My Prince of Tennis Has a Proficiency System

The thought of Konomi Tsuyoshi giving 5-year-old Ryoma a power-up, and the search system and power-suppression plots that Prince of Tennis fanfiction authors give their protagonists, makes me laugh.

Soul-swapping is a minor flaw in fanfiction these days, but since this is a Prince of Tennis fanfiction and I don't really need women, I can tolerate it. But author, what's with constantly mentioning the original owner? It's so annoying to read about the original owner, you know?

Bro, is this some kind of grind-obsessed system? Becoming a scroll king means your strength will reach world-class level in no time! After all, you can see your own strength stats; how could you not grind like crazy? Sleeping six hours a day would be too much of a waste.

But there's something really bothering me, and I just have to say it. Couldn't the main character just cut that awful side-swept fringe? Every time, they have to emphasize "that boy with long, black fringe covering his eyes." Seriously, what's the point of those side-swept bangs besides obstructing vision? It's been over 40 chapters, and the protagonist still won't cut them off. What, is the protagonist also Uchiha Sasuke?

If we're talking about the best fanfiction of The Prince of Tennis, it has to be "The Prince of Tennis: Starting with Breathing Techniques." It's been finished for several years now, and I've reread it several times. It's a pity that the author got so engrossed in reading novels that he stopped writing new ones.

There's too much buildup; I'm so tired of it that I want to give up. After reading The Prince of Tennis: Breathing Techniques, this kind of writing feels like it's dragging on and on, completely lacking substance.

It's not that the coach is creating training points or that the training plan is flawed; it's just that the panel displays the teammates' improvements, right? I don't know if the author is even thinking straight.

I need to correct you on one point. The zero-style serve doesn't bounce. Even if you manage to return the ball to your opponent's court, you'll still be penalized for the loss because you violated the rule first. You can't hit the ball before it bounces. Only serves like Atobe's, which bounce slightly after repeated use, can be returned.

It was alright at first, but after you become the department head, the training panel becomes boring. Even random people can become Tezuka after your training. Sigh, it's pointless, I'm leaving.

The main character doesn't even have this, so you can develop it in a supporting character; that's enough.