worse. That "Real World" fanfiction was truly the best Genshin Impact fanfiction I've ever read.
After reading it, I had a headache and the overall impression was mediocre. We found a small amount of plot within the book's extensive analysis and settings; the protagonist and the settings are unimportant, the analysis is the most important.